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I'm not so sure about this one...I like the composition but the curl is a bit ugly or something.Related content
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I think it's really nice.
The focal point is in the curl. The natural plant looks absolutely fascinating because you don't need to mess with the plant itself. It holds the beauty of nature in the image.
The colors are simple but nice. There are around six shades of green: sage, leaf, forest, mint. etc., There's not a look of overplacement of the subjects and it has a whimsical but still realistic look about it.
Composition wise, the center is the obvious focus, but the blurred leaves around it still maintain a variety of detail.
I would prefer less of a crowded area, the other leaves, though blurry seem to become a point of attention as well.
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Thanks very much for the in depth critique, it's great to get feedback on pieces you're unsure about.
I tend to agree in regards to the cluttered foreground, I might try a tighter crop
Thanks again!
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No problem, I'm glad I could help.
The piece is beautiful, nice work
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A unique approach to macro photography, the results of which are hugely appealing.
The most obvious and spectacular aspect of this photo is the framing. Using natural blocks of colour, out of focus, to encircle the little twirly vine is an inspired choice and works beautifully.
The vine itself is sharp and well defined, and stands out from a plain, light background.
There are a few little technical issues that I'd attempt to fix for future reference. There are some weird coloured fringes around the leaves at the bottom of the frame, which don't quite look natural. These could probably be desaturated out in Photoshop, although they don't detract heavily from the shot.
I'd have also considered a tighter crop. The massive blank blob of green on the left of the frame is a little overwhelming, and I think compositionally the shot would have been more pleasing if the vine was centered.
Nonetheless, it's a beautiful photo, very original in terms of macro shots, and a pleasure to behold.
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Thanks so much for the incredibly encouraging critique 
I think I will try a tighter crop and check out the overly-saturated areas you pointed out.
Thanks again, I found your critique very up-lifting and helpful
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No, there is nothing ugly in this shot! I adore it! Love the soft blur and lush greens, and the focus on the spiral is perfect. Instant fave!
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My pleasure! It's a wonderful shot!
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you have been featured in my "four seasons feature" among other beautiful spring-photos - I would be happy if you could take a look, tell me if everything's okay with you and maybe you'll find some pieces you like
thanks for your participation
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Oh I love it! I think the curl is nice too, I'm not sure what you don't like about it hehe. It looks so natural, really like you've caught a moment in time that most people would ignore
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Thanks very much! That's what I love about macro photography - capturing things that would usually go unnoticed
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You've done such a beautiful job of it! And you are most welcome
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Hehe, thanks so much!
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you take nice photos of flowers, but lots of people take nice photos of flowers. Flowers bore me, but stuff like this is great ^.^
Faved and well deserved praise
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This picture is beautiful. I agree with you, it is well composed! And the curl is a really neat center of attention, I like it!
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Thanks so much for the feedback
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You are most welcome
Keep it up!! Your photography is wonderful.
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