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Imprisoned-Fire — Hiyono Yuizaki-Spiral
Published: 2008-02-22 16:16:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 899; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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I actually managed to finish it.
Working off and on, this drawing took me a few days. Mostly because I had some trouble getting her face shaped right. Yesterday though, it all came together.I could probably keep messing around with this for like a week and still not be completely satisfied.
I'm putting it up because I really don't think there's anything more I can do to it. (I'll still mess around with it)My mom says it looks like a real person, and mom's do not lie.
(but then my mom doesn't really have an artist's eye...) I feel iffy about her mouth, but I really can't think of anything to do to it.-----
Hiyono (c) Kyo Shirodaira and Eita Mizuno
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Comments: 33
Coolio! (yes, its a word ^_^) I love Hiyono-chan, and here she looks really real! The shading on the creases on her jacket IS very very awesome. You like Spiral?
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Thank you! 
Yes, yes I like it. Hiyono is actually one of my favorite characters. I've drawn more pictures of her then any other character
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Ooh! I'm going to go check them out!
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Thank you!
And thank you for the fav.
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so realistic looking, nice yet sort of creepy in a way. so good job!
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Thank you.
(You think she's sort of creepy 
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Wow. I really like the realistic feel to this--and the way she is staring right at you--making a connection with the audience. I wish the hair had a few more layers of pencil work--- it would really bring unity to the subject
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Oh, wow. Thank you so much for the feedback! 
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Although I agree about the comment about the eyes, the shading on the drawing is awesome!!!
Luvs it!!
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Maybe if/when I draw another realistic drawing, I should draw the eyes so I think their too small and maybe they'll come out the right size. (it's a thought...)
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Yeah that always works ^.^ Good luck on your next piece
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It looks great! You did an amazing job on the hair and shading, but the eyes are just a bit to big for her face. They're also spread too far apart. Otherwise, you did quite well.
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So the eyes are an issue once again. 
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I don't think so...actualy,the eyes are what i like the most and the hair i don't really like XD the eyes are perfect,belive me
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Wow, thank you. 
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The eyes wouldn't be an issue if the rest of her face was anime style. Still, like I said, you did an all around excellent job.
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With her notebook though, she well write down all of your secrets and weaknesses, and then blackmail you with her knowledge.
(Note: she's the president of the school newspaper, that's why she has the notebook)
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OMG. lol.. now i know why some kids sit in the library with a pen and notebook.... poised to eavesdrop. 
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you wouldn't know. They have their ways of not getting caught.... >.> / <.<
Were you always homeschooled?
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Yep, I've been homeschooled my whole life. (part of the reason for my lack of interaction with other people) I know as much of school life as, well, actually I know nothing of school life
I'm currently preparing to take the GED test(s). Then comes the nerve racking experience of going to college. (Oh boy... 
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