Comments: 44
GamingBookwormGirl09 [2012-06-15 20:59:39 +0000 UTC]
lovely... i love the last paragraph, it's funny
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Urasue14 [2012-01-09 08:09:55 +0000 UTC]
<3 this is very good lol -looks for more to read-
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jaclynonacloud In reply to Urasue14 [2012-01-09 13:05:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! ;D
*Doesn't write all that much*
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Urasue14 In reply to jaclynonacloud [2012-01-09 15:22:46 +0000 UTC]
You are most welcome ^w^ -doesnt seem like you dont write- lol
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ACE-theDragon [2011-08-24 18:05:48 +0000 UTC]
AAAAAAAAAAAwww! <3
it's so beautiful
The power of love can broken limits!
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xxxDarkMiragexxx [2011-07-31 03:43:46 +0000 UTC]
Finally got the chance to read this!
This is an interesting story overall (wished that it were longer or continued). Definitely a good read for those that are into Pokemon fanfics and such.
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jaclynonacloud In reply to xxxDarkMiragexxx [2011-07-31 03:48:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I just wrote it 'cause I was bored and I needed something to go with the picture... I'm not much of one for writing fanfictions.
Thank you! ;D
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xxxDarkMiragexxx In reply to jaclynonacloud [2011-07-31 03:52:27 +0000 UTC]
Well, I have made a fanfiction, but postponed it due to my writer's block. You may read it if you want.
And your welcome.
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Ramorvee [2011-07-29 21:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Is this canon?
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Ramorvee In reply to jaclynonacloud [2011-07-29 22:44:28 +0000 UTC]
Does this actually happy in your world, or your own stories or whatever?
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jaclynonacloud In reply to Ramorvee [2011-07-29 22:48:02 +0000 UTC]
No, this is totally just a random side story I made up all of a sudden cause I drew a gory picture and I was all like, "woah, I should write a story to this" and then I did, lol, isn't that silly? I usually tend to work on impulse, so I have to have the impulse to do it ramble ramble ramble ramble ramble ramble ramble... Lol, I'm a stop rambling now.
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Ramorvee In reply to jaclynonacloud [2011-07-29 22:54:55 +0000 UTC]
Well, I already thought of how I could use it in my world if we ever teamed up or something.
Would you like to read anything I've written?
Oh yeah and Ribbon finally appeared.
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Ramorvee In reply to jaclynonacloud [2011-07-30 00:02:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
Anyway, it would be really interesting. Since I was planning on having Ramorvee zombified anyway, that would be a good way to do it. Then time travel could be used to prevent the outbreak. There would also be an explanation for strange Pokémon like Sunny, but without going against anything you've said was true about them. It just starts with something happening to the egg.
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jaclynonacloud In reply to Ramorvee [2011-07-30 00:09:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh, neat!
Sure, if you want to pull something together! ^^
I trust your logic! ;D
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PrinceofPride [2011-07-29 00:13:16 +0000 UTC]
Argh, my eyes started watering when Cody was walking with Janice to Hearthome and he kept trying to make her feel better, and all the trainers were avoiding them. I'm so pathetic.
Great story by the way.
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RamenTori1 [2011-07-28 10:52:20 +0000 UTC]
i like how they wake up in the end and act as if nothing happened.
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cooltime17 [2011-07-28 08:34:03 +0000 UTC]
nice work
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LackadaisicalLeopah In reply to jaclynonacloud [2011-07-28 01:24:03 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome~
And your fan-fiction doesn't suck like most. XD I thought that I'd mention that.
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LackadaisicalLeopah In reply to jaclynonacloud [2011-07-28 01:26:07 +0000 UTC]
I know. Don't take it personally if you like Pokemon fan-fictions. It's just not my thing anymore. And I think it partly comes from nobody ever reading mine anymore. D:
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jaclynonacloud In reply to LackadaisicalLeopah [2011-07-28 01:31:38 +0000 UTC]
I'm just not big on reading at all honestly. XD
I really like visual representation. ;D
Comics appeal to me; literature, not so much.
I also discovered that stories don't do so well on deviantArt...
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LackadaisicalLeopah In reply to jaclynonacloud [2011-07-28 01:36:51 +0000 UTC]
I love to read. *drool*
I like comics. XD Cocoaferret and Rhaenn both have hilarious Nuzlocke comics.
I know. D:
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xxxDarkMiragexxx [2011-07-27 22:55:27 +0000 UTC]
Just faving stuff right now. Will read the story and tell you what I think about it when I get the chance.
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sapphiix [2011-07-27 22:17:28 +0000 UTC]
ooooh. neat story! ^^
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