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Published: 2009-12-07 17:28:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 3679; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 77
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JoelTrousset [2010-01-09 01:15:33 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This series of portrait really looks like a new step in your photography, compared to older works.

The colors and the attitude really make this portrait pop, creating a visual appeal that draws my mouse to the +fav button.

I focus a lot on technical aspect (some people say too much) so I'll start by this point.

First, I'm glad to see a great shot made with a point&shoot. Proves that the gear doesn't make the picture.

The use of a wide angle, usually deprecated in classic portraiture really brings out the eccentric pose and the attitude of the model. The distortion magnifies the importance of the arm and the mouth, and increases the oddness of the pose, in a good way.

The lighting is also very efficient. Simple, but sufficient. I love one source setups, usually very dramatic. Just enough light to see the eye trough the sunglasses, and bring out the face. The background light (same source? combo? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sโ€ฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> ) helps to cut the model's dark hair from the background.

I just downloaded the picture in full size, and I was quite surprised to see the bizarre effect you applied. The portrait really works well on a small scale, but I don't think the filters you applied are necessary. Just looks muddy & noisy at full scale... (even though I was surprised by it's sharpness in small view). Anyway, it's isn't supposed to be viewed very close so that doesn't really matter.

Appart from that, I don't see much to improve this shot. Maybe a bit of post to remove the blemish on the chin and on the left forearm, and some dusts on the background, and a bit of work on the nails? But that's not really necessary.

The colors really work well together, soft beiges and whites, with those hints of red that really flash.

The overall composition is classic but works well.

Just keep up the good work!

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jeally-bullet In reply to JoelTrousset [2010-01-09 13:20:38 +0000 UTC]

wow iยดm so glad you like my work and took the time to write such a detalized critique for it i really really appreciate that!

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Greenixi [2010-05-25 17:45:14 +0000 UTC]

I like here face very much , because its happy.

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jeally-bullet In reply to Greenixi [2010-05-26 19:49:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much :3

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farcry77 [2010-01-05 05:02:13 +0000 UTC]

Featured [link]

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jeally-bullet In reply to farcry77 [2010-01-05 11:16:55 +0000 UTC]

wow thank you so much for the feature โ™ฅ

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xgasoline [2009-12-23 09:42:54 +0000 UTC]

Awesome portrait! Everything's in the attitude!

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jeally-bullet In reply to xgasoline [2009-12-23 17:36:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much^^

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Bunniesandsheep [2009-12-23 01:28:17 +0000 UTC]

I love the lighting on the face, very nicely done =]

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jeally-bullet In reply to Bunniesandsheep [2009-12-23 17:36:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you^^

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J-PAR [2009-12-22 22:05:24 +0000 UTC]

epik win!

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jeally-bullet In reply to J-PAR [2009-12-23 17:36:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks^^

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J-PAR In reply to jeally-bullet [2009-12-23 20:56:57 +0000 UTC]

anytime ^^

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femketje [2009-12-21 15:39:26 +0000 UTC]

great!

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Jazzhead [2009-12-21 03:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Sweet

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sneakazz [2009-12-15 22:28:08 +0000 UTC]

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TerraRhapsody [2009-12-11 14:24:23 +0000 UTC]

Lovely lighting and details! Such a cool expression

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jeally-bullet In reply to TerraRhapsody [2009-12-11 14:26:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much :3

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TerraRhapsody In reply to jeally-bullet [2009-12-11 14:52:56 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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flashfloodstudios [2009-12-09 17:28:39 +0000 UTC]

this caught my eye in a sea of thumbnails. love the expressiveness to it and nice light!

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jeally-bullet In reply to flashfloodstudios [2009-12-09 17:38:59 +0000 UTC]

wow thank you very much โ™ฅ

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farcry77 [2009-12-09 02:55:10 +0000 UTC]

I like the way you have incorporated red in this shots. They are mild and little yet adds much required color cheer to the shot. And the model expressions are strong as well

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jeally-bullet In reply to farcry77 [2009-12-09 10:42:11 +0000 UTC]

oh i really appreciate your feedback! i wish there were more people, who would give those
thank you very much^^

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farcry77 In reply to jeally-bullet [2009-12-09 10:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Its my pleasure.

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Bogdan-Yemets [2009-12-07 17:29:56 +0000 UTC]

WOW! u'r good! well done! BRAVO! )

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jeally-bullet In reply to Bogdan-Yemets [2009-12-07 17:30:38 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you so much ^///^

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Bogdan-Yemets In reply to jeally-bullet [2009-12-07 17:38:01 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^_______^

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