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Published: 2015-10-19 15:09:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 271; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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the fandom hates him so he's bashfur naowhe iz being flamed
but anyway im pretty neutral to him, just like the name
weird shading is weird, cant say im proud but meh
ashfur(C) erin hunter
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Very well done! I like the colored line art and the fire in the background! I also like the dark blue you picked as the shadow, it gives a bit of contrast and interest to the picture 
however, I personally think his expression could use some work as the eyes and mouth don't really seem to be effect the rest of the face, and looks a bit out of place to me. Here's some tutorials that might help if you're interested 
I also think his shoulders need a bit more indication as I was not able to notice them the first few minutes I looked at this picture 
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thank you!!
shoulders- ahhh man thanks, i can't believe i forgot them XDD
oh yes, lackadaisy expressions! i did try to contort his face more to suit his rage, but he ended up looking like his face got hit by a truck!so i settled with something plain
yes, i need practice with expressions lmao!
thanks for this critique! :3
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You're welcome, I'm glad I was able to help
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