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Tepig learn Rollout at level 21. So yeah, Mani is horribly overleveled, but no, she can't do shit against these guys~
Also, anyone remember that explanation I promised in Virbank City? Guess where that Pokecenter is~!Little thing I'd like to add (will partly be explained next page soon(tm), but I figured Mani's case specifically might not be directly obvious..);
Why is Mani so hellbent on getting orders?; Pokemon can fight half-decently without orders (they do it all the time in the wild), but it's not going to compare to being "coached" by a trainer. Thing is, Mani was "hatched in captivity". She's always had a trainer, so she simply never learned to think for herself in these cases.
On that same note. How many people do you count that actually give orders this page~? /spoilers
NEXT PAGE. Lots of arguing explanations~<3
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Thanks to and for proofreading~
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Yesss, you caught that<3
Sync gets a little vague at times, but I hope it's clear enough to follow 
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This is just the warm up round <3
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O_O intense last few pages!
sync huh? it was hinted when lenny died ;-;, "it was like i could feel her death" (somewhere along the lines).
quick Q: are you re-doing all of these pages? or the one you've specifically stated like 4 & 5?
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You caught that, that makes me so super happy~<3
Not currently planning on redoing more than the first chapter, I might change my mind later, but it's not very likely. It would take a lot of time to redo the 2nd chapter, and, yeah, the art is pretty old and inconsistent with the newer pages, but if that's the worst that's wrong with it, I think I'd rather put my time in making new pages
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2. 2 people gave orders on this page.
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Hugh was the only one actually~
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Hugh? Well, suddenly the plot deepens.
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Oh. I see. I love how you adding the "sync". It's like the trainer is synced to their Pokemon, so if their Pokemon die, they die too? Hence, that female Team Plasma was asking that question....
Interesting. 
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Glad you picked up on that, hahah 
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Oh gosh! I'M glad I picked up your Nuzlocke! It's really interesting... (I had a BIG question on Hugh/Yume's relationship in one of the pages... if you can find my comment! xD) lolz
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ah, seems like you're brewing up a good addition to your plot, nice, and your battles flow quite well with good paneling, perspectives, and nice move effects. the houndoom catching the tepig by the tail during rollout was particularly funny.
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I'm glad it is owo;;
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so much interesting *-*
and that luxio *-* I love how you drew her\him xD
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Thank you~<3
I think that Luxio got a personality somewhere half-way this page xD;
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great perspectives on this page!! love it!
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Thank you very much~<3
Hahah, all these panels were just forcing me to draw them with so much perspective, I might've overdone it a bit XD;;
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you're very welcome
I actually like it O3O
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woah sync!
that would be a useful super power!
why would it still be a tepig if it is level 21??
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Useful, dangerous, something like that~
Mani didn't want to evolve (she'll mention it somewhere next chapter~) because I asolutely hate Pignite and Emboarbecause she thinks the evolutions make her look fat.
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Uh oh, so Yume experiences the same pain as her pokemon when they're injured in battle. That's not good. What happens if her team is wiped out?
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Will mostly be explained next page~ 
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Woooho she feel the pain of the pokΓ©mon o.O this is getting more and more interesting 
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Thank you~<3
Yeah, that's basically what's going on
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Exposition pages are always fun. I sense a deviation from the traditional plot.
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I hate doing dialogues in comics though 
I guess I'll be changing a lot, yeah
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My, those are some foul-mouthed pokΓ©mon Hugh's got there
Very nice work, as always~
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Well yeah, seeing as he's the one that raised her..
Thankyou~
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Thanks~<3
I should have a new page in about a week
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your welcome =3
cool can't wait.
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synch synch... i may be stupid... i dont get it quite yet xD
but i guess its going to be interesting owo
im glad nobody died... ;_;
and those plasma grunts had great pokemon o.o
... i love all three of them xDDD <- just the pokemon xD not specific those three
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No worries, Sync will be explained in detail next page~
I love drawing canines/felines~<3 They make for a lot more interesting battles too than a bunch of Patrat and Lillipup
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now it will take me a while to understand this new sync thing
and why did you have to bring up poor lenny again? i shall destroy you, neo team plasma!
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It will all be explained next page
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dat makes so much more sense now!
thanks
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interesting idea with the synch. another great strip!
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i like that scar in Val's head, will she keep it!?!?!?!
and wouldnt technically sniffy also be hatch and stuff, and trained by prof juniper... or maybe bianca?
since well they are starter pokemon, i remember watching in the anime that the prof hatch them at the same time and stuff,
and lol those are some epic smooth roll that mani does
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