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Xiairo [2013-05-15 16:07:51 +0000 UTC]
WhooplatecommentikmoetmndevationsnietlatenliggenstouteAmber//facedesk
Anyways, dit ziet er zo leuk uuiittttttttt ;v;
Elke art whooooop > w <
Dit is laat maar ach: ik heb je stream gemist ik wou kijkeeennnnnn;;;;;;
Volgende keer beter dan... Ohwell.
Maar echt zeer cool, en die glow is echt nice ovo
En ik vind die kettingen echt nice gedaan c:
Good job Tonnie : D
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Ielemientje In reply to Xiairo [2013-05-15 20:59:23 +0000 UTC]
Dankjewelllll Amberkinddd OAO
Haahaaha ik spam regelmatig streams maar die staan vooral opfacebook;;; NOG EEN REDEN VOOR JOU OM EEN GEZICHTSBOEK TE MAKEN
Dankjewelll chickkk<33
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World-Inside-Me [2013-03-19 19:17:57 +0000 UTC]
Here is your requested critique from ~
Positives
> First of all, the character looks really amazing, I love how you've drawn the pose and expression, especially with that evil aura about him.
> The details on this are just stunning as well. The chains looks really great, and the ragged shorts, hair and clothing look brilliant.
> The colouring is also really superb~~ The way you've added the turquoise glow and added a touch of this glow in the lighting on the character really connects them all together and looks amazing. As well as this, the toning on the coat, boots and rest of the clothing, plus the blood effect, look really spectacular.
Improvements:
> I do believe that perhaps this character's legs are a little too short compared to the length of the body. There is also something strange with the join in the bent arm - the clothing wouldn't cut around it like this, it would just crease where it goes into the elbow.
> The one other thing I would suggest, is using references when drawing the boots, as well as to add a few more creases to the clothing. I struggle with shoes so much myself, and adding creases so they look right in clothing can be hard, but I believe that using references will help you to improve on the outfit.
I hope this is useful for you~ You've done a wonderful job here~!
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Ielemientje In reply to World-Inside-Me [2013-03-21 17:18:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!8D I think you are absolutely right about creases and the boots; I just kinda came up with it on a whim , which wasn't really the smartest thing to do ;D I think I forgot to remove a line around the arm;; oops hahahahaha imsuchanidiot
Thank you! this is very useful , I think I can work with this well!;D
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MelanieMushroom [2013-03-13 21:38:35 +0000 UTC]
Aaaah het is echt zo goed ;u; Sowieso straalt de epic-ness er van af en die kleuren JESUZ KRAAISSTTTT
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Ielemientje In reply to venort [2013-03-13 12:24:30 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thank you!<3 Thanks for the fav too ;D
And yeah I dunno what it is with me and blood...it turned out surprisingly well xD I actually dislike how I coloured the chains in the background, especailly on the left...but changing it looked weird, so I kept it like this xD
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