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Published: 2009-06-02 13:20:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1883; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 73
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Description Akatsuli week continues with Zetsu, the half man , half demon spy of the Akasuki who is usually sent to dispose corpses of fallen Akatsuki & the only member who travels alone.



Nexy up, Kisame Hoshigaki
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Comments: 14

Pencil-Fluke [2009-06-02 15:28:59 +0000 UTC]

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Awesome! really great expression and sense of movement e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" /> the colour looks pretty accurate too e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> This style of yours is shakey but somehow attractive. To me anyways. The lines give it that sense of your own style, which is good because it would just look like a snapshot from the actual anime.

One thing ive found is the shading. It looks slightly blunt to me. This character is from an anime,so i personnaly would have made the shading a little sharper, especially at the shadows that the folds on his clothes create. Then again, this could be a part of your style, which is fine.

Another thing is the length of his closer arm. It looks a little too long to me. A human arm would drop down roughly half way down the thighs if they are completely straight. Im not too sure about this character, so i could be wrong.

Overall, this is a pretty good drawing e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> It's got a sense of motion style and emotion. I say keep it up e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

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JazylH In reply to Pencil-Fluke [2009-06-02 17:16:58 +0000 UTC]

I agree. Now that i look at it the arm does look a little too long. I don't know much about the character myself. I only referred to pics on the net. As for the shading, I definitely need to improve on that & make it sharper. I'll try to update it once I finish all members this week. Thanks for the honest opinion I really appreciate it.

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Pencil-Fluke In reply to JazylH [2009-06-02 18:59:14 +0000 UTC]

im just glad to help

Practise always makes perfect. I know that's said a lot, but hardly anyone takes it literally. It's true though

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JazylH In reply to Pencil-Fluke [2009-06-03 06:35:14 +0000 UTC]

Definitely is.

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SWE21 [2012-12-30 15:08:20 +0000 UTC]

A wonderful drawing of Zetsu.

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TheLastParanoid [2012-05-24 19:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Awesome ...

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HeatR8 [2009-06-04 19:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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xaelasis [2009-06-03 20:45:04 +0000 UTC]

nice character, i like it

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BradRy [2009-06-03 03:23:18 +0000 UTC]

I wonder if I'll see Zetsu in action.

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Cacography [2009-06-02 18:26:03 +0000 UTC]

If I had ten bucks, I would commission you. But hopefully I can be the 20,000th page view, ne? ;D

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JazylH In reply to Cacography [2009-06-03 06:36:35 +0000 UTC]

cool, hopefully.

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PenciledWolf [2009-06-02 13:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Woot! First comment!
and~
Very nice job ^^
everytime i try to draw Zetsu
it looks like a chibi
o3o;

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JazylH In reply to PenciledWolf [2009-06-02 15:10:41 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it. He's one of the harder ones to draw indeed.

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PenciledWolf In reply to JazylH [2009-06-02 21:44:16 +0000 UTC]

yes he is
i tried to draw him
but
it came out looking like a piranha plant
XD

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