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Published: 2007-11-04 06:39:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 7677; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 0
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I spent the last three hours just finishing this up.... I'm dead.Finally! I can actually start my story. The next page is sketched already, and uses the same BG. I'll try to have it up by next weekend, but I have a long to-do list that I should probably spend some time on.
Anyways, the wolf with the green eyes is Fade, I need to get a character sheet up for her. She's dreaming right now, that's why the coloring's so weird, and there's only shading in panels where the white wolf affects it. The white wolf is white simply because I wanted it to be. It'll change in pretty much every dream. Sometimes it'll change colors, or take on the form of an aquantance of hers...
The fight in the first panel was supposed to be more complex and busy, but i got lazy. And yes, that's blue fire.
I'm not all that happy with how this came out, the only parts I actually like are the background and panel 6. (don't ask why)
The beautiful background was done by
EDIT: *****!!!!! I just noticed I messed up her tail in paned 6! Uuuuuuuurggghhhh. I'll fix it tomorrow. >>
Prolouge:
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page 3: [link]
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Page 6: [link]
Page 7: [link]
Page 8: [link]
Page 9: [link]
Page 10: [link]
Chapter 1:
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Comments: 14
The wolf with the green eyes looks like Hecate a little xD from HecateHell
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I've been reading your prologue, vaguely interested partially because of the plot and partially because of your art style. What impresses me the most is that from each new page, you seem to be getting better as an artist. At first, no offense, I found it a little bland and, well...yeah. Now, however, at the start of the first chapter, I found a wicket change and I really really like it. I can go on and on, but I'll stop rambling and say that you've gotten yourself another follower, just from this page.
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Also, I just wanted to mention that after reading some of your descriptions I feel that I must say: Stop bashing yourself. Some of the things you dislike, I either like because it adds something (In my opinion) or I would have never noticed it. I think the coolest panel is #7 (Or whatever the one where Fade's head is mostly in shadow)
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Really, thank you for the long comments, I really appreciate them, and they fuel me to start updating this again...... somehow. lol looking back at the prologue pages makes me cringe. The bad grammar, the haphazard dialogue, the crummy cliches. Ugh. But I plan to re-do the prologue after I finish the first chapter, largely because I changed a couple major parts of the plot, so the prologue needs to change to fit in(Mostly timeline issues). But that's something to be tackled at a later date, so I don't have to fix it again when something else changes. I'm really glad you plan to watch this, and I realy want to get back to updating it.
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hey this is great another person who makes comics I read them all and they sound great,keep up the good work
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Oh this looks pretty good
Cant wait to se what will happen on the next page
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that looks really cool, if you ever need some help with the back grounds I still here
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