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Jadite — we ran away
Published: 2012-01-06 03:56:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 383; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 5
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Description you braided honeysuckle into my hair and kissed my nose and took the wheel,
letting miles and fields and forests dissolve in the haze of hot tarmac.

then we crashed into disaster, and i realized that we're not living
no, we're waiting:

for the day we'll soar high above this all
to a place where we don't need to run far (far) away.

with flowers in our hair, and desperation in our eyes,
we ran away into the night, feeling the chains fall away
( from our broken, broken shoulders )

i could feel your bones under my fingertips and i could feel your pain
as we left the only home we ever had, in favor of nothingness.

nothing would be worth it if i spent it with you,
but it would be worth nothing if you did not want to leave everything.

run away with me, into the night, as if we
were just actors upon a movie screen:

two star-crossed lovers, who abandoned their families,
to be with each other.

( and then in the end,
we'll crash, we'll burn, and it would
not have been worth it
at all.

everyone loves a good tragedy, who are we
to deny them? )
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Comments: 21

starshinexx [2012-01-09 19:40:22 +0000 UTC]

a beautiful, breathtaking little something (: Never stop writing love <3

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Jadite In reply to starshinexx [2012-01-09 23:12:47 +0000 UTC]

i shan't (: i wouldn't last five days. <3 (at the very, very most)

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starshinexx In reply to Jadite [2012-01-10 01:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Not writing takes a sliver out of me every day~ I need to get back to it!

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Jadite In reply to starshinexx [2012-01-10 01:58:12 +0000 UTC]

:'D

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iPawed [2012-01-06 12:35:47 +0000 UTC]

i am glad to see that these words found a good home in a beautiful poem. thank you for that (:

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Jadite In reply to iPawed [2012-01-07 04:46:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the words. <3

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iPawed In reply to Jadite [2012-01-07 09:28:19 +0000 UTC]

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UnspecifiedUnknown [2012-01-06 06:41:16 +0000 UTC]

"i could feel your bones under my fingertips and i could feel your pain
as we left the only home we ever had, in favor of nothingness."

&

"( and then in the end,
we'll crash, we'll burn, and it would
not have been worth it
at all.

everyone loves a good tragedy, who are we
to deny them? )"

ahhh. so brilliant. love it

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Jadite In reply to UnspecifiedUnknown [2012-01-07 04:47:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you. <3 i'm so glad you like it.

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susurrousity [2012-01-06 03:58:12 +0000 UTC]

i knew that i recognised those first two lines... this is so beautiful <3

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iPawed In reply to susurrousity [2012-01-06 12:34:55 +0000 UTC]

i feel so famous

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susurrousity In reply to iPawed [2012-01-07 01:26:31 +0000 UTC]

i feel like a stalker...

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iPawed In reply to susurrousity [2012-01-07 09:30:01 +0000 UTC]

nah, i had one of those and you're not even close (;

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susurrousity In reply to iPawed [2012-01-07 21:30:43 +0000 UTC]

you had a stalker? *shudder*

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iPawed In reply to susurrousity [2012-01-07 22:57:49 +0000 UTC]

two. or three, depends how you count. ex boyfriend's not so ex girlfriend (absolutely psychotic woman), mentally unstable man twice my age who lived down my road and who thought that because we both used the same bus service, we were 'meant to be', and another mentally unstable guy, this time about my age, who felt that because i'd been nice to him once, i belonged to him. last guy ended up having his medication changed, and once that happened, it was like he was someone else completely, and we became really good friends.

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susurrousity In reply to iPawed [2012-01-08 01:51:00 +0000 UTC]

wow. i suppose maybe i had a stalker or two, but nothing like that. just teenage issues -_- i hope it's all behind you now, and that everything is okay?

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iPawed In reply to susurrousity [2012-01-09 06:14:32 +0000 UTC]

yeah - they were all pretty harmless people, just not quite sane. the girl was was the worst, but at worst, she was merely vindictive (doesn't mean i don't wish her well in retrospect though, she was a nasty piece of work who even created a dA account to keep an eye on me). it was character building (;

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susurrousity In reply to iPawed [2012-01-10 23:17:46 +0000 UTC]

character building, hah. what an optimistic view! ^^

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iPawed In reply to susurrousity [2012-01-11 09:52:17 +0000 UTC]

optimism is the best thing ever (:

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susurrousity In reply to iPawed [2012-01-12 00:37:01 +0000 UTC]

agreed (:

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Jadite In reply to susurrousity [2012-01-06 05:25:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you. <3 i saw the two lines, and i knew i had to write something.

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