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Adaggio's last memories of his older brother. Back to reality.Related content
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I really, really love this page! The emotion is so well expressed. The viewer gets pulls into the story immediately
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Bawww Rattamanthus ;n; I love the expressiveness. It's apparent that you have a really good grasp on their facial structure. But I kind of already know this from seeing all of your other animal drawings xD
I only have one little thing to suggest. It looks great as it is, but in the last pannel, it starts at the present time, and than goes back to the flashback memories on the right. Since the comic is read from left to right, it appears to break the flow a little bit. However, I assume you put the memory Adaggio on the right side to show his bleeding scar.
Looks great though! Keep up the awesome work C:
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Yeah that's what I was thinking too. I assume since it's just one panel, people will understand it's like the memory being faded out. Thanks for the suggestion <3
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I love the emotion in this one, you can really sort of 'feel' the pain Adaggio's going through. Great job! The lighting is stunning, and the last panel really shows the change from past to present!
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