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It's so cute! But jack and selene really shouldn't swear in front of her...
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fantastic comic!! and look, the dark veins on jacks face got smaller. yeah!!!!
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Oops, sorry I must have done a typo in my translation!!!! 
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aahahahah! I willk fix it don't worry
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I believe the "you're" in the second panel should be "you'll" or you could change it to "I won't let you fall if you just stay still."
Sorry, my inner grammarnazi is coming out. Still awesome, btw!
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it is only the cutest piece of Dark!Jack you will ever see, and you really go start at the beginning because i will tell you this, this series is SO worth following!
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I see.
also the name of the story reminds me of a Faniction I am writing about which is a Alternent version of the actual movie.
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Aahhh. Now i get it. Good luck writing!
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thanks do you want to hear what the story is about?
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sure! how far along are you?
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I will send you a Note.
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Woah, that's intense. O.O
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you really like it. so what was your faverit part?
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when jack is taking to jamie's mom and she's like "why did you save her from the lake?" and jacks all like, "because my sister drowned in a lake and when I saw her i thought of my sister."
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you like that part I don't know what part I like probaley when he saves Sophie life and explains to Jamie and his parents why he saved Sophie and telling his past and how he became Jack Frost and even about the Gaurdines.
also do you think you could draw a picture or even a comic of one of the scenes like Jack saving Sophie life or telling the Bennett family why he saved Sophie life?
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Sure, I could take a stab at a comic. Any time you need it by, I'm kinda busy with some other requests...
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well could you draw a comic of Jack saving Sophie life I have thought of a epic story for how it happens.
Jamie and his friends and his Little Sister Sophie are sledding or Jamie teaching Sophie how to skate and either one and after Sophie falls in people gather near the ice like people do in rescue movies and TV Shows when someone falls into a frozen lake and people gather around the lake yelling That Little Girl Fell Into The Lake Was That Sophie Bennett Someone Help Her Jamie trys to go rescue her but people hold him back saying he will fall in to Jamie parents show up or were already there watching there kids and they are obviously worried Sick either Jamie mom is trying to run to the ice to save her little girl and his held back buy Jamie dad the mom yells SOPHIE or both the mom and dad are held back buy someone in the crowd so they don't fall in a rescue team was about walk on to the ice and dive in to rescue Sophie or some men with pick axes are about go on to the Ice and Break it to rescue Sophie but before they do Jack frost dives in out of nowhere into the hole Sophie fell in and 30 seconds later Jack frost comes out of the Ice with Sophie snuggled in his arms People look stunned to see Jack saving Sophie and they are stunned to see he is just a kid because when working with Pitch he kept hood up but after he rescues Sophie his hood falls off and people could see his face like voices in the crowd are saying LOOK AT HIS FACE HE JUST A KID THATS JACK FROST HE NO OLDER OR YOUNGER THEN MY SON the police lower there guns because they cant shoot a kid and there afraid they will hit Sophie Jack either walks or levitats toward Jamie mom and when he gets to feet in front of her he hands Sophie to Jamie mom the mother hugs Sophie so tight and sobs over her Sophie cry's in a frighten tone Jamie runs up to Jack says in surprised tone you saved my Sister Thanks Jack looked at the shocked crowd. He pulled his hood over his head and flew off somewhere,he heard Jamie screaming his name and for him to come back but he didn't he just kept flying to who knows where. Jamie watches as Jack flies further away, Jamie whispered sadly" Jack...." everyone started leaving, his parents told him that they had to go and take Sophie to the hospital so she could be looked at. Jamie said" I'm going to find Jack he's still here in Burgess somewhere..." he then ran towards where Jack flew. His mom and dad yelled for him to cone back but he didn't, the two went to the hospital for Sophie's sake. Jamie was deep in the woods calling Jack's name, as minutes went by the wind got harsher, the snowy was falling hard Jamie knew he had to find shelter but he was worried about Jack more even if he was the prince of winter and the cold wouldn't effect him. You can continue the rest. I still have more to add but I wanted to see how you like it so far.
so what do you think?
or there this idea I got from the second Xmen movie like what if when Pitch offers a alliance with Jack and Jack takes his offer and when they shake hands Pitch inject Jack with his dark powers that not just turn Jack blue coat to black and make him look evil but also brain washes Jack that he is not in control of his action or even knows what he is doing like he help Pitch he freeze and terrorizes the world or just Burgass at first and when he and Pitch freezing and terrazing Burrgass he is about to Freezze Jamie and his family but a Police men shots him from behind but Jack is immortal he cant die then his coat his eyes turns back blue and he comes to his scenes he gasp in fright saying in this hoorfied or embarrising tone What Have I Done right when he see what he is doing then flys away. and maybe he limps because he was shot in the leg and when telling the story to Jamie and his parents and the police after he saves Sophie he says how he can feel any love or warm he says I can feel pain thanks to you office when you shot me and the office who is the Chief AKA Calab and Clauds Father feells embarrist and remorse and so awwfull for shooting Jack.
what about that one?
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