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Description Happyhappy funtimes.

Includes Hugh and Nate's teams, because they're as relevant to this story as Yume is~ Would've included Hilbert (Hilda's twinbrother) as well, but since he hadn't been introduced yet, it would've mostly been confusing.. and this thing is full enough as it is. He will be mentioned in the death recaps below though.
Does also not include Pierrotte, the Swanna and Lass, the Dewgong. They were captures in the game, both of which died (one right before the Elite 4, the other during the Elite 4), but to include them in the comic I'd have to jump through so many hoops and it would just made the comic even longer, while their characters would still be very lacking. Their points of death were also poorly timed for the comic and moving them around would've caused even more problems, so they were eventually cut.


Death recap below~

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Includes Lenny, the Sweaddle and Kelly, the Scraggy for completion's sake. They died on page 8 and page 25 respectively.

Patricia, the Unfezant is our first survivor. In game she was permanently boxed in Driftveil. In the comic Yume decides to give her to Hugh there, as Patricia seems to hate him a lot less, and he could really use a Fly-er at that point, as they split up again.

Sniffy, the Snivy and Joey, the Rattata:
In Driftveil, after Yume receives Zed (N's Zorua), she decides to go out and train with her Sync with his help. Zed tries to explain to Yume how she would use a FocusedSync properly (something Kiki showed her before in Nimbasa). It turns out that the place they chose to train is disturbing a group of wild Marill, that, when Yume doesn't leave when they ask her to, decide to attack her. When Joey takes a bad cut, Yume panics, and through the FocusedSync she was testing out, causes Sniffy to attack and accidentally kill one of the Marill. The shock snaps the both of them out of the FocusedSync, but it enrages the other Marill into unleashing their power onto Sniffy, killing him and knocking out Yume. The impact through the Sync kills the already weakened Joey as well. Paper (the Crobat), having a rather weak Sync with Yume, manages to withstand the initial impact and stay concious. She's able to Fly Yume to a hospital.

Val, the Watchog:
After recovering and mourning Sniffy and Joey's deaths, Yume chooses to continue to try and get stronger by taking on the Driftveil gym. She asks Val to help fight one more time. Val accepts and resolves to fight like Sniffy would have. Gymbattles should be a risk-free experience, at least as long as everybody plays by the rules. During the battle, Clay's Sandslash goes into a rage when he sees that Yume is one of those filthy Sync-users. His understanding of a Sync is that it takes away the will of the Pokemon and they are forced to fight by her whims, so he tries to attack Yume instead. Val protects Yume from the Sandslash's attack, but it costs her her life. Yume snaps and has Flynn, through her Sync, kill the Sandslash in return.

Lulu, the Lucario:
Colress' Espeon managed to track down where Nate went to after he split up from Yume and Hugh. Colress' plans require Yume and Hugh alive for a little while, but after he gets into a fight with Ghetsis, who wants something, anything done about these kids, right now, Colress decides to pay Nate a visit. When he manages to lure him away from the open and faces him, he very quickly discovers that Nate doesn't have a Sync at all. Great, then he won't even have to use his own Pokemon! All he has to do is use his regular ForcedSync on Nate's Pokemon instead, who will have nothing to stop him from doing so. He takes control of Nick (the Arcanine) and Lulu and turns them on Nate, who has no defense against his Pokemon. When Colress shifts most of his focus to Lulu, Nick manages to snap out of the Sync and is forced to take out Lulu before he kills the, by now knocked out Nate. Colress takes Nick with him back to HQ for his troubles. Nate is taken to the hospital when Hilbert finds him. Nick is handed down to one of the grunts in Team Plasma, of whom Yume eventually manages to steal him back.

Mani, the Tepig:
Yume thinks she's finally figured out where to find the Team Plasma HQ (and by extension, Spot, the Purrloin of Hugh's little sister), and drags Hugh with her in a rush to leave Nate and Hilbert behind as they'd only try to talk sense into them anyway. Hugh stops her and finally demands she talk to him normally, as he can't even take Mani out of her Pokeball anymore around Yume because of their SharedSync. Yume doesn't know how to and falls silent. Kiki and Zed convince Hugh to let Mani out of her ball anyway. They finally discover they can communicate through their SharedSync; through emotions instead of words. It allows Yume to show Hugh what she's so scared of and why she's been avoiding him the way she has been, and in return it allows Hugh to calm her fears, so she's finally willing to fully open up to him, which in turn makes Mani's Sync make her feel like she can put the world on fire.
With their stronger Syncs they are determined to take down Team Plasma and get Spot back. However they appear to have been lured into a trap by the grunts. The grunts finally have permission to dispose of the two, as Colress has gotten all from them he needed. Hugh and Yume are actually strong enough to take the grunts on this time however, and Yume manages to take down the smaller two with Flynn. The smarter one of the grunts realises they don't match their strength anymore, and he tries to distract Hugh - succesfully. He manages to catch his attention long enough for Mani to hesitate when the Weavile dashes at her and takes her out.
Hugh and Yume fall unconscious, heavily injured, but thanks to Mani being able to partly block out her Sync before she got hit, still alive. Nate and Hilbert figured out where they ran off to just in time to stop the last standing grunt to finish his work. They take out the grunt and Fly Hugh and Yume to a hospital.

Danya, the Haxorus and Hugh:
Turns out there is a way to get rid of a Sync: kill the Source, which, for Hugh, Yume and Elya, was Mani. Losing her Sync snaps Elya out of the state she was in, but Hugh and Yume don't find out until they go see her later, so they decide to continue fighting, despite losing Mani. Flynn reactivates their SharedSync and they head for the actual Team Plasma HQ, this time with the help of Nate and Hilbert. The two of them distract the grunts, while Hugh and Yume look for the Source of most of Team Plasma's Syncs, which turns out to be a Magneton, locked up in the HQ. Yume uses her Sync to force an Explosion out of him, leaving the grunts with a lot of Pokemon that no longer obey them. When Hugh and Yume split up, Yume finds Colress in the HQ, who doesn't seem to care for her presence or her trail of destruction at all, and practically hands her Spot back before taking off. With that surprisingly succesfull mission, they return to the hospital where Elya is at and give her her Purrloin back.
It doesn't take long until they hear what Colress' actual plans were. Partly with the information he got from Hugh and Yume, Colress found a way to transfer over someone else's Sync to his own, and used it to take control of the champion's Pokemon while the Shadow Triad controls the Elite 4's. As it's extremely difficult to fight a Sync when you don't have one yourself, and Hugh and Yume are the only ones left with a Sync now that the champion and Elite 4 have been captured, they feel like they have no other choice but to try and stop Colress on their own, so they Fly off to the Elite 4 plateau. Once there, they realise that now that the Plasma guys are using a direct Sync, hurting their Pokemon will finally hurt them as well, and they manage to take out the Shadow Triad.
Colress finally cares enough to face them in a serious fight, and significantly hurts them, but Yume and Hugh manage to take down some of Iris' Pokemon that he's controlling, hurting him too. They seem to be doing alright, until Flynn is hurled across the room, out of their Sync range, breaking their connection. Colress realises the chaos he's caused and quickly commands Iris' Haxorus to attack Hugh. He hits him with his tail, slamming him against one of the pillars, breaking Kiki's Pokeball in the impact. Hugh falls down bleeding. Yume panics and tries to wake him up. When Flynn gets back into their Sync range, she manages to get him conscious enough to use the Sync, allowing her to force him to keep breathing through it, but she now has to deal with the pain of his injury while attempting to take down Iris' Haxorus.
Zed and Danya come up with a plan where Danya pretends to be the Zoroark under Illusion so the Haxorus will come close to try and break it. She can then attack him point blank. It works and severely damages the Haxorus, but it's not quite enough to take him out. He retaliates, killing Danya. Through her Sync, Yume and her other Pokemon pass out - except for Paper, who still never got a close enough Sync with Yume. When Colress thinks he's won and turns away, Paper attacks the Haxorus, taking them both out.
Yume later wakes up in the hospital, but she knows she's alone.


Survivors:
Paper, the Crobat
Flynn, the Flygon
Sparkles, the Emolga
Zed, the Zoroark

Kiki, the Samurott
Patricia, the Unfezant

Nick, the Arcanine
Milow, the Togekiss

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I guess you can see this as a very rough summary.. it skips quite a few things, but most of the ending is there at least~ If you still have any other questions about the story or anything else after this, feel free to ask below.

There's still a lot I do love about this story, but drawing it out just takes such an absurd amount of time.. I learned a lot from it though. There's a lot of things I didn't think I could draw before I started this comic that are now actual pages that I did draw. Also learned a lot about writing and designing characters thanks to a whole bunch of awesome people in this community and I want to hug all of you.
I might draw more comics in the future, but I'll shoot for something a whole lot shorter~

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Comments: 36

Neutral9999 [2016-01-29 05:26:09 +0000 UTC]

I hate this ending there's nothing good about any of this sadness

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Mad-Plot-Bunny In reply to Neutral9999 [2017-11-09 16:40:31 +0000 UTC]

I agree. What's the point of the lesson if it's meant to be tragic expect synchs completely not worth it? They only won because a Pokemon never had a strong 'bond' to begin with? It was a good story just..Β what was the point and did any come out of this experience?

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Velink [2016-01-28 16:43:51 +0000 UTC]

aww
those are quite a lot of losses
Β BW2 is truly the hardest to nuzlocke IMO

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Krisantyne [2015-12-25 15:38:34 +0000 UTC]

Ohnoooo everyone I loved is dead. ;A; (Okay, not everyone. Just a lot.) Hugh and Sniffy and Mani noooo
I had a feeling there would be much sadness and a heartbreaking ending, and this exceeds the expectations. It would have been fun to have my heart ripped out a few million times over the course of the story, but this was nice, too. Thanks for doing the summary!
Brb catching 20 tiny Flygons to cheer me up.

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stormy500 [2015-12-10 00:33:46 +0000 UTC]

awesome picture love it

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Iiyume In reply to stormy500 [2015-12-13 17:26:27 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou<3

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stormy500 In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-19 03:38:53 +0000 UTC]

your welocme

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darkvslight346 [2015-12-03 01:04:58 +0000 UTC]

so almost every one we knew and loved in the comic is dead except for yumi and now she will have to live with survivors guilt. There aren't enough curse words in the english language to fully describe how upset i am. I am a bit upset to see this story end though, i respect your choice to end it.

You know if you still want to do something with this story can i propose something to you? If you allow me to I can try and find the time to write out a brief novelization of your story maybe a couple of chapters like 20 ish or so and then send it to you to publish. I'm offering because it might help me get out of my 6 month writers block and I really want to see a more fleshed out ending to this.

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Iiyume In reply to darkvslight346 [2015-12-04 16:51:39 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear you still enjoyed the story

That's so sweet of you to propose, and I'm flattered you liked my story enough to want to write something for it. Though the thing is that I have this incredibly specific image in my head of how all of the scenes in this story are supposed to go, and since you can't see into my mind, your version would obviously be different in ways, and I don't think I'd be okay with calling anything canon for these characters that's not exactly what I have in my head.. if that makes sense But if you just wanted to write something for it for fun, I'd be absolutely honored.

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darkvslight346 In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-04 17:45:23 +0000 UTC]

well thanks and i'm thinking of what to write for this, i may have an idea you see i have my own story on pokemon *it's based off my first omega ruby run* and once i finish the main stroy and the delta quest *which might take a long time* i was going to do something with hoopa and his ability to open holes in dimensions. When that time comes i could easily add yume into it, and if you like the story and her role i can giver her a bigger part

also for now i can try and write an epilogue of sorts for you, kind of a 2 or 3 year time skip, if you give me details i can easily write it outΒ 

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Iiyume In reply to darkvslight346 [2015-12-04 18:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, good luck on the run ^^
Sounds like an interesting idea. If you want to throw in a Yume cameo that's fine by me Although you'll end up with a very depressed Yume unless you pick her up before BlackOut~

As for an epilogue, well.. Yume dies about half a year later, so good luck on that one :'D There's a sequel to BlackOut (that I'd never have had time for, but it's still canon to me) with a different protagonist. That story would eventually explain what happened to her.

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Neutral9999 In reply to Iiyume [2016-01-29 05:29:53 +0000 UTC]

so the sadness never ends

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Mel-W-H In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-13 11:39:32 +0000 UTC]

I'm so curious..., how does she die? D:

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Iiyume In reply to Mel-W-H [2015-12-13 17:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Mmmhn, it's a bit of a long story.. I'd have to explain most of Kyra 's story for that (she would be the protagonist of that sequel), and it really doesn't sound too good in a summary. But she basically dies because of Kyra

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darkvslight346 In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-04 19:28:43 +0000 UTC]

ok then i guess i would need to add yume atleast 2 months after the story ended considering she diesΒ 

Well i guess i might skip on the epilogue though considering death is not really my forte, but i'll try and do something. Also now you got me curious if you have the time can i ask you about the sequel to black out, what was it going to be about? If you dont want to tell me thats fine but now i really want to knowΒ 

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Iiyume In reply to darkvslight346 [2015-12-04 21:50:22 +0000 UTC]

It's about this girl . Some chick with a Sync and an attitude that was trained to be an assassin by a Fennekin. They'd be cleaning up leftover Team Plasma grunts that still had Syncs and were hiding out in Kalos.

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darkvslight346 In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-04 22:27:24 +0000 UTC]

oh nice she looks pretty cool, also she was trained by a fennekin? I am kind of happy about that, i mean i always knew those foxy jackasses were evilΒ 

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Randommode [2015-11-30 21:23:49 +0000 UTC]

It looks good Β 

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Iiyume In reply to Randommode [2015-12-01 16:41:59 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou<3

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Iristhehedgie [2015-11-30 19:34:38 +0000 UTC]

That's all heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time.
I love it.

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Iiyume In reply to Iristhehedgie [2015-12-01 16:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou<3 Glad you still liked it

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Exekiella [2015-11-30 11:10:41 +0000 UTC]

Noooo Hugh... ;;

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Iiyume In reply to Exekiella [2015-12-01 16:40:11 +0000 UTC]

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Gingine [2015-11-30 06:20:30 +0000 UTC]

nooooooooooo i'm crying no

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Iiyume In reply to Gingine [2015-12-01 16:39:36 +0000 UTC]

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Gingine In reply to Iiyume [2015-12-02 05:48:29 +0000 UTC]

^^

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ToshiroHitsugaya01 [2015-11-30 05:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I kinda expected a lot of death...but man. Though I sort of was assuming that Hugh was going to die, I was also hoping that he wouldn't. ^^' I'm very impressed by your work with this series...even unfinished it has to be one of the best I have ever seen anywhere. You had so much thought placed in everything, it truly felt like seeing the world of Pokemon come to life. So I congratulate you one this and wish you the best of luck on anything and everything you decide to do from here.
There are a few things I would like to know; what sort of interaction was Yume going to have with N? Was Hilda going to appear again? What would have been her role? Also, as I'm sure many others will ask, what was going to be the end?
Oh...and you can answer this last one directly to me if you want so no one will get their hopes up/smashed, but are you thinking of doing other Nuzlocke comics? In the future of course...I don't think anyone would or even should expect such a thing any time soon after what a headache this one gave you.

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Iiyume In reply to ToshiroHitsugaya01 [2015-11-30 15:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Awh, thank you so much I'm glad you still enjoyed it~

At the Nimbasa gym they'd meet Hilbert, who would tell them that Hilda was dead and he was convinced that N was the one that killed her. When his goal seems to be to find N now that he heard Team Plasma has returned, and make him pay for what he did, Kiki refuses to come back home with him and stays with Hugh instead to help him fight Team Plasma (and hopefully find N before Hilbert does).
N meanwhile has been hiding after Hilda's death that he's been wrongfully accused for, but stayed in contact with Elesa. When Elesa finds out that Yume is the girl with the Sync that Juniper has been looking for, she first informs N (page 29 ) and they come up with a plan to guide Yume into the right direction and have her learn to use her Sync properly so she would actually be strong enough to take down Team Plasma (since the League isn't in a position to do anything about a Team Plasma that, in the eyes of many of the people, still hasn't done anything wrong). The plan involves getting Zed, his Zorua, on her team so he can teach her properly and keep an eye on her, and a backup plan where N will be disguised as Curtis (where Zed or Zoey will cast Illusion on him) when he needs to talk to her directly.
Hilbert eventually learns that N is not the one who killed his sister (Ghetsis is), and finally decides to help the group fight Team Plasma. N and Zekrom later help out with their fight against Ghetsis and BlackKyurem. (Game timeline-wise, Ghetsis is taken down during the last fight against Team Plasma, while Colress replaces the Elite 4)

The end is back in Aspertia City. Hilbert hears that he's allowed to transfer his job to Kanto (he originally was a researcher for Juniper) so he can work with Nate, as they've proven to work quite well together (and Nate really doesn't want to be alone after Hugh's death). Nate asks a very sad Yume to come with them to Kanto as well, since Daisy runs some kind of care place that could help her out, and it would probably be better for her not to stay in a place where she's constantly reminded of Hugh. She doesn't seem too keen of leaving the place where she's lived with him all her life, but Hilbert, knowing what it's like to lose someone that close to you, convinces her it'll get better, and she eventually agrees.

I don't currently have any plans to do another Nuzlocke comic.. If I do another comic it's going to be something short, and (serious story) Nuzlockes by nature are reallyreally long. I do have another story for a Nuzlocke in my head, that would be a sequel to BlackOut (and is very canon to me, as it wraps up this story very nicely). Takes place roughly 6 years later in Kalos, with Kyra as the protagonist. But I will not be drawing that one for obvious reasons.

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ToshiroHitsugaya01 In reply to Iiyume [2015-11-30 19:01:01 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.
Oh~, I understand it now. That makes a lot of sense.
Aw, it's highly emotional...yet still a very nice ending. Thanks for answering my questions. :3
I can imagine. I've played a number of them and when thinking of stories...just on paper they were at least twenty pages long...not even midway through. 0.o Really? She would be a totally epic main character for the Kalos region. But yes, I can definitely understand. I myself would love to try drawing my own Nuzlocke since I have some really good stories for nearly every single game, but I'm afraid the terrible art would not match the in-depth stories I would have. XD Anyway, no matter what you choose to do, I will be supporting you and wishing you the best of luck. Thank you for such a fantastic story Iiyume. Β 

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dia-phantom [2015-11-30 04:39:45 +0000 UTC]

just tearing out our hearts I see ;;;;; beautiful piece!

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Iiyume In reply to dia-phantom [2015-12-01 16:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou<3

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Gecko-Comics [2015-11-30 00:49:06 +0000 UTC]

Wait....is HUGH dead?! 0-o

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Iiyume In reply to Gecko-Comics [2015-11-30 15:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Yes he is

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Gecko-Comics In reply to Iiyume [2015-11-30 16:33:25 +0000 UTC]

how does he die?

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Iiyume In reply to Gecko-Comics [2015-11-30 16:57:03 +0000 UTC]

There's a summary for it in the description up there ^
In short, Colress has a Haxorus smash him into a pillar.

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Gecko-Comics In reply to Iiyume [2015-11-30 17:52:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh woops, I missed that. Poor Hugh X(

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