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Published: 2013-12-23 02:52:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 675; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 1
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Dude this drawing is great, it shows improvement and potential. At first glance the subject matter is shown and rendered within the frame. Definition is shown, but I feel that alittle bid more time and patience could've gone into the work.
The mere fact that you went through the trouble of getting an original reference, and then used your creativity to clothe her is superb! (could it be that you used the same Attack on Titan, Mikasa screenshot that I have on my pc e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
But you understanding of anatomy and form is lacking. If you look at your reference, the angle and curve of the upper body forces her hips beyond her shoulders, in order to balance the weight. You didn't capture this crucial adjustment in weight, and so your overall composition is missing that dynamic energy that I KNOW you are capable of doing e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
So overall, your creativity and eclecticism is most noticable e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thanks so much for the critique! ^^ I have a link to the pose reference I used in the descriotion, I didn't use any others.
I know my anatomy is a bit wonky, that's why I'm practicing. ^^ I don't think that it helps that I drew this on a flat table. I'm short, so my view of the paper is skewed, which really kills the proportions.
I'll keep practicing. I hope my anatomy gets better!
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Yes-you are welcome buddy! I saw the reference you used now, it's an awesome pose that can be quite tricky.
I use 's pose studies plenty of times and they've really helped me to better understand the human body.
This is just one of many that she has, 
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Eeeeeeh.... Not a big fan of pinup myself.
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Lol 
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Disregard that silly comment ofmine about Attack on Titan !
And you are welcome
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No, it's fine! ^^ Thanks for the tips!
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Glad the stock was helpful, thanks for showing me
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Any time! ^^ thanks for the help!!
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xD Thanks. ^^ I really tried! She loved your drawing, by the way!
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im so happy she did 
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