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Published: 2009-05-07 13:42:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 478; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description ... just thought I might throw a bit of street photography into the mix.

I got careless here... and shot at f/2.8. I had the 24-70mm on and saw this shot and whipped out the 135mm, but forgot to change the aperture @_@

Cropped to accomodate rotation.

Penang, Malaysia.
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Comments: 10

sweet-emotionn [2009-06-15 20:36:39 +0000 UTC]

it's too blurry in the foreground

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iUDEXnCr In reply to sweet-emotionn [2009-06-25 12:06:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the comment! lucky I didn't shoot at f/2.0 eh!

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TMPhotographia [2009-05-07 20:26:52 +0000 UTC]

I really like it and think the focus is great. My only problem is the composition, it seems to be off the horizon line. I love the concept and shot, but it just feels like it was taken on a slope due to the lines and person. My two cents...

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iUDEXnCr In reply to TMPhotographia [2009-05-08 13:41:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks for your honesty! it's very interesting you mention that.

The original image was actually level, but I rotated it and cropped it hoping to create more tension. I shot it with the side of the circular portholes that the person was looking at tighter. I was hoping to add more 'gravity' to the shot in doing so. hmm... perhaps the focus is a little too centred? and therefore loses that tension?

really appreciate your feedback!

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TMPhotographia In reply to iUDEXnCr [2009-05-08 23:25:33 +0000 UTC]

More than welcome.
I see what you are saying now by wanting to add gravity to the shot. It helps give you the idea that you are being drawn/ sucked into the wormhole. The focus is fine how it is, it would have been a wee bit better a step up, but that is then and this is now.
No problem, just trying to help out

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Alsimair [2009-05-07 18:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice shot Gallant. Well composed. You've got a new camera?

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iUDEXnCr In reply to Alsimair [2009-05-08 13:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank

kind of got a new camera

I picked up this 5D second hand real cheap.

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Alsimair In reply to iUDEXnCr [2009-05-08 16:05:47 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations

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Cameron-Jung [2009-05-07 15:45:55 +0000 UTC]

aperture's perfect - really draws you into the figure at the end.

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iUDEXnCr In reply to Cameron-Jung [2009-05-08 13:34:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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