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ILJackson — Resurrecting Fafnir

Published: 2010-03-07 02:06:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 3613; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 173
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Description The first thing I noticed once we entered the Arete dustcloud's core was the color. What was a soft diffuse pink and yellow on the outside shifted to the color of blood separating from plasma within. And then, the binary stars winked, temporarily blocked out by the massive hulk of a vessel that, even to my untrained eye, was ancient beyond reckoning. I looked at the admiral in surprise as I saw a Powell-class battleship pull up along side. It looked like the ship, one of the largest in our fleet, could land in the behemoth's docking bay.
"Welcome to Project Fafnir, Captain," the admiral said, beaming with pride. "We call her that because this ship used to belong to a species we're calling the Jotunn...a giant race, though probably not humanoid. Your eyes aren't fooling you, Fafnir's just under seven kilometers long."
To say Fafnir looked old was an understatement. It's age bordered on grotesque. It was obviously a warship. It's lines dripped with menace. Even burned out and floating dead in a stellar remnant, Fafnir looked like it could obliterate half the fleet.
"She's impressive, sure, Admiral," I said, haltingly. "But why bring in the Black Angels for guard duty on an archeological site?"
The admiral laughed. "This 'Archeological Site' is going to win the war for us. That ship isn't dead. It's in some kind of standby repair mode. Been that way for the last few hundred million years. The eggheads say she's a billion years old. Was too near some star when it went nova and has been floating with this stellar remnant ever since. Hell, her gravity field might be what has kept this cloud from dispersing."
"You said 'not dead' as though it were alive," I said, trying to pierce the dust clouds with human eyes where ships' sensors failed.
"It is...in a way. Organic technology. It's like a big cyborg, with organic parts grown and genetically created to make the ship perform better. Once we start incorporating that technology in our ships, even the Vorhasi will take notice."
"Okay, I understand the need for security, but still, the Black Angels are spec ops. Why..."
"Because," the admiral said, stepping up to the viewscreen to get an unobstructed view of the gargantuan vessel, "I want all the bases covered. Just in case. The scientists have guaranteed me it's safe, but that's not good enough. I want the best combat unit available here for when we turn Fafnir back on..."

I frowned. "You know admiral, it sounded for a minute there like you said you were going to turn on the giant, alien warship that survived a supernova that happened before the time of the dinosaurs," I chuckled.

The admiral looked back at me disapprovingly. "Tertiarty system starts are already underway. What we do here in the next few days will change the course of human history."

"That," I said, trying to ignore the cold lump in my stomach, "is something we can both agree on...one way or the other..."

The perimeter defense ships cleared us through, and we began our final approach. And Fafnir, shaking off the sleep of a billion years, was waiting...

Enjoy, and let me know what you think.
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Comments: 24

Realmwright [2013-10-06 01:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Terrifying story. We never know when to leave well enough alone.

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Habatchii [2012-02-17 19:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Habatchii says;

very well...

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RizarLogic [2011-01-25 02:18:44 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, love the reds!

Added -
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steve-burg [2010-09-05 05:33:54 +0000 UTC]

That's a nice angle on that ship

This IS a book !

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tadp0l3 [2010-06-19 11:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Lovely colors, red space is quite unusual among artists, but you've managed a real good piece here!

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CyberRaven [2010-03-31 18:35:06 +0000 UTC]

great story, makes me want to know what happens next, lovely vibrant colours

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ILJackson In reply to CyberRaven [2010-03-31 20:41:30 +0000 UTC]

Check my gallery. There's a folder specifically for the ongoing Fafnir story line. Check it regularly or deviantwatch me. I will try to put in at least one piece a week.

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crowen [2010-03-24 18:10:18 +0000 UTC]

amazing story, lovely peace of work

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quandry247 [2010-03-23 20:53:50 +0000 UTC]

space art with decent spaceships!
not seen that for a while - genuinely.

praise you and your skills.

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sevenofeleven [2010-03-13 20:54:37 +0000 UTC]

Things are going to go south.
Reminds me of the time I helped with the reactivation of a sleeping ancient war machine.
*Fingers scars*
Yeah, that turned out well.

Looks great and kudos on the story.

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Anastas2002 [2010-03-10 03:20:15 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of the old "Terran Trade Authority" paintings.

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El-Bronco [2010-03-10 02:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful nebula. Good lightning too.

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asaenvolk [2010-03-10 01:59:24 +0000 UTC]

nice little story to go with the pic, its a good touch I think. Makes you wonder what will happen next.

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Emilyahedrick [2010-03-09 23:35:14 +0000 UTC]

wow this is awesome! great job on the sky

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valadaar [2010-03-08 00:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Really good, but one point is there are places with very high contrast - such as the bow of the ship against the background.

The texture suggests a detailed surface, but the edge is knife-crisp, which spoils the illusion of the texture.

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ILJackson In reply to valadaar [2010-03-08 02:07:05 +0000 UTC]

It took me a bit to understand what you were saying, but you're referring to the bow of the Archer (ship in the bottom corner) right?
Yeah, I see that. The bow itself is a big launch bay and it's just got a really sharp edge to it. Maybe I need to go in there and add some greeble or something to break up that straight line. The whole front of the ship is like that. I did it for stylistic reasons, but I guess breaking up that straight edge might be a good idea.

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Blades-123 [2010-03-07 09:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous and dramatic image, this may well be your best space scene yet.

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Reactor-Axe-Man [2010-03-07 05:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Very dramatic scene. The color, lighting, and of course the models are all very well done.

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Shadow-Gecko [2010-03-07 04:09:32 +0000 UTC]

Silly monkeys...
all an alien race has to do to garentee victory is put up a large sign saying "Do Not Push This Button"
Fortunately for you humans, aliens are alien, and that applies to you too...

Great render, and I love the story!

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NICELabs [2010-03-07 03:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Damn impressive. The image is outstanding but I'm always interested in the story behind the scene. I tend to write long descriptions about my own artwork, setting the stage and all. Very cool to see someone do the same and do it extremely well.

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eyemageone [2010-03-07 03:34:12 +0000 UTC]

i so want to know what happens next

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DrOfDemonology [2010-03-07 02:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Holy freaking wow. When it comes to ultra-cool space scenes, m'man, you sure as hell know what you're doing

And you sure like the extra-large mega-economy size spaceships, don't you?

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ILJackson In reply to DrOfDemonology [2010-03-07 02:49:24 +0000 UTC]

It's actually rare that I design a big ship. I usually make them about the size of WWII or modern day vessels, just a shade larger.
That way, when I DO design a big ship, it has the appropriate reaction.
But man, Fafnir was fun to design. I haven't done the whole bioorganic look before, and basically modeled it after some kind of trippy bug. I'll do more pics and maybe an ortho shot. I really like the model.

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Misfit-KotLD [2010-03-07 02:14:26 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

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