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i'm actually not too happy with this one... i'll prolly ditch it.
what do you guys think??
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I hope you dont mind but i did color it.... i think its awesome..
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I like it...maybe make him look a bit more meanish...but its really good
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he is a smeaxy beast. 
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hmm? this one well...........it looks ok but i think you should change his pose...........go here and make the pose into something like this...........[link] but you could change the BG and the outfit in this pic.
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Nice pics, and glad you're going to go back in to tweak this one. The face doesn't match the 'older body'. Lengthing the hair a bit. Teh, ^_^ this Naruto just not as smexy as your Sasuke one. Come on show us a smexy Naruto.
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Yeah, you could improve on the hair at the least. Seeing how fabulous all the other bishie are with their hair and all.
I think he needs the necklace Tsunade gave him as well, so he's not too bare. ^_^
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everythings good cept hair, too short, needs more wildness to it, MORE YONDIE STYLE
gj!
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What's bishie mean? Oh! And the pic is cool.
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I WANT TO MARRY HIM...
I already Love this blond-foxy-boy, and now he's like... HOT AS HELL...
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hmm... *not good at advanced critiques* Well, the part I really like about this is the stomach seal, which you did really well. However, I think the reason you don't like it might stem from the pose, which seems a little off for Naruto.
I'm not entirely sure what I'm talking about, so I hope it made a little sense
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well... it kinda just plain sucks.
but, yeah... i'm gonna replace it soon.
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'tis nice!!
I think what you don't like it's something in it's face, perhaps
but I like it!! >33
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looks alright
maybe you should make naruto look older though... right now it kinda looks like a boy's face with a man's body n___n;;;
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Very nice work, though I think you did Naruto too much justice, making him look that fit.
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It seems too manly and confident for Naruto, to be honest.
I think something of a bit more childish pose would look muuuuuch cuter.
<3
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Oh. My. Gaara. I. Love. It. 
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It's not bad, it just doesn't seem Naruto-ish enough. Does that make any sense? The angle of the head and body is off, but that's not the overriding issue. It's seems to static for Naruto. I'm sorry I can't give any better advice. Your madly skilled man, you'll think of something.
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yeah, his face and his body don't really quite match. other than that, though, i'd say it's quite lovely. *nod nod*
-Brans
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The face looks great!, but the neck and body seems skewered. The neck is facing forward while the body is facing slightly to the right. That may be why the left side of his torso below the shoulder seems a little large.
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The face looks great! but, it seems as if the neck and the body are skewered. The neck is facing forward and the body is slightly facing off to the right. That may be what makes the left side of the body near the shoulder seem a little large.
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Haha....Its a bit odd cause his face makes him look like he's 12 but his body says he's 18. O_O
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Looks good to me. The hair should be a little wilder though. The Spikes are too uniform.
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i think its good! You should make his hair more wild though~ Thats the only thing i see thats weird about it o3o
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