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Published: 2011-03-26 12:22:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 820; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 25
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AH! I finealy got this uploaded! XD sorry it toolk so long I had some stuff that came up and I couldent think of what to put hear... and I still dont XD so yah improv time 8D anyways~ I wanted to do a colab with *CookieCannibleSofiel she did the lines and I coloerds them~ all colors used on Sakura ware taken form screenshots of my land of snow DVD and so it was very easy to get the coloers I wanted XDand if any of you would be so kind as to critique this I thank you ^^
Lines by *CookieCannibleSofiel [link] the likes them selves
coloring be me
Sakura Haruno (c) Masashi Kishimoto
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Ok now this is actually pretty good. I just have a couple of concerns. Those pink things...I am assuming they are flower petals? They look way too transparent. Maybe make them more solid looking? Though it might be because you were using a blurr effect... So in that case..... I'm assuming you blurred everything except Sakura so the veiwer's eyes would be drawn to her more, correct? It's kind of odd that even the flower petals in front of Sakura, the person we're focusing on, are blurry too. It just looks odd.
Perhaps you can make the flower petals in front of Sakura and the petals that are closest in view, more solid, completely without blur, but have the smaller petals, the ones towards the back of sakura, be blurry.
Also it appears the source of light is coming from the top right hand corner. Since that's the case, Any shadows on Sakura should only be on the left side. (It looks like you have some shadows towards the right of her arm which doesn't work here)
The highlights on her right side should be somewhat brighter. Not too bright but enough to get the point across
And just one more thing...the clouds just don't cut it here. I recommend possibly researching clouds and how they look. Often a series of clouds in one setting won't all be of similar size. They'll vary in shape and size.
Hope I helped.
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^^ thank you~ I had alot of fun with it!
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OMG thats beastly awesome!!!! love it!!!!
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your very welcome all ur stuff is great!!!!
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^^ awww again thank you <3
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