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Redoing the first chapter to iron out a couple plotholes~ Starting with the first 3 pages, the other 2 will be done at a later time. (For a little more info, refer to this journal ).

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Annnd I officially retconned the only page in which Yume and Hugh weren't arguing into them doing exactly that.. Sigh..

This page was however the main reason I had to redo this chapter. Yume went from "... No?" to "Hell no.", Hugh leaving is actually a big friggin deal and Mani no longer gets knocked out~ That last one was probably the biggest plothole in this entire thing :'D I did want to keep the little "battle" between Sniffy and Mani, since it's the closest thing to any kind of rival battle in this comic.. For semi-obvious reasons later on.. (Sync hurts).

OH.
And Sniffy actually introduces himself.
Dang, that lack of introduction/interaction bugged me for ages xD

Pokemon © Nintendo

Major thanks to for all his help with these pages~<3
Thanks to and for proofreading as well~

Description
|| All || -- << Previous Page -- Next Page >>
Old version of this page can be found here .

----

Redoing the first chapter to iron out a couple plotholes~ Starting with the first 3 pages, the other 2 will be done at a later time. (For a little more info, refer to this journal ).

----

Annnd I officially retconned the only page in which Yume and Hugh weren't arguing into them doing exactly that.. Sigh..

This page was however the main reason I had to redo this chapter. Yume went from "... No?" to "Hell no.", Hugh leaving is actually a big friggin deal and Mani no longer gets knocked out~ That last one was probably the biggest plothole in this entire thing :'D I did want to keep the little "battle" between Sniffy and Mani, since it's the closest thing to any kind of rival battle in this comic.. For semi-obvious reasons later on.. (Sync hurts).

OH.
And Sniffy actually introduces himself.
Dang, that lack of introduction/interaction bugged me for ages xD

Pokemon © Nintendo

Major thanks to for all his help with these pages~<3
Thanks to and for proofreading as well~