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InconsequentialPoet โ€” In a Little Girl's Mind
Published: 2012-03-14 16:18:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 5821; Favourites: 399; Downloads: 35
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Description There sits the girl with the things in her eyes
Monsters, destruction, and sweet butterflies
Hopscotch and daisies, surrounded by screams
Beautiful dresses now torn at the seams
Crayons and paintbrushes, villains and grins
Young, gladsome innocence, hatred and sins
Little red houses on roads left to fade
Gorgeous moonlight shining off of the blade
Blood pouring out as she cries her own name
Knowing she's forced to take each bit of blame
She could have stopped it and left it behind
All of these things in her troubled young mind
She could have saved them if she dared to try
Rather, though, she left herself there to die.
Now, others watch as she sits on the ground
Keeping their distance and letting her drown
In her own worries and things she won't tell
Waiting for her mind to kill her as wellโ€ฆ
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Comments: 286

Potato-Latke [2012-07-24 03:59:49 +0000 UTC]

I really love this no matter how sad it is.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Potato-Latke [2012-07-24 20:12:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!! ^.^

~ MIkki

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whitemidnightshadow [2012-05-10 03:08:58 +0000 UTC]

i like this one

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to whitemidnightshadow [2012-05-10 03:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Thaanks

~ Mikki

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Iirata [2012-04-13 01:38:21 +0000 UTC]

I'll admit, I go through the "Literature" section and usually leave it thinking "meh"
But this one hooked me in, I wanted to keep reading because I wanted to know where you going with it. It's the fact that I wanted it to get "happier" but then... Well it didn't. I guess that's what makes writings good though right?

What I'm trying to say is, I like it. Lol

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Iirata [2012-04-13 03:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, yaayyy!!! Thank you so much!!! That means a lot to me, honestly.
And yeah, I kinda fail at being happy XD
Thank you so much!!!

~ Mikki

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Redrose9726 [2012-04-11 14:37:23 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT & I KNOW THE FEELING.... I'VE FELT LIKE THAT BEFORE SO I CAN RELAE TO IT..... IT BUETIFUL!!!!

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Redrose9726 [2012-04-12 00:24:09 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOUUU!!!!! <3

~ MIkki

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CiwiArt [2012-04-05 20:27:27 +0000 UTC]

great poem

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to CiwiArt [2012-04-05 21:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuu!!

~ Mikki

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CiwiArt In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-04-07 09:05:14 +0000 UTC]

C:

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Shiver-In-Shadows20 [2012-03-21 17:43:44 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poem. If only my writers block was half as good as yours haha.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Shiver-In-Shadows20 [2012-03-22 00:07:55 +0000 UTC]

Ehehe, well thank you Cx

~ Mikki

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Lintu47 [2012-03-20 10:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Hello, you have been featured in my weekly dA love for everyone! article.
Have a nice day

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Lintu47 [2012-03-20 16:34:40 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you!!!!!
~ Mikki

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Lintu47 In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-20 16:39:21 +0000 UTC]

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solveigran [2012-03-18 13:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to solveigran [2012-03-18 20:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!

~ Mikki

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Juniperberryy [2012-03-17 15:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Very sad, but lovely too :]
I think I might have to add you to my deviant watch!

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Juniperberryy [2012-03-17 16:41:07 +0000 UTC]

O:
YAY!

Thanks a ton!

~ Mikki

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Juniperberryy In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-18 12:04:11 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome :]

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The-Lost-Hope [2012-03-17 01:50:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow very neat.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to The-Lost-Hope [2012-03-17 16:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! ^.^

~ Mikki

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The-Lost-Hope In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-17 16:57:38 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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KBeth [2012-03-16 01:45:11 +0000 UTC]

And now I'm crying...

You write beautifully. I love a poet who can make me feel!

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to KBeth [2012-03-16 01:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Aw! I'm sorry! D:
And thank you so much!
That means a lot to me. I write to make people feel the words, so your comment made my day!

~ Mikki

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Silverstorm318 [2012-03-16 01:24:01 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! I love it! Beautiful.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Silverstorm318 [2012-03-16 01:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!

~ Mikki

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NicolaWingedDeity [2012-03-15 23:48:17 +0000 UTC]

My God... I Love 0=

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to NicolaWingedDeity [2012-03-16 01:39:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuu!!

~ Mikki

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NicolaWingedDeity In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-16 01:55:11 +0000 UTC]

Always (x

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MiracleMoon124 [2012-03-15 22:19:42 +0000 UTC]

This poem was BEAUTIFUL! Great job~!!!

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to MiracleMoon124 [2012-03-15 22:22:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya!!

~ Mikki

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Endlander [2012-03-15 21:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, I particularly love end-rhymes. Keep at it.
Also it is my personal belief; that Writer's Block, is simply the mind telling you to do something creative/improvised instead of deliberate (Such as work usually is.). xD

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Endlander [2012-03-15 22:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuu!!

And ah, awesome... xD Yay creativity

~ Mikki

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Greyhat64 In reply to Endlander [2012-03-15 21:44:21 +0000 UTC]

I never thought of it that way. You have just made my day!

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Jun-Okami [2012-03-15 20:12:15 +0000 UTC]

I really love this poem.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Jun-Okami [2012-03-15 20:18:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

~ Mikki

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Blabalaize [2012-03-15 19:22:01 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. In my opinion the best poem I saw on Deviant Art.

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Blabalaize [2012-03-15 20:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Seriously?!
YAY! Thank you so much!!

~ Mikki

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stonerbrat [2012-03-15 19:11:02 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing i love it

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to stonerbrat [2012-03-15 19:16:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! And thank you very much for the kind note

~ Mikki

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stonerbrat In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-15 19:18:42 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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PoisonofTheFlesh [2012-03-15 18:23:43 +0000 UTC]

beautiful, love it

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to PoisonofTheFlesh [2012-03-15 18:24:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya!

~ mikki

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ImmortalFlames [2012-03-15 17:03:01 +0000 UTC]

This is the best poem I've ever read on here... It really caught my eye

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to ImmortalFlames [2012-03-15 17:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Well thank ya

I don't get why this is such a popular poem... O.o

~ Mikki

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Blackfoxtails [2012-03-15 15:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit...THIS IS GREAT!!!!!! A little demented and some what true about a little few people BUT AWESOME!!!!!

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to Blackfoxtails [2012-03-15 18:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Please don't swear around me... I'm pretty strict about that stuff... I'm sorry :C

And thank you! Demented is what I do XD

~ Mikki

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Blackfoxtails In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-15 20:48:55 +0000 UTC]

Sorry.

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