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Published: 2012-11-07 23:00:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 449; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 3
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Description Love



Love is that cutey
Who's in your science class.

Love is how you blush
When they look your way.

Love is the tingle
You get when they say "Hi."

Love is how your heart pounds
When you're close to them.

Love is the joy
You feel as a couple.

Love is the rush
You get when you kiss.

Love is the excitement
You have when they say "I do."

Love is the care
You two show for your children.

Love is the fear
You feel when the hospital calls.

Love is the dread
You feel as you make your way there.

Love is the sorrow
You feel when they're gone.

Love is the memories
You have of that cutey.
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Comments: 12

vampie-knight-roks [2012-11-08 04:04:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha, god job. I really like it. Kinda convinent becuase the guy I like loves science, even if I'm not in the same class, but we both love science. Do you think that counts? Haha, but no really. You did a great job on this.

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Invictus47 In reply to vampie-knight-roks [2012-11-10 18:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! You're the second person too say that the person they like is in science. I guess I picked the right class. And I think that counts for something.

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vampie-knight-roks In reply to Invictus47 [2012-11-12 05:45:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Really? Wow, cool, okay. I guess you did and it is a great subject. Just saying. Really? Thank you for thinking it counts.

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TheOneFallenAngel [2012-11-08 01:44:17 +0000 UTC]

DAMN THIS IS SO BRILLIANT. W
I Felt as Though You Were Bringing My Emotions Up, Up Into What Felt Like Heaven,
Until Of Course You Brought Upon The Fear And Dread, Bringing Them Down,
Like A Roller Coaster. I Love This So Much.

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Invictus47 In reply to TheOneFallenAngel [2012-11-10 18:56:18 +0000 UTC]


Wow. I can't believe my poem did that. And I thought that it was really simple and wasn't going to be all that great. But I've had great comments and a lot of favs.
Thank you so much!

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TheOneFallenAngel In reply to Invictus47 [2012-11-11 04:55:58 +0000 UTC]

It's Way Better Than Simple! And Np Hun.

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stjimmyrocks [2012-11-08 00:49:14 +0000 UTC]

ha the guy I like is in my science class.

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Invictus47 In reply to stjimmyrocks [2012-11-08 01:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I can connect with people through my poetry. I was going to put the class that my crush is in but then that would be way too obvious.
Let's keep that hush hush...

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stjimmyrocks In reply to Invictus47 [2012-11-08 02:18:06 +0000 UTC]

you definitely can! It's so weird when you write a huge explanation and no one faves it and yeah, that might be smart

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Invictus47 In reply to stjimmyrocks [2012-11-10 18:58:08 +0000 UTC]

I know. It doesn't make sense to me.

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Appendagelord [2012-11-07 23:02:52 +0000 UTC]

SO sad! I cried! Omg Exactly how I feel.

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Invictus47 In reply to Appendagelord [2012-11-07 23:13:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry! I didn't mean to make you cry.

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