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InnerSakura16 — Ch.1 Page 3
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Here is page three of Chapter 1.
I do not own this story. It is originally by Stephenie Meyer. I only draw the artwork.
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hope it's ok if i feature some of these in my jurnal...
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an extra frame in which there is no dialogue but getting a shot of both mother and daughter's facial expression close up during the final embrace b4 departure might've been effective and create more emotion. otherwise it's looking very good. nice detail.
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That would have been a good idea. I wish I'd have thought of that. Thanks!
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i just find manga moves too quickily sometimes....maybe it's just me?
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No, I notice it sometimes, too.
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I know, right? There's nothing like it!
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Nope. 
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The pages looks nice ^_^ I could never really picture the mom, but I suppose you did her justice: the over-protective, but somewhat cheerful type. Yeah, I can see that. Anyways, nice job and I can't wait for more pages.
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Thanks. I don't know why, but this is how I always pictured her.
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