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|| All || -- << Previous Page -- Next Page >>I think I took Hugh's ADHD and gave it to Curtis. owo;
Soyeah. Curtis. I have some plans for this guy~<3. Never actually finished his entire sidequest (50+ phonecalls areyoukiddingme fffffff-- I think I'm stuck at 13 orwhat.), but I like him
. Moving him forward a bit, because the actual thing goes waaaaay far into post-game, and this story don't have time for post-game.Also bird. I think I managed to make it look like a bird o3o Not so much like a Pidove anymore, buthey, it's a bird~<3
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Is it really? I've always pronounced it as ex-transceiver in my head xD Might be a bit of language barrier there.. It also took me half a year to get used to "Xenia" (from GrandChase) being pronounced as "Zenia" and not "Ksenia".. X is just really weird to me in English xD
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i just reliezed that the pokemon naming sound a lot like gen 1 now
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Funny, I think I might use the "capture a pokemon that tried to kill us" concept once I finish advanced adventures.
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Ohgod I had the worst version of this in my current SoulSilver Nuzlocke. First encounter Stantler went and killed my starter She's a friggin monster on my team now though, beating up everyone left and right, but my poor Bayleef ;w; ;;
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Ummm, I wasn't aware you had another one.
But sheeeeesh, thats rough.
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I did plenty of Nuz's, but this is the only comic I have~
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curtis? who's he? im in castelia city in B2. I would know if heard of this guy... is he an original for the comic?
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(Sorry, I'll reply to your other comments later, I gotta head off in a bit. Just wanted to clear this one up quicklybeforeIforgett~)
I moved that sub-plot a bit. The Curtis-sidequest is an item you can find in Nimbasa City (the area where the gym is, then somewhere on a southern patch of grass), but if I wait for Nimbasa to introduce the idea of Curtis to this comic, I'll have to drag the story like hell to make it work~ You can find his page on bulbapedia here (contains spoilers though..~)
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ahhhh i see. nimbasa ehh, all the cool stuff happens there. (no probs take ur time)
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Hugh never stays mad for long? Seems like a slight personality difference from canon.
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Somehow, somewhere during writing, my Hugh became an introvert... I don't know how I did it.. but it happened.
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I like your Hugh better than canon Hugh. I couldn't relate much to canon Hugh at all.
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you're showing this synch concept very well and building up it's potential with good paneling and fitting body language, and yes, you indeed make it look like a bird very well
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Actually, I think you can still do the side quest thing in Nimbassa.
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Mh, how do you mean?
I decided to move it forward because I didn't want to rush this little sidestory 
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True. Anyway, love your nuzlocke so far!
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hey! now that i notice, i dont know why i didnt notice before
How do you have xtranscerver now!?!?!?!?!
like isnt that in the feris wheel thing, and that is like 3 gym later and stuff
and is that a bridge!?!?
like what is happening.... or wait this isnt following the black 2 "order" thing
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I moved Curtis forward a bit lot, because his story goes waaaay far into post-game, and this story ends before that. If I wanted to do anything interesting with Curtis I had to introduce him a bit earlier~ We'll actually be meeting him face to face in Nimbasa instead~
The "bridge" is supposed to be this part in Virbank City~
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Ohhhh!! ok ok
now i understand! awesome!
ahh, ok, that bridge thing ok, got it
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can't wait for the next one!! you're pretty good drawing comics
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you're welcome OwO 
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New Capture, and shes feeling more of her Pokemon friend's pain wouldn't that get dangerous. ... Its a great update
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I like your bird design. It's less of a derpy pidgeon and more of a badass hawk.
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Things are definitely getting interesting! 
I wonder, what will be the Pidove's name after they found her again? (and is it a she, really? how can people tell in this case??)
Hm... I'm sorry if I sound annoying, but you seemed to miss the straps for her top in two of the panels. Wouldn't it be easier to somply make her use another top without that? ^^'
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I'll definitely be finishing that sidequest on my other playthrough though~<3
It is a she, yeah~ I'm not entirely sure how they can tell already (probably the attitude) 
Now that you mention it, I did miss them. Probably forgot to lineart it xD; They kind of serve a purpose though (mainly to make her arms not seem as empty, if that makes any sense
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I got to meet him~! I'm at the 10th to 11th call, methinks. And even though the game said I 'reregistered' Curtis his name doesn't appear on my Xtransciever! T-T Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...
Patricia the Pidove, hm...? Lots of girls together. XD Wonder how you'll develop their relationship. It begs to be interesting~!
Oh, ok. You could add a bracelet and such, but then you'd risk forgetting them too. 
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Ahh, I know right D; Apparently he can't always be reached, and I really don't know how to trigger that stuff ;-; I had his name appear once, and then it vanished again QQ
Ohyeah, I start off with almost a full team of females, and end the game with nearly none xD;; Hugh though, will actually only have females on his team~ Which was not intentional. It just happened. 
I have a pretty decent idea of what I'll do for next chapter I think 
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Maybe if we try to call him in those places listed about receiving calls from him... .-. Hm, gotta try that later.
Hugh's team is all fem? hmmmmm, I'm sensing a Harem... 8) Naughty Hugh!!
That is always something, know what you DON'T want. XD I don't mind strip scenes. After all they happen IRL at one point or three during the day.
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There's probably a walkthrough or something somewhere on the internet... mh D:
Mmmmmmh, that's probably the main reason I'll eventually be drawing gijinka versions of the Pokemon~<3
You do stripteases three times a day? o.o Where do you live, I'm moving overr~~~
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well, thanks to Bulbapedia I know where to go to RECEIVE calls from him, but to do them... *shrugs* Guess it'll have to be trial and error.
Ooh, do please these drawings if you have the time! Your style will be perfect for funny/sexy gijinkas with Hugh!
If you count the time when you change clothes after waking up, then the change after a shower, AND the changing to nightclothes, there you have at least three. If it's summer, then you take at least two to three showers a day (not counting swimming pool outings) and THEN you have more strip scenes for you.
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/clings to Curtis - WHY DON'T YOU WANT USSSSS? ;A; ;;
Hahah, well it will be a while til he will have his full team (Driftveil QQ), but he gets his 2nd teammate next chapter, maybe Ill draw something for it then~<3
Awwwh, I was hoping for something more public >: Well I can go creep around I guess.. owo
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I always see characters that want to run away from their owners, but never any that actually do xD
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I have a few ideas for her~ But she'll have to dislike Yume for it, so I figured she'd not want to stay so easily either
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Oh, awesome!!
Do it -- make more drama and disliking xD
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