Comments: 47
Firel-Wolf-88 [2019-11-25 17:19:29 +0000 UTC]
Nice jobe buddy
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90sDrake [2019-10-01 21:42:10 +0000 UTC]
Haha andy and lantern good ones
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jazz316 In reply to SammyD-Productions [2017-12-29 21:54:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, my friend
Lol figured Sparx would always say something funny
Thanks again buddy
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Rootofalllight [2017-07-12 21:04:08 +0000 UTC]
I'm loving this so far. A couple of grammar and spelling errors in this and the previous chapters, but that's just a nitpick. Also, man is Adir going through a lot of grief right now.
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jazz316 In reply to Rootofalllight [2017-07-12 21:05:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. im very glad your enjoying it. Sorry about the errors I still have a lot to learn.
Yeah the poor guy truly is going through a lot for someone of his age and with the bearing of the world on his shoulders.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-12 21:33:20 +0000 UTC]
If he thought Cynder was bad, what till he meets Malefor.
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jazz316 In reply to Rootofalllight [2017-07-12 21:34:01 +0000 UTC]
Truly. But as a Journey goes, theres one trial at a time.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-12 21:40:56 +0000 UTC]
He might find another friend along the way.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-12 22:05:42 +0000 UTC]
Or a partner like Spyro had with Cynder.
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jazz316 In reply to Rootofalllight [2017-07-12 22:06:47 +0000 UTC]
Good guess. Only time will tell
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-12 22:10:37 +0000 UTC]
And let's hope his family didn't die.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-12 23:40:53 +0000 UTC]
And perhaps get his first kiss before this is all over.
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jazz316 In reply to Rootofalllight [2017-07-12 23:41:20 +0000 UTC]
Who knows only time will tell and theres still a lot of work ahead
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-12 23:44:34 +0000 UTC]
I'm a patient guy. I don't mind the waiting.
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jazz316 In reply to Rootofalllight [2017-07-12 23:44:55 +0000 UTC]
I hope you continue to like the story.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-12 23:46:33 +0000 UTC]
I will. I wonder how Adir would be like in the original Spyro games?
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jazz316 In reply to Rootofalllight [2017-07-12 23:47:48 +0000 UTC]
I never really thought of that actually its a nice thing to think of.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-12 23:49:26 +0000 UTC]
He would probably have a completely different story.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-13 00:39:38 +0000 UTC]
Although, I think he would still have the same powers as Spyro throughout the trilogy. I can imagine him laughing at Ripto.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-13 04:49:35 +0000 UTC]
Especially his hatred of dragons for being better spell casters than him.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-13 13:39:12 +0000 UTC]
And then there's the Sorceress. Adir will personally want to kill her after finding out she wants to be immortal by using a spell that requires the ripped off wings of baby dragons. And she doesn't have to kill them to get the wings, but she can't have any dragon stop her.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-13 14:33:34 +0000 UTC]
Not sure what he will think of Gnasty Gnorc.
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-13 14:44:12 +0000 UTC]
Considering the fact that Ripto hates dragons, I wonder how he feels about humans?
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Rootofalllight In reply to jazz316 [2017-07-13 15:04:48 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I was also thinking about your other stories.
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PinkWarrior30 [2017-06-01 18:26:58 +0000 UTC]
nice job with this chapter.
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Dragons-are-cool86 [2017-05-20 21:20:33 +0000 UTC]
This story keeps getting better and better.
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jmthc [2017-05-19 20:44:51 +0000 UTC]
wow interesting story I hope the final confrontation is soon
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jazz316 In reply to jmthc [2017-05-19 20:45:57 +0000 UTC]
Its coming, I assure you
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jmthc In reply to jazz316 [2017-05-19 20:47:43 +0000 UTC]
I look forward to reading it thank you
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