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jadeedge — Akibare - LINEART
Published: 2009-09-04 05:41:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 15296; Favourites: 364; Downloads: 0
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Lineart for my new piece. There will be trees and LOTS of leaves everywhere kinda like the Waiting For You piece i did. Except the fall version.
EDIT: "akibare" means "fine autumn day" in japanese.
DO NOT COLOR!!
Original pieces i keep to myself nowadays.
For "in progress" critiques and comments only!
©2009 to me.
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Comments: 36
This piece is sensational! I absolutely adore this drawing. You get a real sense of depth/perception and the two-point perspective is almost bang-on! (three point LOL forgot about the figure e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Did you ever finish this? I’d love to see what you did with it
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That looks like my older sis to me! IT IS AWESOME! Great job on the details! ^^
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Sweet. I like that she's stepping out of the frame.
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she reminds me of the girl from scooby doo.
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amazing. I love the amount of detail that went into the lineart
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I like the details, like how her foot goes out of the framing and hwo her bangs r set up.
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I like the angle and depth of the perspective.
Her pose seems a bit awkward, however. Not anything technical, as she is anatomically correct, but rather it doesn't seem like a position where I would think "she's walking up stairs." This is mostly attributed to her arms, which are both completely straight and outstretched, whereas when walking up stairs you usually have your elbow down at your side
Her right arm would still work being straight if her left arm were relaxed and sort of lightly stroking the railing, being more of a guide than support--then it would really appear as if she were taking her time making it up the stairs, enjoying the scenery
Just something to keep in mind!
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Holy crap . Damn.... Shes cute ... Sexy .. hehe i wish i had a girl friend like that
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cool I love enviroment backgrounds 
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Now that's what I call 'line'art
The girl looks incredible
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Very Cool Expression,And cool name 2
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pretty
really like her eyes and calm expression.
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well, it's awesome and I can't wait for the finished version! minor observation: I'm not sure if the wrinkles in the skirt quite match her leg positioning. just something to check for the future. great job though
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Love the perspective. And how she is stepping out of the picture really won it over for me.
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That perspective is painfully good, though the hand rail under her left arm (our right) is off a tad.
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the one crooked beam? that was done on purpose. i want to make the wood look kinda old and warped in places.
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No, actually, I meant the beam most directly under her hand, the banister, for lack of a better word. It looks... twisted, not straight with the other "banister" on the upper level.
Sorry if that's too ambiguous. D:
Either way, it pwns anything I can do.
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i really like the idea here, though be careful, the perspective of the vertical beams on the hain rails is off, it doesnt match the hand rail up higher
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Thanks! Could you be a bit more specific? I'm trying to see where you're looking at...
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Yeah sorry its hard to explain 
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no prob. i actually made that one crooked so i'd remember to paint the wood old and a little warped.
btw, your stuff is badass! Always nice to talk to people who know what they're doing.
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Always happy to help a fellow artist. I just took a perspective course, so im a lot more in tune to environmental art now 
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