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Published: 2011-12-04 23:13:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 487; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 2
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Description legend says that soul mates are connected by a red string tied to their ankles.

i don't believe it.

once, i reached down and curled my fingers around that red, red string. once, i picked up the thread, and i followed it to its end.

there was nothing, only a skeleton, with the string caught in its fingers.

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give me a chance
to grasp your hand
with my broken fingers.

my bones remain to this day
but my heart is long gone,
much like yours.

do remind me,
of days before heartache,
of moments the split second before
our bones turned to ash,
our flesh to dust,
our dreams to ruins.

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there are skyscrapers, you see,
they tumble down when i reach for you
and our fingers connect.
the ruins and destruction that we left in our wake
should have been enough to
make us realize that
legend,
is not true.

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a million days is not enough
to make up for what is lost.

legend says i can find my soulmate,
but common sense decreed that
i cannot love just bare bones.
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Comments: 32

ambulances [2012-01-17 00:35:01 +0000 UTC]

this is that kind of empty-beautiful that i love so much. i want to keep it close and safe in my rib cage or something.

sounds weird, but it's true. you write beautifully.

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Jadite In reply to ambulances [2012-01-17 03:06:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you. (: i love to hear that, it makes me happy. <3

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Vanidar [2011-12-28 13:39:18 +0000 UTC]

You did a good job with this The first two lines hooked me in, and you kept the same tone throughout, with slightly varied styles, time frames, and people being addressed, at the breaks, which told the whole story - part by part with a consistent link and metaphor for the connection - the interactions of the finger.

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Jadite In reply to Vanidar [2011-12-29 11:15:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you. i appreciate the comment; it's always nice to know what it is i'm doing right. (:

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DeathlessRose [2011-12-28 06:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh...this is absolutely brilliant!! I love it!

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Jadite In reply to DeathlessRose [2011-12-29 11:14:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you. (:

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DeathlessRose In reply to Jadite [2011-12-29 17:54:22 +0000 UTC]

anytime! you are quite talented!

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xxEmi-AnGeL-chanxx [2011-12-27 23:58:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow.... how sad....

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Jadite In reply to xxEmi-AnGeL-chanxx [2011-12-28 05:26:35 +0000 UTC]

i'll take that as a good thing? thank you. (:

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xxEmi-AnGeL-chanxx In reply to Jadite [2011-12-29 02:57:23 +0000 UTC]

no problem (:

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i-am-a-bridgewalker [2011-12-27 22:50:38 +0000 UTC]

the prose-like first section is my favorite here.

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Jadite In reply to i-am-a-bridgewalker [2011-12-28 05:26:44 +0000 UTC]

i think it's my favorite too.

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TheLunaLily [2011-12-27 09:14:29 +0000 UTC]

This is brilliant.

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Jadite In reply to TheLunaLily [2011-12-27 09:16:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you. <3

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TheLunaLily In reply to Jadite [2011-12-27 09:17:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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NocturnalNoir [2011-12-06 06:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh. This is amazing, hon. I mean... wow. ^^ Incredible, it really is.

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Jadite In reply to NocturnalNoir [2011-12-12 07:37:02 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you <33

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OhSententia [2011-12-05 23:53:20 +0000 UTC]

;AAAA; hogdsfdslfds <333 no words. xD

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Jadite In reply to OhSententia [2011-12-12 07:37:17 +0000 UTC]

orly? i'm suuure you can find some words ;D

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OhSententia In reply to Jadite [2011-12-12 18:34:52 +0000 UTC]

nope nope nope. C: just splendid.

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Jadite In reply to OhSententia [2011-12-17 22:02:52 +0000 UTC]

^///^

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Write4Me [2011-12-05 18:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Ohmygod this is my favourite from you so far (one of my top favourites on dA too)
this is a m a z i n g. keep up the good work, this left me speechless!

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Jadite In reply to Write4Me [2011-12-12 07:37:35 +0000 UTC]

really? why, thank you oh so very much! (:
i'm so glad you liked it so much <3

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Write4Me In reply to Jadite [2011-12-13 02:24:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you for writing such a wonderful piece

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Jadite In reply to Write4Me [2011-12-17 22:02:41 +0000 UTC]

<3.

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hushed-lullabies [2011-12-05 00:13:36 +0000 UTC]

wonderful <3

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Jadite In reply to hushed-lullabies [2011-12-05 04:36:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you. <3

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hushed-lullabies In reply to Jadite [2011-12-06 00:59:13 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome dear <3

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starshinexx [2011-12-04 23:49:31 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful as ever love.

I heard of that legend
and always loved the idea of it,
being tied together by this
invisible, unbreakable string
that most people call fate.

'legend says i can find my soulmate,
but common sense decreed that
i cannot love just bare bones.' <3

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Jadite In reply to starshinexx [2011-12-05 00:06:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you, darling. (:
so did i, i thought it was so sweet (slightly creepy but mostly sweet).

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LadyxXxBug [2011-12-04 23:27:31 +0000 UTC]

WOW dude. I love it!!!

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Jadite In reply to LadyxXxBug [2011-12-04 23:31:11 +0000 UTC]

haha, thank you (:

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