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Ehg.
I have a page that's longer than this , but that one wasn't nearly as killing as this. Fuck the amount of panels in this thing, fuck the amount of people and Pokemon per panel and fuck the amount of dialogue. Turns out 2 Word-pages of script translate to 11 Word-pages worth of text balloons. Not doing that again.
Nhg. I've been staring at this page for a month now, I don't even know what's going on anymore.
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Anyway.
The reason Nate's questioning Yume about things that really aren't any of his business is because someone has to, and Hugh gave up. So here's how Yume deals with her problems; she doesn't
I chose to change Fly into a more special-like ability, kinda similar to how the game handles it (turning the sprites to spheres), because it's a lot easier for me to work with, considering the main use for Fly in this comic will be to transport unconscious people (spoileralert).
"Devine quoi" is French for "Guess what". As Yume mentioned in page 22 , Nate decided to learn French too, since Hugh was forced to by his parents. And Nate loves annoying Yume with it.Β No worries if you don't speak French, Yume doesn't either~<3
I think that's all.. I hope that's all, cause I'm not touching this page anymore anytime ever :'D
I'll clean out my inbox tomorrow, I promise~
Pokemon Β© Nintendo
Thanks to and for proofreading~<3
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Comments: 73
Oh wait I just realised... You speak dutch... I could speak dutch now but I feel more comfy speaking english
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Excellent. We needed a flygon for this run, since it's a powerhouse the likes the gods have yet to see.Β
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Milow, Lulu and Nick got absolutely adorable!
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Flynn is so cute! I think he just became my favorite Pokemon. This is a great page and I'm curious to see what will happen to Yume and Hugh.
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Awh, I'm glad you like him~<3 
Mmmh, Yume might just continue to have some fun..~
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I love the way you drew Togekiss! One of my most fav pokemon and it looks great! Keep it up!
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Hahah, I like birdfairies a lot better like this~<3
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ohohoh things between them are getting intense (plus I'm really curious to know how Yume and Hugh will end up)
great job!
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Quite intense~ (Oho it will end alright..~<3)
Thanks
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nawww this page was kinda awesome 8D
I really love how you draw pokemon so cute >3<
and nawww poor yume... xD okay i dont know french either. haha xD
i love the relationship she and nate seem to have c:
and nawww... yumeee... you cant just... handle your problems like that xD but well...
it seems to be very comfy haha xDDD
awesome page >3π: 0 β©: 1
Nahw thank you very much~<3
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Β The way you draw pokemon is adorable. I love that little trapinch
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awesome page i can tell that took a long while too make =3
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Dacht dat je was gestopt :'D
Ahaha yume is een bitch
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Neeman, gewoon bakken met megapagina's :'D
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Well then, I didn't know there relationship or whatever it is was was on quite that level.
I like this Nate fellow. He's a pretty good friend to both Yume and Hugh from what I can tell. You make them deal with their problems bud, before something inevitable bad and dramatic happens which I'm sure it will.
I'm not entirely sure why, but I kind of like Patricia and her attitude.
Anyway, kudos to you, I think Flynn is probably the most adorable this in this comic and I've always hated trapinch's design. I legitimately had a nightmare about one once. But he's just to cute not to love.
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It's complicated<3
Glad you like them so far
What kind of dramatic event is this you speak of~?<3
Sorry for taking so long to reply
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I love this nuzlocke!Β Your art has improved so much since you started it, and now I'm just marveling at the expressions and the colors and the movement, even in static poses.Β Plus I really love the unique way you've interpreted the characters, and the relationships between them.Β
Basically you're awesome and I'm so happy when you update this comic! <3
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Awh, thank you so much~<3
Super happy you're enjoying this~<3 
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enjoy the drama and different approach to the whole relationship with huge, and love how adorable you draw trapinch, nice to see them not drawn with the super angular chain chomp like mouth for a change
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Hahah, thank you very much~<3
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no problem, and drama be fun yup yup :3
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Why was I giggling through these whole thing?
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Because you know you love Nate~<3
Hahah, but I'm glad I managed to make you smile
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Hugh is a tattletale? Looks like someones JEALOUS. (reffering to...that scene on the liner)
Togekiss: How it stays adowable is a scientific mystery.
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Not so much a tattletale as a confused guy that really needs someone sane to talk to I'd say~
Jealous? Mmh...
Togekiss can totally be the most adorabru things in the universe~ Just have to add the right amount of desu<3
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True, considering the reason why he set off there in the first place.
Yeah, I'll keep a watch...
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So much standing and talking, I'm really glad you survived drawing this page oh god ;w;
It turned out great! The layout and distribution of the dialogue makes it pleasant to read and easy to absorb all the information, and the conversation flows naturally. I like all of this, yesssss <3
'That was like two months ago or so' - Wow what an eternity, EVERYONE IS CLEARLY OVER IT hahahaha
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I hate exposition pages like this. They're the WORST to draw
I'm super glad you like it though~<3 Makes it all worth it ;w;
Ahah, yesssss~<3 Especially Yume.
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I know right?
You can tell by her totally non-dramatic reaction!
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Awww, I really like Nate already. He seems like a great friend.
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He's the best, Yume doesn't deserve him~
Hahah, but thanks~<3 
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Don't go praising her for this stuff D: You might give her a reason to continue pulling this crap~
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Isn't that a good thing? *brick to the face*
I'm quite the creep. ;D
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Well, I guess you're right anyway..
Yume, please continue your business~
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How on earth has Sniffy not evolved yet?
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