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WhisperedInsanity [2012-02-24 02:31:24 +0000 UTC]
I looooove the last two stanzas <33
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OhSententia [2012-02-22 04:54:44 +0000 UTC]
"you always told me,
to never be like you.
to not be faithless, blameless,
heartless."
hgdmsklfdjsflasdfs, your poems always get me all emotional. ;n; and then make me want to write something beautiful but it never comes out just as flowy and smooth and perfect as when you write it. <3 -wishes i was better at expressing things through words- xD
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OhSententia In reply to Jadite [2012-02-22 20:58:19 +0000 UTC]
heh, i know the feeling.
and thanks, dear <3 ^-^
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Jadite In reply to OhSententia [2012-02-23 07:21:29 +0000 UTC]
but of course liz. <3
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UnspecifiedUnknown [2012-02-21 15:17:13 +0000 UTC]
"you always told me,
you were just trying to find
someone whose heart wasn't beating,
because that way, they would never
die."
i love the ending.
<3
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Jadite In reply to UnspecifiedUnknown [2012-02-21 23:35:44 +0000 UTC]
thank you, i'm glad to hear it. (: i had my doubts.
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