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Published: 2004-04-19 18:48:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 131
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Description Messed anout with in photoshop looks better now i think
Thanks to Lee Foley for help with the story he wrote it better then i ever could

Page 2 is here [link]
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Comments: 11

Bilious [2004-04-26 21:38:37 +0000 UTC]

very nice linework and inking/markering whatever I advise checking out some anatomy books and books on dinamics- the arms and hands seem a little off, but I'm happy to see you didn't cop out by hiding them. ^^ I personally suck at hands but I put them in as much as possible so I can get better ^_^

as for the comic layout, it looks nice! I could so see it published as an indie comic somewhere ^^ my only beef is the text- what program do you use to put them in? The lovely art is taken away by the poor text. ^.^ it's too pixelated. if you use photoshop, make sure the text settings are on "Smooth"... if it's mspaint, er... I don't know how to help that. ^^' but it's readable ^^

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jammy2 In reply to Bilious [2004-04-26 21:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man i really aprechiate you're words. Youre right about the anatomy but i have just brought a few books about comic drawing and figure drawing so hopefully that will help me improve. As for the text i only used paint but i will be getting paintshop soon so maybe that will improve it.

Whats an indie comic ??

Anyway thnks for all the help come back soon page 2 will (fingers crossed) be here this week some time

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Bilious In reply to jammy2 [2004-04-26 21:50:18 +0000 UTC]

lol drop me a note ^^

Indie comics are Indipendent comics ^^ Like an Indie film or Indie bands and suchlike.... er... self published I think... yeeah..

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jammy2 In reply to Bilious [2004-04-26 21:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Will do

And now the whole Indie thing makes sesne :duh:

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Bilious In reply to jammy2 [2004-04-26 21:57:22 +0000 UTC]

bwahahha

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jammy2 In reply to Bilious [2004-04-26 22:02:33 +0000 UTC]

Mwhhhaaaaahrrggkkkk....*cough*.....ghkkk ....*spullter*....... i never was any good at evil laughing

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Bilious In reply to jammy2 [2004-04-26 22:15:43 +0000 UTC]

you shall learn one day, my friend. ^^

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sheebs [2004-04-21 16:30:59 +0000 UTC]

looking cool so far... yay more!

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jammy2 In reply to sheebs [2004-04-21 17:29:57 +0000 UTC]

Yup yup theres more my friends helping me with the story so got plenty to go at just gotta get some pratice at drawing horses

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vilhelmina [2004-04-19 21:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting start Jay. More, more!

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jammy2 In reply to vilhelmina [2004-04-21 09:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Im working on it page 2 should be started any day soon

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