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jan-michael9500 — DOX's New Look
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Published: 2006-11-18 16:26:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 970; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 10
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Yeah, I changed my tigers look. Hey I can't be found wearing the same outfit all the time can't I? XD Sometime around, this kitty's gotta do the laundry from time to time. *wide grin* Tehehehehe!And another thing. I sorta got pretty annoyed with several-too many occasions of seing my tigers costume on someone elses char without saying anything. and when i speak with em they just site some other references... its either we had the same references or the lather... either way, it annoyed me.
LOL so an outfit change is good too ^_^ besides my sephiroth hair was getting pretty old and lame anyway. i mean, since the day i created my tiger! ^_^" so gotta change the hair do too ^_^ LOL
any other do hickies, well is just imported from the old look with i still like ^_^
ok, with all that...
i command you to critique bombardment.... now! mwhahahhaha
dun gimme that "nice" crap because im also annoyed by that now... always getting such comments isnt really productive wouldn't you agree?
I still want to improve my skills, PLUS im not the type to be offended by criticisms unlike some people, so HAVE NO FEAR! critiques!
critiques! critiques! critiques! critiques! critiques!
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thats what i think too, so im'a redo something to fix that.... XD
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I love it! The lineart is crisp and fine, and the outfit is really flowy and natural-looking.
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salamat, pero nagreredo na ako nito ng mas maganda pa ^^ well, fixes lang ... lol
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ang linis ng lineart at ang clear ng details!
It wouldn't hurt kung hahabaan mo konte kamay at paa....
sinadya ba siyang di mag mukhang maskulado?
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yes, ayoko masyadong maskulado ^_^
salamat hah, nagreredo na ako nito currently.. inking stage na... pinahabaan ko na ang mga paa at kamay ^_^
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aabangan ko yan
magaling na artist gumagawa e
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ahehe ^^" kakahiya naman compliments mow ^^
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Damn, I should get your help on clothing design o.=.O;
This looks awesome. The new hairstyle is great as well.
The hair reminds me of a friend of mine though. He has almost the exact same style, minus the long part in the back.
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LOL, if you need some help on designing clothing all ya gotta do is ask me on the notes ^_^ i dont mind shelling out my own ideas of wardrobe 
anyhu, thank you! glad you like my design ^_^
but i must admit though, this new hair style is as common as that of the old one ^_^ LOL
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his face seems more cub-ish but the armor kicks ass!
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hehehehee yeah i noticed when i was inking this one.. ^_^ but thanks ny'huu ^_^
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fine you want critique *thinking of critique* ok, I can't think of any till ya add colour, I think that either the mouth is a little too close to the nose or the chin is too far down, some labelling might be handy, you could make a full profile on him with this costume like strype did, that's be quite cool, otherwise, I can't think of anything else till colour is added
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a new character sheet for the new look? O_o"
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do w/e you want with it, tis your drawing, not mine, lol, I may do one soon, a reference sheet that is, like characteristics, history, etc., you could have like the old look on one side and the new look on the other, arrgh! I'm confusing myself, but I hope you get what I'm saying. lol
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lol, I'll probably be doing one soon, a reference sheet on Oslo, history, physical features, etc.
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do w/e you want with it, tis your drawing, not mine, lol, I may do one soon, a reference sheet that is, like characteristics, history, etc.
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very nice matey! I see you went for a different way of proportioning him too. that's kinda cool matey XD I like it. (funny, i'm actually changing how all my characters look too LOL)
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DETAIL EATING FACE!!!!
luvvit tho man XD no more sword?
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there is, but its with the other costume
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curse you forever for being awesomly talented DX
I like your little drone thingers and the amount of effort youve put into detailing his outfit. The stripes, cracks, strands of hair etc
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nuuuuuuuuu! i am now curse forever..... *dies*...
...umm... im cursed with what?
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soon, is all i can promise, cant promise anything with a specific date ^_^ and as art instructors say and tell my in school, it'l get done when its done ^_^"
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wow nice...oh btw I was coloring one of your older work you requested to color. I am about done too.
I love the new look though..sweet!
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wooooooooo! yay! im excited to see the colors ^_^
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it looks pretty good. I hope to have it finished fully soon. ^_^
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hehehehe mabuti naman ^_^
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is this dox the same dox you use in SSS? kasi kung oo, asan na yung bote niya?
ayun lang. angas ng bagong look niya ah
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yupperz. but no, hindi ko babagohin ang costume nya para sa SSS ^_^
at salamat hah ^_^
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ayus! kay kinahanglan nako ang design karon kay ginaink na nako. hehehe.
inked na ba na siya?
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inconsistent ang imong lines btw...
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me know, mao ganing utrohon... tehehehe, kaw pud baya
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OMG...
Jan... this is awesome!! This is just so cool!
I can't even find the words to describe this lol.
you should draw me someday! lol j/k
Damn man, you've seriously out did yourself with this one.
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lol, maybe, ill get around to considering that someday
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looks like it's time to restart your order hehe
- Ogs
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He look perfect...your art is better every day! ^^
STOP DRAWING THINGS THAT MAKE ME WANNA COLOR IT! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Just kidding...
Good work!
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ohhh... tehehhe
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well a crit is good...just rather love how those with the largest crits cant draw....very well.
but thats just me. I really like this one great new look.
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museum curators are superb critics... but they cant draw zit! XD look at simon from american idol... do you think he can sweep the audience off thier feet when he sings?.... i dont think so. heheheh ^_^ but he is a critic nonetheless and a good one at that... XD
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Well you wanted a critique so I'll give you one, hope you take no offense to anything I say.
First off, the outfit overall is nice but I notice an inconcistancy with the lines in places that seems a bit strange to me. I notice that through most of the work that the lines are thin and detailed but in places I see that some of the lines are more thick and it just seems to be inconcistant as I said with the overall piece.
The way you've done the fabric is very nicely done and seems very realistic for the most part but I see in a few places where some more details could be used to make it even better than what it is at the moment. I'm really refering to the flap that seems to be blown up in by some wind; it just seems to be missing some details but I'm not sure entirely what exactly.
The staff is of course well done overall, but it just seems that it could be done differently and made more... real or detailed or something I'm not real sure how to describe it accurately. What I'm saying I guess is that the staff looks fine and well done but I have a feeling that there is something that can be done to make it look better. I really don't know what else to say or how to describe it but I guess what I'm trying to say is that everything else seems so detailed but the actual staff itself seems to lack a lot of detail so it looks a bit off from the rest of the picture. Maybe once it is colored it will look better and fit with the rest of it more I'm not sure.
Overall though it's awesome and it all kind of blends together so that it all looks like it should be and nothing's out of place. I think that you did a great job and I can only hope that my little (ok maybe not little exactly haha) critique helps you out some in the future.
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the spear eh?... i think i can see what your getting at. it does seem like its bended into a cure at some point because of the perspective. Ill have to fix that
'nyhu, as for line details i didnt place too many line details because i planned on cg'ing this one. so the colors will more than make up for the amount of details absent in the lines ^_^
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I was thinking that if you colored it it would look better. I'm glad you saw what I was trying to say about the spear. Well I'm glad my critique was able to help you out, good luck with coloring it.
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You're rightly welcome then
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