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Published: 2012-10-11 17:51:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 13783; Favourites: 723; Downloads: 615
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Swing over water.Program: SAI Paint Tool
Any critique is welcome.
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Thank you very much for your critique.I'm not satisfied with this picture too.I tried to use traditional style in this picture but it didn't go well.The result is as you can see.I think i should do my digital style again.
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It could just be me, but while I can see where you've worked on showing the movement of her hair and clothes on the swing, for some reason it looks like they're swinging forward while the swing itself is going backward. I'd suggest working on the effects of motion in your work, because this isn't the first time I've noticed it. While you art is beautiful and full of colour and detail, there just isn't much life to it. Even when drawing people, they still just look like still life and blend in with the backgrounds a little too much.
I also like how you've created the water being splashed up by her toes; your ability at drawing such cute feet is what drew me to your gallery (being a foot fetishist; lol).
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Well,not only you but i feel that too.I think that my work is still lack of movement.I don't want to say that it's my style because i don't want my style to be like this.I have to do better.
Thank you very much for your critique and compliment.I'm glad that you love my foot drawing,hahaha.
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This is absolutely magneficent! You can see very clear movement in the picture, and rendering sucj as all the little water dropplets are stunning. The girl looks really cute. All the creases in her dress are perfectly placed, like they would be on reclothing, and the shading on eveything in this piece is really incredible. I love the way the water looks. It looks exactly like a real rushing stream or river. Oh and the hands and feet! You are very talented in human anatomy as well. The background has a lovely evergreen shade, and it's the perfect colour and makes the person who sees it feel like they're in a jungle or forest with that girl.
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Thank you very much for your compliment and rating.I'm glad that you love this picture.
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you're welcome
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Really love this work! So innocent. Your art is something I always check to see if there's anything new. Just love what you create and the emotion I feel as I look at this particular piece is one of peaceful happiness. Just might have to take this one home with me in a print. I'm addicted. Critiques are always good to have...but I thought the hair looked like it was in the exact right place, the hair on the top of the head/face, as it's thrown forward, not backwards. Only if the wind would have been coming from the front would the hair (bangs) need to be blown back, and then of course the rest of her hair would be going the wrong direction. My humble opinion is that it's perfect the way it is and completely in the right place based on the action of the girl on the swing. Go with your gut!
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Thank you.I'm glad that you love it.
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Thank you very much.
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I just want to dive into the screen andΒ help her push
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Aww, the colors here are my favorite part. o w o
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this is my favorite out of all your artwork. keep it goin.
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I'm glad to know that.I will keep going.
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I'm glad that you like it.
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Incredibly adorable expression, and beautiful scene ^_^
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beautiful! but i can't help noticing that the placement of the eyes makes the face seem flat...? or maybe it's just me lolz!
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Thank you.
I see.Thanks for your critique too.
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Hmm.... It's not as intricate/busy as some of the other pieces I've seen in your gallery. And while that can be a design element in and of itself, I just don't feel it here. I do like what you've done with the foliage, that I can say works well. Although the texture at the bottom doesn't read as "water" in my head. And the pose seems a little bit static to me. Maybe if the ropes had a little twist, and her angle turned a little bit more toward us as result, with the left leg bent in a little more so you get a dynamic kick-and-twist. It's great though that you added a splash of water there to let us infer this IS water and there IS motion. I don't know if you agree, I just thought I'd throw in my two cents.
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Thank you very much for your critique.I agree with you.I am not satisfied with this picture.I use it for testing my coloring technique and i think i will do it better in my next work.
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cute! and nice job on capturing the gentle sway from the swinging
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CUUUUUUUUUUUUTE! >~< AND cute feet splashing!
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i need to go on holiday actually now that i think about it!
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Heheh.That's great.
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