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Neutral9999 [2016-01-29 05:26:09 +0000 UTC]
I hate this ending there's nothing good about any of this sadness
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Mad-Plot-Bunny In reply to Neutral9999 [2017-11-09 16:40:31 +0000 UTC]
I agree. What's the point of the lesson if it's meant to be tragic expect synchs completely not worth it? They only won because a Pokemon never had a strong 'bond' to begin with? It was a good story just..Β what was the point and did any come out of this experience?
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Velink [2016-01-28 16:43:51 +0000 UTC]
aww
those are quite a lot of losses
Β BW2 is truly the hardest to nuzlocke IMO
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stormy500 [2015-12-10 00:33:46 +0000 UTC]
awesome picture love it
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stormy500 In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-19 03:38:53 +0000 UTC]
your welocme
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darkvslight346 [2015-12-03 01:04:58 +0000 UTC]
so almost every one we knew and loved in the comic is dead except for yumi and now she will have to live with survivors guilt. There aren't enough curse words in the english language to fully describe how upset i am. I am a bit upset to see this story end though, i respect your choice to end it.
You know if you still want to do something with this story can i propose something to you? If you allow me to I can try and find the time to write out a brief novelization of your story maybe a couple of chapters like 20 ish or so and then send it to you to publish. I'm offering because it might help me get out of my 6 month writers block and I really want to see a more fleshed out ending to this.
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darkvslight346 In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-04 17:45:23 +0000 UTC]
well thanks and i'm thinking of what to write for this, i may have an idea you see i have my own story on pokemon *it's based off my first omega ruby run* and once i finish the main stroy and the delta quest *which might take a long time* i was going to do something with hoopa and his ability to open holes in dimensions. When that time comes i could easily add yume into it, and if you like the story and her role i can giver her a bigger part
also for now i can try and write an epilogue of sorts for you, kind of a 2 or 3 year time skip, if you give me details i can easily write it outΒ
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Neutral9999 In reply to Iiyume [2016-01-29 05:29:53 +0000 UTC]
so the sadness never ends
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Mel-W-H In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-13 11:39:32 +0000 UTC]
I'm so curious..., how does she die? D:
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Iiyume In reply to Mel-W-H [2015-12-13 17:24:52 +0000 UTC]
Mmmhn, it's a bit of a long story.. I'd have to explain most of Kyra 's story for that (she would be the protagonist of that sequel), and it really doesn't sound too good in a summary. But she basically dies because of Kyra
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darkvslight346 In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-04 19:28:43 +0000 UTC]
ok then i guess i would need to add yume atleast 2 months after the story ended considering she diesΒ
Well i guess i might skip on the epilogue though considering death is not really my forte, but i'll try and do something. Also now you got me curious if you have the time can i ask you about the sequel to black out, what was it going to be about? If you dont want to tell me thats fine but now i really want to knowΒ
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Iiyume In reply to darkvslight346 [2015-12-04 21:50:22 +0000 UTC]
It's about this girl . Some chick with a Sync and an attitude that was trained to be an assassin by a Fennekin. They'd be cleaning up leftover Team Plasma grunts that still had Syncs and were hiding out in Kalos.
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darkvslight346 In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-04 22:27:24 +0000 UTC]
oh nice she looks pretty cool, also she was trained by a fennekin? I am kind of happy about that, i mean i always knew those foxy jackasses were evilΒ
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Iristhehedgie [2015-11-30 19:34:38 +0000 UTC]
That's all heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time.
I love it.
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Exekiella [2015-11-30 11:10:41 +0000 UTC]
Noooo Hugh... ;;
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Iiyume In reply to Exekiella [2015-12-01 16:40:11 +0000 UTC]
msorry3 ;;
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Gingine [2015-11-30 06:20:30 +0000 UTC]
nooooooooooo i'm crying no
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Gingine In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-02 05:48:29 +0000 UTC]
^^
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ToshiroHitsugaya01 [2015-11-30 05:57:31 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I kinda expected a lot of death...but man. Though I sort of was assuming that Hugh was going to die, I was also hoping that he wouldn't. ^^' I'm very impressed by your work with this series...even unfinished it has to be one of the best I have ever seen anywhere. You had so much thought placed in everything, it truly felt like seeing the world of Pokemon come to life. So I congratulate you one this and wish you the best of luck on anything and everything you decide to do from here.
There are a few things I would like to know; what sort of interaction was Yume going to have with N? Was Hilda going to appear again? What would have been her role? Also, as I'm sure many others will ask, what was going to be the end?
Oh...and you can answer this last one directly to me if you want so no one will get their hopes up/smashed, but are you thinking of doing other Nuzlocke comics? In the future of course...I don't think anyone would or even should expect such a thing any time soon after what a headache this one gave you.
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Iiyume In reply to ToshiroHitsugaya01 [2015-11-30 15:20:26 +0000 UTC]
Awh, thank you so much I'm glad you still enjoyed it~
At the Nimbasa gym they'd meet Hilbert, who would tell them that Hilda was dead and he was convinced that N was the one that killed her. When his goal seems to be to find N now that he heard Team Plasma has returned, and make him pay for what he did, Kiki refuses to come back home with him and stays with Hugh instead to help him fight Team Plasma (and hopefully find N before Hilbert does).
N meanwhile has been hiding after Hilda's death that he's been wrongfully accused for, but stayed in contact with Elesa. When Elesa finds out that Yume is the girl with the Sync that Juniper has been looking for, she first informs N (page 29 ) and they come up with a plan to guide Yume into the right direction and have her learn to use her Sync properly so she would actually be strong enough to take down Team Plasma (since the League isn't in a position to do anything about a Team Plasma that, in the eyes of many of the people, still hasn't done anything wrong). The plan involves getting Zed, his Zorua, on her team so he can teach her properly and keep an eye on her, and a backup plan where N will be disguised as Curtis (where Zed or Zoey will cast Illusion on him) when he needs to talk to her directly.
Hilbert eventually learns that N is not the one who killed his sister (Ghetsis is), and finally decides to help the group fight Team Plasma. N and Zekrom later help out with their fight against Ghetsis and BlackKyurem. (Game timeline-wise, Ghetsis is taken down during the last fight against Team Plasma, while Colress replaces the Elite 4)
The end is back in Aspertia City. Hilbert hears that he's allowed to transfer his job to Kanto (he originally was a researcher for Juniper) so he can work with Nate, as they've proven to work quite well together (and Nate really doesn't want to be alone after Hugh's death). Nate asks a very sad Yume to come with them to Kanto as well, since Daisy runs some kind of care place that could help her out, and it would probably be better for her not to stay in a place where she's constantly reminded of Hugh. She doesn't seem too keen of leaving the place where she's lived with him all her life, but Hilbert, knowing what it's like to lose someone that close to you, convinces her it'll get better, and she eventually agrees.
I don't currently have any plans to do another Nuzlocke comic.. If I do another comic it's going to be something short, and (serious story) Nuzlockes by nature are reallyreally long. I do have another story for a Nuzlocke in my head, that would be a sequel to BlackOut (and is very canon to me, as it wraps up this story very nicely). Takes place roughly 6 years later in Kalos, with Kyra as the protagonist. But I will not be drawing that one for obvious reasons.
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dia-phantom [2015-11-30 04:39:45 +0000 UTC]
just tearing out our hearts I see ;;;;; beautiful piece!
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Gecko-Comics [2015-11-30 00:49:06 +0000 UTC]
Wait....is HUGH dead?! 0-o
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Gecko-Comics In reply to Iiyume [2015-11-30 16:33:25 +0000 UTC]
how does he die?
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Iiyume In reply to Gecko-Comics [2015-11-30 16:57:03 +0000 UTC]
There's a summary for it in the description up there ^
In short, Colress has a Haxorus smash him into a pillar.
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Gecko-Comics In reply to Iiyume [2015-11-30 17:52:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh woops, I missed that. Poor Hugh X(
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