Comments: 8
bluecarolina [2005-12-01 22:49:06 +0000 UTC]
this amazing, like really wow!! but the line reading :
Regretting, for the things we not had done
I think would possibly read better if it was had not done, you may written that by accident or for a really good reason, i am not that observant whatever i am wittering. really wicked poem.
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iwillbeback In reply to bluecarolina [2005-12-01 23:11:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for really flattering comment.
You're right about the line, dammit!, but thanks. Will change it. :rose
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