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Published: 2012-06-27 02:51:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 330; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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Description if i wrote you a love poem,
you would never see it.

it would hide,
like a heart hidden beneath raincoats,
protected from the elements.

i would keep it hidden,
pale and beating in the recesses of my journal.

if i wrote you a love poem,
it would be the first step to forgetting you.
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Comments: 22

Postmorteum [2012-07-21 08:02:03 +0000 UTC]

"...beneath raincoats,
protected from the elements."

Wonderful imagery and such great meaning in this one.

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Jadite In reply to Postmorteum [2012-07-21 14:04:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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Postmorteum In reply to Jadite [2012-07-21 14:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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starshinexx [2012-07-02 17:36:45 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is simply gorgeous beyond words. Wow <3

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Jadite In reply to starshinexx [2012-07-03 15:17:52 +0000 UTC]

ohthankyou. x:

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starshinexx In reply to Jadite [2012-07-08 19:13:27 +0000 UTC]

imeantit. Im jealous.

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Jadite In reply to starshinexx [2012-07-09 03:37:19 +0000 UTC]

i can't tell if i'd rather have this piece and the feelings or not have this piece or the feelings. it was sucky.

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starshinexx In reply to Jadite [2012-07-09 15:34:47 +0000 UTC]

heheh, yeah, I understand xD I never really thought about it that way. I guess Id personally have the feelings--as long as the outcome is worth it. Writing is the ultimate freedom for me, when I do it nothing else matters and previous feelings just disappear. Its amazing. But writers block gets in the way of that too often :3

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Jadite In reply to starshinexx [2012-07-10 01:57:42 +0000 UTC]

well, in the long run, it's definitely feelings+writing.
it just scares me sometimes, cause i've done stupid things just so i could write about it.
i love writing. idunno what i'd do without it.
you just need to get back in the swing of it. (:

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starshinexx In reply to Jadite [2012-07-10 02:09:51 +0000 UTC]

wow, have you? like what? I didnt think anyone did that.
Im working on it!! I REALLY AM!!

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Jadite In reply to starshinexx [2012-07-10 02:24:48 +0000 UTC]

erm, stupid things. like pushing my buttons so i could feel what i was trying to write. 'twas stupid. don't do it. i wrote a poem about the stupidity.

oh good. (:

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starshinexx In reply to Jadite [2012-07-10 12:59:41 +0000 UTC]

heheh, no matter what you write about, Im sure it sounds amazing nonetheless

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Jadite In reply to starshinexx [2012-07-10 13:39:55 +0000 UTC]

it was...alright. not as honest as it should have been.

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starshinexx In reply to Jadite [2012-07-10 17:08:37 +0000 UTC]

ah..well, you get better with every piece (:

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Jadite In reply to starshinexx [2012-07-11 03:04:04 +0000 UTC]

meh. sometimes.
rewrites are a paaain.
(i'm currently in the midst of writing-angst, nothing turns out right.)

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starshinexx In reply to Jadite [2012-07-11 20:05:07 +0000 UTC]

well, goodluck jade (:

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arabesque-o [2012-06-28 06:03:49 +0000 UTC]

beautiful<3

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Jadite In reply to arabesque-o [2012-06-29 02:49:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you. <3

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oc-eanwide [2012-06-27 14:19:28 +0000 UTC]


i rather love the second and third stanza.

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Jadite In reply to oc-eanwide [2012-06-27 23:33:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you. <33

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WhisperedInsanity [2012-06-27 03:14:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice <3

"like a heart hidden beneath raincoats"

That makes me feel warm. I love this xD

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Jadite In reply to WhisperedInsanity [2012-06-27 03:36:38 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you. <3
i rather enjoyed this too. x:

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