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TheAssassinGuy [2017-07-21 11:18:30 +0000 UTC]
Sweet mother of god, that was fantastic. It was full of tension and well written, also using new concepts and scene transitions really well. You HAVE to continue this, I'm very intriuged. Also, the Saidakin would have used similar tactics while in the city, that would be cool to read and write as well.
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Ilceren In reply to TheAssassinGuy [2017-08-14 15:39:33 +0000 UTC]
Glad you liked this ^^ I've always imagined some of the criminal organisations to be highly adapted to operate in the city, and this is one of such examples, yeah.
I actually have the next part ready, but I have to stop being a lazy ass and add the characters in this one to the encyclopedia and send it to the Felarya group first before submitting the next one U.U
Thanks for the compliments and for giving it a read!
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Karbo [2016-12-02 00:45:56 +0000 UTC]
yeah I have a good idea of the kidnapped girl's identity I think XP Her captors were well organized too, she didn't stood a chance ^^ ; I'm curious to see what will happens now XP
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david-dent-jedai [2016-11-25 09:51:21 +0000 UTC]
Whoa! Who knew Lower Teir kidnappers were so well organized? O_o; Terrifying. That blonde girl was Elary wasn't it? Poor tging. Should have known trading in rumors is a dangerous game to play with bad consequences.
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Ilceren In reply to david-dent-jedai [2016-11-25 16:18:28 +0000 UTC]
There's a bit more to it all, actually, but you'll have to wait for the next part to find out. But I sure wouldn't call Rakihz's group mere "Lower Tier kidnappers" XD
And yes, that girl was Elarya. She actually has a pretty good combat training due to her family, but she didn't really have a chance against that setup. Too many dirty tricks, you could say XD
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Ilceren In reply to david-dent-jedai [2016-12-31 12:15:54 +0000 UTC]
Well, the conversation among them while Rakihz was with the antidote was meant to convey that he did have to do it with all kinds of people, male or female XD I don't know what Soribaler is, though, and a quick Google search didn't get me any results either.
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