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Description Pokémon PG: Kanto Adventures #3: The Viridian Caper Part 1! Bellies All Around!!

Narrator: Viridian City, a beautiful city that is enveloped in green year-round, awaits our heroes as they continue their journey. New trainers typically travel to Viridian as their first stop during their journey in the Kanto Region to take part in some courses at the famed Trainer School and to get a glimpse of the mysterious Gym that rarely opens its doors to trainers. That's two stops our heroes plan to make. But first they have to make it to the city.

Route 1

The two very pregnant members of the group, Jessica and Lizette, sat back and played with their Pokémon while Lucas and Janelle stood a short distance away surveying the terrain. Lucas held in his hands a device known as a Pokégear. He was using its map function to find out where they were.

"So where are we?" asked Janelle. "We're running out of food and the girls are starving. They're so hungry its starting to get scary. I think I saw them eyeing the Pokémon food."

"Well, they are carrying Pokémon after all," Lucas laughed. "Who knows what kind of crazy cravings they're having."

"I don't want to even think about," Janelle shook her head. "If I'm not careful I might end up like them and experience the cravings myself."

"Don't worry I'll do everything I can to make sure that doesn't happen."

Janelle sent a smile his way. After looking into each other's eyes they blushed and looked away.

"We're…we're almost to the city. It shouldn't be too long before we get there and find a Pokémon Center to eat dinner and get some sleep."

Jessica and Lizette watched as the two stood next to each other. Jessica held in her arms her Squirtle and Oddish, while Lizette's Charmander sat at her side and her Caterpie crawled up her belly.

"Ha, that tickles!" Lizette laughed.

"You know I wish they would just admit their feelings for each other," said Jessica. "They obviously like each other."

"It's not as easy for everyone to admit to things like that as it is for you," Lizette answered. "You always jump before thinking. That big belly of yours is a result of that. Hell, my big belly is a result of your thought process. If you stayed out of the tall grass that Team Rocket group wouldn't be looking to impregnate us."

"Who would ever think that there were lunatics out there that wanted to knock up women to give birth to Pokémon?"

"Okay, guys," Lucas said as he walked up to them. "The city shouldn't be too far off. Do you feel okay enough to continue on?"

"I'm fine," said Lizette as she stood up.

"My ankles are a little sore but to get some food I'll do anything," answered Jessica.

The group continued on their way to Viridian City. Although they were tired they were determined to reach Pokémon Center.

Viridian City

They finally reached the city. And to their surprise they found something very unexpected.

"More pregnant women, now that's refreshing," Janelle sarcastically said.

Everywhere they looked women with round bellies walked through the city. There were girls the same age as them pregnant, as well as women much older with child or possible Pokémon child.

"Lucas, things aren't looking up for me," said Janelle looking at the young woman who's round bare belly hung out of her top.

"What I'm not gonna change my lifestyle because some group wants me to carry a Pokémon in my belly," said the young woman.

"Let's just go find the Pokémon Center…" Janelle sighed.

Pokémon Center

Like the rest of the city the female trainers in the local Pokémon Center were all pregnant. And of them all, the center's nurse was the biggest of them all. Nurse Joy, one of many from the Joy Family, sat behind the counter wearing her usual pink dress that surrounded her swollen belly. In her hands she folded a white apron that she was also usually seen wearing.

"Wow, Nurse Joy, you're huge," said Lucas.

"Yes, so huge that I can't wrap my apron around me…" Joy sighed.

"I'm really not surprised she's this big," Lucas thought to himself. "The Joys are known to be very fertile women. I wouldn't be surprised if Officer Jenny is that huge."

Nurse Joy looked at the four trainers and was surprised to see the still skinny Janelle. Then she saw Jessica and Lizette. Of all the women in the city she knew that she was the largest when it came to belly size. All the other trainers have had normal sized bellies for a pregnant woman but these two girls were huge, not as huge as her but close. How they were able to walk was beyond her comprehension.

"You're new to Viridian City," said Joy. "You're welcome to stay here but I hate to say I'm unable to provide care for your Pokémon. As you can see I'm unable to stand. I'm surprised you two can and even more that you're not pregnant."

"Guess I'm just lucky for the time being," said Janelle. "What happened here? How is everyone pregnant? This is unbelievable."

"It is indeed," Joy began to rub her belly. "Other then Team Rocket's involvement, no one knows what really is going on. There are no reports of Rocket members running in the streets shoving impregnation pills down the throats of women."

"Isn't anyone helping you here?" asked Lucas. "Where are your male nurses? Unless they're somehow able to get knocked up now there's no reason for them not to be here."

"All the members of my staff have not shown up for work in days," replied Joy. "I don't know why. I've talked to Jenny and she's tried to investigate but her hands are full with this bigger situation."

Our heroes and Nurse Joy are approached by another young woman. To the surprise of the quartet, she wasn't pregnant. She wore a black tank top with red pants. On her head was a black flat cap with a white Pokéball on both sides of her head. The cap covered her short red hair that could only be seen by the back and sides of her head.

She placed a toolbox on the counter, "I was finally able to fix that electrical problem, and then I helped that severely injured Pidgey. It should be fine for now."

"Thank you Noriko," said Joy. "It seems you're no longer the only non-pregnant woman in the city."

Noriko, as she was called, looked at Janelle, "Well that's a surprise. Usually new trainers are already pregnant when they come here. I'm Noriko Miyazaki. I've been helping Nurse Joy around here."

"I'm Janelle Cortez, these two big bellied girls are Jessica Garcia and Lizette Alvarez and this is Jessica's twin brother Lucas."

"Nice to meet you," said Noriko.

"If you need any help with the Center I'll gladly volunteer," stated Lucas.

She smiled at the thought of having help, "It would be much appreciated. Some of the girls have been helping me here and there but in their condition they find it hard to stay on their feet for a long period of time."

Nurse Joy looked at Noriko, "Nori, why don't you take a break? And show our new friends here the kitchen."

"Sure."

Moments later the five teenagers were sitting next to each other at a table in the kitchen.

"So, Nori why aren't you pregnant when everyone else is?" asked Janelle.

"I honestly don't know," she said. "I'm actually native to Viridian and over the past month I watched women of all shapes and sizes swell. I personally watched Nurse Joy's flat belly grow to the round shape it is now. It was crazy watching her skin stretch the way it did."

"Yeah, we've witnessed it ourselves," Lizette rubbed her belly.

Our heroes ate together while Noriko sat and watched. She only had a bottle of water, which she took a sip of while everyone else ate.

"There's plenty more where that came from so don't be afraid to have more," she said. "Those little guys in your bellies are probably starving after traveling with no food."

"Why aren't you eating?" asked Jessica.

"I'm actually a health fanatic, so there's only certain thing's I'll drink and eat," Noriko answered.

"So are you a trainer?" asked Janelle. "Do you have your own Pokémon?"

"I do," answered Noriko. "My mom gave birth to a Pokémon egg and gave it to me. It hatched into an Abra."

"Then let's battle!" exclaimed Janelle.

"I would…but…"

Janelle was confused by her lack of enthusiasm, "If you have a Pokémon with you, you should battle with it. What's wrong?"

"Well…I haven't been able to successfully train it yet," she replied. "I don't know what to do."

"Battling is good way to get in some training. I haven't had my first battle yet so this would be a learning experience for me."

"Hmm…I guess."

Later, behind the Pokémon Center, our heroes have gone out to the battlefield used by trainers to battle and train their Pokémon. A number of trainers have gathered in the stands, a good portion of them pregnant trainers. Among them sat Jessica and Lizette, while Janelle stood on the battlefield across from Noriko. Lucas stood in the referee's position.

Jessica rubbed her belly as she looked over to Lizette, "Feeling more comfortable now?"

"Definitely," Lizette said as she rubbed her own belly.

Liz got herself a new pair of pants to fit around her new curves. They're white just like the previous pair. She still wears the unbuttoned red shirt over a black tank top that now covers up to her bellybutton leaving the lower part of her belly exposed.

"The following will be a one-on-one battle," said Lucas. "Now bring out your Pokémon!"

Noriko threw an arm in front of her sending the Pokéball containing her Pokémon to the field, "Abra, let's go!"

From the popped out a bipedal Pokémon that loosely resembled a fox. It has two short, fox-like ears on the top of its head, and in the middle of its face, it has two eyes which are usually seen shut. It has a somewhat lighter color around its nose and mouth. It looked like it is wearing armor, as it has two pauldron-shaped pieces on its shoulders and a fauld-like piece around its chest. It has three fingers on each hand and three toes, two in the front on either side, and one in the back near the ankle. It also has a tail, which is fairly thick and is the same gold color as the rest of its body, except for the brown band that is located around the top of the tail.

Janelle pulled her Pokédex from her pocket to get some info on the Pokémon.

Pokédex: Abra, the Psi Pokémon. Using its psychic power is such a strain on its brain that it needs to sleep for eighteen hours a day. It senses impending attacks and teleports away to safety before the actual attacks can strike.

"Eighteen hours?" Janelle thought to herself. "That's some nap. Okay, let's see. Abra is a psychic Pokémon so Bulbasaur's secondary type of poison would make it a bad match up. That's leaves me with one option."

Janelle picked a Pokéball and pressed the center button to make it bigger. She then threw it and in a flash of light popped out Sandshrew.

"Sand!" exclaimed the Pokémon.

Sandshrew is a ground-dwelling pholidote notable for its defensive capabilities. Its body is mostly covered in a dry, tough hide which is colored to blend in with the sands of the desert. It can curl into a tight ball about the same size as a basketball to protect its soft underbelly. Its primary weapon is the small but sharp claws on its paws, which are also useful for burrowing and can sometimes be poisoned.

"It's Abra versus Sandshrew, battle begin!"

"Sandshrew, sand attack!" ordered Janelle.

The Pokémon dug its claws into the ground and sent a flurry of sand Abra's way. The sand hit its mark.

Janelle smiled and threw a hand up, "Now hit it with scratch!"

"Abra, teleport!" commanded Noriko.

As Sandshrew dove in for Abra it vanished. Sandshrew looked around with a bit of confusion.

"Shrew?"

"Abb…"

Abra reappeared behind Sandshrew but did absolutely nothing. Unfortunately, Noriko's Pokémon only knew the one move.

"Sandshrew, attempt scratch again!" exclaimed Janelle.

It followed the command and nailed Abra with a strong enough attack to make it fall over and faint.

"Huh? That was it?" Janelle seemed a bit disappointed.

"Sorry, Jan but that's all my Abra knows," explained Noriko. "And I haven't caught any other Pokémon so it's been really hard training it."

"We want a real battle!" exclaimed the crowd.

Jessica looked around, "Well, that didn't go over well."

A woman with neck-length black hair, wearing a white and purple robe that was filled with a pregnant belly stood up, "I'm not gonna let this pregnancy hold me back. I'll take anyone on!"

"Wow, someone's eager to put on a show," laughed Lizette. "I'm actually surprised she has her belly completely covered."

"Lucas, you should battle her," Jessica said to her brother. "You probably have the most battle experience here."

She pushes her brother onto the battlefield.

"I guess I'll battle you, since my sister is so instant on seeing me in action," Lucas shook his head.

"I'll be the referee," Jessica said taking position. "Now pick your Pokémon."

"I am psychic trainer Laura," said the pregnant trainer. "Let me show you the power of my Pokémon! Drowzee, stand tall!"

Pokédex: Drowzee, the Hypnosis Pokémon. Said to be a descendant of a dream-eating tapir. It was the first Pokémon to use a combination attack like Hypnosis and Dream Eater.

"A Drowzee, huh?" Lucas pulled out a Pokéball from his belt. "I got just the Pokémon for the job. Houndour, let's show them how it's done! Use bite!"

Later in the Evening

Night has fallen over Viridian City and our heroes have gone back inside the Pokémon Center to eat dinner and now are ready to go to bed. Jessica and Lizette discussed something before they're joined by Noriko. They talked to her as Janelle stepped out of her room. They then looked at her with wicked smiles on their faces.

"What?" asked Janelle before being pounced on. "Hey, what the hell? Get your hands of my clothes!"

Jessica grabbed the doorknob to Lucas's room and together the three girls pushed in a naked Janelle inside. With the door slammed behind her she quickly covered herself with her arms.

"Jan, what are you doing?" Lucas looked her up and down. "You're naked."

"Yeah, thanks to our knocked up traveling companions," Jan blushed.

She turned around and tried to open the door. This left her butt uncovered and caused Lucas to blush.

"Damn it, they locked the door," she sighed. "Now I'm butt-naked in a guy's room. I should have never told them how I felt. This is so embarrassing."

"Felt about what?" he asked.

She turned around, "Abo…About you and me. I told Jess and Liz that I had a crush on you and well they took it upon themselves to try and put us together. I don't know why they think shoving me in here naked will help things…"

"So you have a crush on me?" he approached her.

"What? I… Umm… Yeah…"

Janelle nervously looked away. Her head was turned back to him when he put a hand to her chin. He then kissed her.

"I've felt the same way for quite some time now."

Janelle uncovered herself and wrapped her arms around him. Finally able to express their feelings they started making out and fell back on the bed. This is where the scene goes black. We rejoined the two some time later where Janelle sits on top of Lucas.

"That was amazing," said Janelle. "You don't know how long I've been waiting to do…that…"

"What's wrong?"

Janelle held her midsection in pain. Lucas watched as her breasts inflated. Then her back arched forward. She gripped the bed as her flat stomach began to swell starting with the lower half and then growing all the way out.

"Oh, my god…" she muttered.

Lucas was a bit shocked. "Well that worked fast."

"I'm pregnant…no…they didn't shove a pill down my throat…and no the sex couldn't have done this. How did this happen?"

"I don't know, babe."

"God I must look repulsive," she cried.

"No, you're still as beautiful as ever," he put his hands on her round belly and witnessed her bellybutton pop out. "I'll help you through this."

The next morning, the two of them sat on the balcony outside the room. Janelle was wearing a pair of Lucas's boxers with a tank top.

"I'm not as big as Jess or Liz," she said rubbing her belly. "I guess its cause I didn't get pregnant the same way they did. But how did I and everyone in this city get this way? And why is Noriko unchanged? She lives here."

"There's gotta be something she's not doing that everyone else is," he quietly thought to himself for a moment. "Wait she said she was a health fanatic. She's picky about what she eats and drinks. Like her water she drank was manufactured. So she's not drinking the city's water which is something everyone here uses, including you."

"Oh, my god it's in the water."

(Author's Note: This is a joke I've been hearing a lot lately.)

They are finally joined by Jessica and Lizette who smiled as they walked in. Their smiles quickly faded when they noticed Janelle's pregnant belly.

"Jan, when did this happen?" asked Lizette.

"While I was stuck in here with Lucas," she simply answered. "Thanks for locking me in here by the way."

"It worked didn't it?" Jessica laughed when she noticed the two of them holding hands. "And I already knew no little old pregnant belly would change my brother's thoughts. Speaking of a little belly…that's so not fair."

"Jan, you're pregnant…" Noriko stepped onto the balcony. "Guess I'm back to being the only non-preggy left."

"I think we figured out how everyone is getting pregnant," said Janelle. "It's in the water supply. Team Rocket must have put something in the water. It makes perfect sense. It explains why you're not pregnant."

"That's a good theory," replied Noriko. "Lucas, a woman by the name of Lorelei is asking for you. She wants me to take you to her."

"Lorelei's here?" asked Lucas. "We need to see her and tell her what's going on."

A little later the group waits in the Pokémon Center's lobby as Janelle joined them from now fully clothed.

"I'm surprised my clothes fit as well as they do," Janelle lightly tugged on the top of her pants. "My pants are a little snug but that's fine."

"Glad to see you're taking this easy," said Lizette.

"Yeah, what's to worry about?" asked Janelle. "You guys are pregnant and you seem fine. If you can walk down these long routes then so can I. How do I look Lucas?"

"Great, baby," Lucas kissed her.

Jessica and Lizette smiled. Noriko signaled for them to head out. She guided them to where Lucas's mentor Lorelei was staying. As they moved on Janelle walked in the back. The group doesn't notice that members of Team Rocket sneaked up from behind and grabbed her. They reached Lorelei's place and entered. Lucas stayed back to help Janelle in.

"Hey, where's Jan?" he looked around for her. "I thought she was behind us."

"I thought so to," said Jessica.

Noriko stepped out, "I'll go look for her. Go talk with your friend."

Noriko left the three of them to see Lorelei. They headed in. Jessica and Lizette meeting her for the first were surprised to see how busty Lorelei was. She wore a black blouse with a purple skirt. Her red hair was held up in a ponytail and her glasses complimented her blue eyes. The biggest feature was the round belly that rested in her blouse. An even bigger surprise was the fact that she was wearing high-heels.

"Aren't your ankles swollen?" asked Jessica. "I can't imagine walking in high-heels while pregnant being comfortable."

"Believe it or not they don't hurt as much," replied Lorelei. "It's nice to finally meet you girls. Wasn't there another?"

"Noriko, is searching for Janelle right now," Lizette patted her own belly. "I hope she is all right."

Lucas stepped into the conversation, "Lorelei, I see you've gotten to experience Viridian's problem."

"That I have," she said. "This is my fourth pregnancy, third in Viridian."

"Fourth?" the groups said together.

"Whatever is affecting the people of this city is affecting them in different ways," explained Lorelei. "Some give birth quicker, some give birth to multiples. My second pregnancy resulted in me carrying three eggs and the third two. I think this one might be just one. I'm hoping."

"I think we figured out what's causing the infinite amount of pregnancies," Lucas put a hand on Lorelei's belly and felt movement. "Team Rocket has put something in the water."

Lorelei stroked her chin, "Hmm…if we could find their base of operations we might be able to reverse what they've done."

"Guys!" Noriko burst into the room. "They got her. Team Rocket got Jan!"

"What?!" Lucas became angered. "I'm going back to the Pokémon Center and getting a hold of Professor Oak! They'll regret taking her!"

Team Rocket HQ

Janelle hung chained to a wall. She was approached by Team Rocket's mad scientist Professor Namba who held a pill similar to the ones used on Jessica and Lizette. He put it in her mouth and made her swallow it. As he walked away Janelle's belly began to grow again. The button on her pants burst off sending it across the room. And her shirt no longer could contain her belly as it now reached to her ribcage.

Preview

[Jessica Narrates]: Janelle has been kidnapped by Team Rocket and Lucas is looking to save her.

Lucas stands before a video phone with Professor Oak on it. Two Pokéballs are sent over to him and he leaves the Pokémon Center.

[Jessica Narrates]: He's taking no chances and calling in for help.

One of the Pokéballs popped open outside in the city and out came Lucas's Fearow, of which flies off after receiving a command from Lucas.

[Jessica Narrates]: And don't think we're staying out of this.

Jessica, Lizette, and Noriko called out their Pokémon to aide in the assault on Team Rocket headquarters and are surprised by the appearance of Lorelei's Jynx.

[Jessica Narrates]: Next time! "The Viridian Caper Part 2! Lucas's Determination!!" See you soon!
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Comments: 65

Loralove8 [2017-05-08 02:57:34 +0000 UTC]

If I was a pokemon trainer I'd probably not drink water no more-


Yeah F*** that.

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XxGamerGirlxXD [2017-03-24 22:59:38 +0000 UTC]

I had no part in this

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Alex-Vulpix [2015-03-04 02:36:55 +0000 UTC]

This is neat.

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SpatialRendOfOrange [2014-09-07 18:39:40 +0000 UTC]

One thing I would like to know is why almost every single "new trainer" is like 15+. And most of them are girls.

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Infierno4551 In reply to SpatialRendOfOrange [2014-09-08 00:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Well with what happened to the girls, can you see it happening to boys.

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rain321q [2013-11-21 18:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Onix just seems like a fun idea mabie nurse joy she is huge

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Infierno4551 In reply to rain321q [2013-11-22 06:09:39 +0000 UTC]

It's actually Eevee.

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rain321q [2013-11-21 03:00:32 +0000 UTC]

1: articuno moltes zapdos

2: onix

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Ever-LastingLove [2013-11-20 22:12:23 +0000 UTC]

1) Articuno moltres and zapdos.

2) Chansy/Happiny

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wheatman3 [2013-09-16 21:48:03 +0000 UTC]

where's part 4?

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Infierno4551 In reply to wheatman3 [2013-09-16 23:41:34 +0000 UTC]

work in progress

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wheatman3 In reply to Infierno4551 [2013-09-17 03:14:14 +0000 UTC]

hopefuly it doesn't take forever like last time

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Ani-Lovers [2013-08-14 06:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I know many people have already answered these and you've also given out the answers in the comments, but


1) the bird trio, which each is random


2) you said is Eevee, but have you thought of the possibility of Porygon. Porygon 2 is in Johto and Porygon Z is in Sinnoh.


One sad thing I've noticed about the people that have guessed in the year after you released this is that they went into other region, when you specifically stated in your comments that it had to be in the Kanto Dex, and the only legendaries in the Kanto dex are: Articuno, Moltres, Zapdos, Mew, and Mewtwo. Now, it couldn't be Mewtwo, cause it's made from Mew's DNA, so it could be Mew and 2 of the trio, but unlikely.


Still, it's sad that everyone answers before fully reading the comments, as it stated, again, that they had to be in the Kanto dex. Though, you did say Legendary, but you might also include the Psyudeo-Legendary pokemon from Kanto, like Growlithe/Arcanine and Dratini/Dragonair(<3)/Dragonite.


Also, another thing. You've stated that the 3 pokemon they're carrying are extinct but as provine(sp) in Pokemon 2000, the 3 birds are NOT extinct, just rare like all the others and one of a kind probably.

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Ever-LastingLove In reply to Ani-Lovers [2013-11-20 22:15:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh.

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Infierno4551 In reply to Ani-Lovers [2013-08-14 08:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, for commenting.

1. Yup, it's the bird trio. I'm going with Jessica with Articuno, Anya (formerly Janelle) with Zapdos, and Lynn (formerly Lizette) with Moltres as of my rewrite.

2. The reason I went with Eevee is cause I want it on Anya's team. As for Porygon, I've thought about it but not sure what I want to do with it yet.

My only thought is that their guesses might have been influenced by the existence of Houndour in the series. I do have plans for Mew and Mewtwo, which was hinted at in the latest preview and will be further hinted at in the rewrite of the first issue. The rewrite will essentially be the same with new scenes and actually have more narrative something I've lacked in my old writing. I have considered using Lugia at one point since it's the bird trio's master/leader but I've yet to decide on this.

I've been thinking about Growlithe/Arcanine for awhile now. No plans yet on the Dragonite family but I can't write a series in Kanto and not have it show up in some form.

Team Rocket might just not be aware that they do really still exist. I use the areas from the anime and games but don't consider PPG in the same universe as them, so what happened in Pokemon 2000 hasn't happened.

Well, time to get back to writing. Really want to get this moving again around the release of X&Y.

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Ani-Lovers In reply to Ani-Lovers [2013-08-14 06:43:19 +0000 UTC]

Also, I forgot to put in there, but when are you gonna continue? I read in a comment from May 2, 2011 that you're working on 4, but that's over 2 years ago.

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efmi [2013-07-08 21:12:31 +0000 UTC]

1. Moltres, zaptos, articuno
2. Eeve

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Akarashinichi [2013-04-17 00:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Question 1:entei, Raiku and suicune
Question2:eevee

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Infierno4551 In reply to Akarashinichi [2013-04-17 01:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres

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VoidTheDragonTurtle [2013-02-27 00:08:01 +0000 UTC]

man this is getting good,when will issue 4 be out and if it is already out i can't find it

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Infierno4551 In reply to VoidTheDragonTurtle [2013-02-27 03:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Not sure when it will be out need to get back to work on it.

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VoidTheDragonTurtle In reply to Infierno4551 [2013-03-01 02:16:00 +0000 UTC]

ok thank you for letting me know

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wolves3000 [2013-02-23 15:02:38 +0000 UTC]

please update again this is getting good

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Megamike13 [2012-08-17 00:22:06 +0000 UTC]

Hey in case you dont see them i left a couple comments in the unova story's page

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Infierno4551 In reply to Megamike13 [2012-08-17 04:39:56 +0000 UTC]

I was at work will reply when done with what I'm doing.

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Davidprinhirst [2012-07-15 23:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Whens the next issue (I agree this would be cool in comic form) also great work keep it up XD

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linkem59 [2012-02-20 22:35:15 +0000 UTC]

evee

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linkem59 [2012-02-20 22:34:55 +0000 UTC]

evee

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animepregolover [2011-10-06 22:56:21 +0000 UTC]

I love this story and if you haven't already started, I think you should maby have ash, dawn, and Brock come along and help out and/or have dawn get impregnated too. Also I think you should find someone to put this in comic form.

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Infierno4551 In reply to animepregolover [2011-10-07 04:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and the thought has occurred I just have decided on when and if to introduce them. I would like to see this in comic form if anyone would do it.

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animepregolover In reply to Infierno4551 [2011-10-11 18:12:57 +0000 UTC]

I/you could post around some forums to see if anyone's interested. I think someone like Metalforever or Master-p-123 would be good to contact. The only thing I would worry about is in part 3 where Janelle is naked till the next morning because some people might be offended or not look at the comic because of that. I'd say to take that part out of the comic and it might attract more people to see it. But that's just my opinion and you can do what ever you want.

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JOLTER11 [2011-09-20 19:51:32 +0000 UTC]

i think it will be either eevee, elekid, or magby, for question 2 that is...
<3 the series 2

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KINGCARD2 [2011-07-24 08:50:43 +0000 UTC]

i'm probably already late but for question 2 is it the chansee happiny blissy evolution?

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megs2000 [2011-06-15 00:05:56 +0000 UTC]

When is the next one coming out??????

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Infierno4551 In reply to megs2000 [2011-06-15 04:49:43 +0000 UTC]

Not sure when it's coming out. Currently working on getting out of this writer's block.

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maniax362 [2011-06-10 14:30:49 +0000 UTC]

When will the next story be released?

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Infierno4551 In reply to maniax362 [2011-06-11 06:22:11 +0000 UTC]

not sure it's in the works

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Master66115 [2011-05-27 00:55:57 +0000 UTC]

One should catch a kangkhaskan. It's only the parent pokemon

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Infierno4551 In reply to Master66115 [2011-05-27 06:42:51 +0000 UTC]

sounds like a possibility

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Master66115 [2011-04-29 00:49:55 +0000 UTC]

Also, janelle's extra pokemon is either magby or elekid

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Infierno4551 In reply to Master66115 [2011-05-02 06:36:04 +0000 UTC]

eevee

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Master66115 [2011-04-29 00:46:05 +0000 UTC]

I think that you should have Lucas shield janelle from a swarm of beedrill sometime in this series. Then, he catches the queen and houndour evolves into houndoom taking out the rest of the swarm

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Infierno4551 In reply to Master66115 [2011-05-02 06:35:55 +0000 UTC]

that's a big possibility, houndour is gonna be the strongest pokemon on his team and have to do its evolution in a special way. And Lucas will be defending Janelle soon in #4.

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knuckles2007 [2011-04-06 15:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Jessica is carrying a Articuno
Lizette is carrying a Zapdos
Janelle is carrying a Moltres

Janelle is also carrying an Eevee

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XxBurns [2011-03-08 03:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Be kool if sum1 threw together some visuals for this.

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Diamond-Dragons [2011-02-03 03:28:37 +0000 UTC]

Are the three pokemon Articuno, Zapdos, and Moltres The pokemon remains were found near the Orange islands so it makes perfect sense.

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Infierno4551 In reply to Diamond-Dragons [2011-02-04 06:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Lol I thought I had revealed the answer but I didn't. But yeah it is the legendary birds. The answer to question 2 is Eevee. Each region will only involve its native legendary Pokemon, so there's still Mew and Mewtwo for me to introduce into the story.

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Diamond-Dragons In reply to Infierno4551 [2011-02-04 06:44:30 +0000 UTC]

I only asked one question.

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MKPika [2011-01-29 12:15:22 +0000 UTC]

Maybe one might have mew, one might have celebi, one may have Jirachi, and the other might have shaymin?

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MKPika In reply to MKPika [2011-01-29 12:16:59 +0000 UTC]

well, maybe jessica has Mew, lizette has jirachi, janelle has shaymin, and lorelei has celebi.

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