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jassele — Gray Lifting His Shirt
Published: 2010-08-26 02:30:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 854; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 18
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I'm sorry, what were you saying just now about kicking my ass? Oh, you changed your mind now? Yeah, thought so.Gray showing off his manliness/ fairy tail-ness
5-ish hours on wacom tablet using artweaver and corel for finishing touches (because my corel is all kinds of glitchy)
add an extra hour for some edits after some helpful critique I got.. may edit more if I don't get too sick of this piece haha
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Nice job on the shading, hon. Though I must admit the abs are more than I would expect to find on any white-chested, wavy-haired man with sultry eyes... Rest assured I'd be sincerely intimidated were I ever to encounter abs like these, so lets hope he stays in your imagination. <3
Heh, I'm reminded of a guy in the book I just finished. He was making out with this girl but refused to remove his shirt, because he had previously tattooed 3 other girls' names on his chest. Oops. XD
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o what a coincidence i'm reading fairy tail right now XD
well... to start of.. his arm looks really awkward... the elbow's too pointed for one.. and .. theres just something w/ the wrist.. i'm not sure what.
the abst seem sot be starting too high.. there should be some rib space first...
his neck and head seems bent/ slanted.. i'm not sure if hats what ou wanted..
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thank you for the feedback, I used a reference for this drawing and the arm looked kind of awkward in the reference as well.. but I can try to fix the abs. just.. make the abs start lower I guess? and yeah I wanted his head to be kind of angled slightly. does it look awkward?
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mm.. i guess the head does look awkward but it's hard to explain why .. what kind of angle wer eyou going for ??
yea making hte abs lower would help
uhm.. i dont know the reference you used haha but it's mainly the elbow and hand area that looks weird
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I guess he was just supposed to be tilting his head to the left, and his body is kind of facing the right slightly.
I will make the elbow less pointy, and lower the abs, that much is definitely easy to fix haha.
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o ok.. then i think you should make his head tilt / rotate more.. atm it looks more like his head's shifted to the side
haha alright :]
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