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PLEASE READ BEFORE YOU COMMENT!Here is the latest page folks and Author Sama wanted to include some notes about it ^___^
You might be wondering how such an awesome dragon was defeated like that (wave goodbye as it desolves in the background there)
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1-this is Uchiha Sasuke we are talking about.
2-evil shuriken is not exactly something a random ninja would pull off
3-Kumiko and Sauske are having this fight for a reason..to prove thier existance to each other (especially on Kumiko's side) and she can't exactly make sure he aknowledges her when he is dead ,right?
4- Sasuke is not taking Kumiko seriously yet.. and she feels humiliated..so by pulling out something so big..she proved her self worth and is making him take her more seriously ,and in the same time, she didn't go far with that technique herself ,i.e. (uchiha Sasuke, I m going easy on you), which is the biggest insult anyone could shoot at Uchiha Sasuke, he is being underestimated, which is the thing realized when he pulled himself out of danger..
Point deliverd everyone?
now why didn't i write that in the dialouge?!? Becasue I HATE Battle chit chat!! I will never get the point of enemies explaining thier secret techniques to each other in the middle of a fight!! its something I promised myself not to do whenever I can!
now ENJOY ..and..COMMENT
now I the artist would like to bring you to the attention of a new coloured page this week!
please check it out! 
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lol XD exactly~ It's true it's for the reader~ BUT~ it can be done in thoughts~ the people fighting don't have to break into conversation from the middle of their death battle 
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Wow this is absolutely wonderful. I'm praying that no one else walks into the room or I'll have to close the page. And know me, I'll forget the link and end up searching for hours.
Question: (again, sorreh) You said it was a summoning jutsu, if I remember correctly. But summoning jutsus are used with creatures that are of flesh and blood, like Sasuke and Kumiko, but that dragon seemed to be of sand. So is it really a summoning jutsu or like the Water Release: Water Dragon Blast Technique, which only creates the shape of a dragon with water?
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Lol
The author is busy to answer the more *story wise* questions but I didn't want to ignore you till she appeared
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Lol indeed. My boss is a dictator and will peer at the little buttons I have open at the bottom of the screen. So he can tell if I shirk >.<
Haha I'm fine; I can wait. Of course you're busy! With normal life plus this doujinshi! I can barely upload my art homework haha.
-nods- Got it!
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I'm sorry my posts always take a long time to catch up with the story, and you two really have been working hard on this. Wow, it's been over two months, and I have 37 deviations stacked up on my watch list... It'll take me a while to get through it. O_o Yet, I get to read more too, which is definitely worth it. I especially appreciate action-filled panels like this. Sasuke's motion with the shurikan is almost flawless, and I love the showers of sand cascading over him as the dragon collapses.
Thank you so much for there being no battle chit-chat, which is probably makes every story in shonen manga drag a little. I don't mind if there's some talking or a flashback, but if it's overdone it gets old fast.
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aww thank you! Im so glad you agree! It does get pretty tiring when watching Naruto especially and they just stand there after fighting talking when all you want them to do is fight and get on with it! Well..if it can't be done in the anime or manga then atleast it can be done here
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Yeah I know! (referring to battle chit-chat) It's like, you learn a secret technique, say, passed down from your ancestors, you use it, then you explain exactly how to create it to your worst enemies...-_- What's the point of calling it secret then??? XD I just had to get that out there, so sorry if it seemed kinda random and weird... XD
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Not at all XD What you said made sense and goes along the exact lines of what the author and myself think and hate about the chit chat
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XD
I bet people don't do that in real life XD (If they did their ancestors' ghosts will come haunt you, at least that's what happened in a few Chinese martial arts movies and novels...)
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Battle chit chat. LOL! I love fighting anime, but I must admit I also laugh when the enemy goes into in depth explanations about their "secret" techniques mid-battle. In any case, I love the expressions on the 3 close ups at the bottom. Pretty expressive of the pointers you were laying out. Haha!
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*still so happy you like the expressions! *
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Oh yeah ! tell me about it XDDD
grasps a microphone as ANNOUNCE (THE SECRET to thos justu is ...) *the enemy grasps a note book and write down XD *
the funny part is that no one actully did
the other funny thing is when the music playing is like ( AHH ! DEATH! FEAR! TENSION) when it sounds like a lecture or something
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LOL! And the lecture goes on for half an episode, but in the meantime, the opponent just stands there and does nothing. LOL!
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That's called *LOVE FOR KNOWLEDGE* XDDDD
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i agree, i hate battle chit chat.... "here, let me stop and tell you all about this jutsu, and while i do that, you can recover to kick my ass, when i, instead of telling you all this, could have killed you."
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LOL XD I always imagined that during such fights (like in chunin exam) the judge could go to get a sandwitch and audiance could go into a nap *wake me up when the talk part is over XDD *
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that's THE Sasuke after all
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hehe lol as expected from kumiko
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that's THE Sasuke after all
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yeh i see
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sasuke looks mad...
this is a great doujinshi so far
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thank you so much! XD ~
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*loves the cheering* XD~~~ yeah!!!! *holds giant poster with "GO KUMIKO " on it*
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Yeah!! *helps you hold poster*
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No time to read, kumiko looks cute, sasuke is a poopoo head, all is good all is well
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Lol! You ok there?
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woooooooW! you so talented! seriously! i love your story! and way you draw! speachless! how did you get so well??? if i may know? and what type of pens or pencils do you use to draw???? please answer me as soon as possible! ^_^
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lol! Thanks so much! 
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^_^!!!! thankies!!! ok i already it was awesome!!!!!! i think i fell in love with it! lol! thanks again! I will be expecting the next chapter!
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awwwwwwww thank you! so much!!!!! *hugs you tigh* your soooo awesome!!!! and again YOUR ART WORK! *faints* IT'S WONDERFUL! I CAN SO MISTAKEN IT FOR AN ORIGINAL OF THE REAL AUTHOR!!!!!! I'll be waiting for the next chappie!!!!!!!!! oh and well I also wanted to ask you a favor.....
~bluecherryblossom!
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*smiles* oh but i do!!!!!! it is awesome! believe it!!!! lol! and well my favor that i wanted to ask you was...if...i.....can.be your student!!!! omg! that was hard to say >_< can you please teach me how to draw? i kind of suck! =_= please!!!!!!!!
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lol! omg! 
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Aaaaaahhhhhh sorry for the long time to comment @___@ Anyways, a comment : D
Awwww dragon got the heck beaten out of him ;___; But the fight is still getting more and more intense o.o I like how you esplained it in the description, it all makes sense : O
I love the way the whole page is drawn X3 The expressions on their faces and the details in everything is so awesome o.o Sasuke looks pissed off O_< I hope this fight lasts for a while XDD It's so awesome :3
Update sooon! And I think you made another page earlier I didn't comment O_< Must go and comment @__@
Awesome-ness X3
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That definately made me smile! XD~
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thats not the evil shuriken. thats the lame shuriken naruto summoned when he first saw sasori.
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Wow, fully cool, even if one talks not much!XDD
I must read myself still the other chapters, because I read only
first. But I must say to read for me very much fun made, I am pleased already on read on!
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glad you are enjoying it so far! hope to see youcommenting here more often
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Aww thank you so much for that!! that really brought a smile to my face!
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OMG!!! *covers face* DIE SASAKE!!! (I'm watching naruto now!) I like the look in her eyes... ^_^
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They are definately going all out now. Awesome page and I love Sasuke's badass expression. X3
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Thank you so much!
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Yeah . . . Sasuke is just the type with split personalities if you can call it that. XD
And you're welcome!
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