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Published: 2005-06-12 20:12:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 307; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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I shot for the moonAnd landed in a black hole
It sucked in my dreams
And cost me my hope
Now I walk around
Empty-handed, empty-headed
Stripped of knowledge
Lacking passion
You should avoid me
I'm a pothole in your road to success
Parasitic tumor growing on your will
You think you could take back my person
Selfless fool, can't you see
Time passed by and gave me an armor of apathy
Strong enough to repel your concerns for me
Don't waste your time stabbing me with sympathy
Your sword's getting rusty
You should just fuck off and let me be
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Comments: 9
why thank you
i shall look at your stuff now
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Great tone and flow... Like the aggresive tone in the second half... I can relate to this too well...
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yea, definitely better than denting my precious drumheads
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i love this poem (failure) it reminds me of how i feel at times. its good to get your feelings out like that.
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I love that, that is so beautiful. Unique ideas.
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I really like the first stanza and the whole poem.
+ favourite.
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