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Hasele [2020-02-16 20:58:03 +0000 UTC]
Lemme get this straight he tried to take over the Foot Clan and teamed up with Jagwar only to betrayed and killed am I right.
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jebens1 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-17 00:15:21 +0000 UTC]
Yes. For Jagwar, death is the fate of any who cross him.
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Jisow777 [2020-02-09 06:51:24 +0000 UTC]
Lets see, villain beating the heroes without a fight and over relying on magic for ordinarily people, check, heroes ignoring advice for no reason and making the younger goupe more intelligent while making the adults complete morons, check, making everyone stupid for the sake of a plot that doesn't work for the characters at this point in time, check, completely ignoring every bit of advice I've been giving you, check, when will this stop, I feel like Foghorn Leghorn, I keep exploring it to you and you keep ignoring in, I feel like I have to smack you over the head just to get you to listen, not a nice thing to think about or say out loud I know but you're giving me little to no other alternativesΒ
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jebens1 In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 07:44:00 +0000 UTC]
What do you want from me?! This is for a future fic that revolves around the kids called Rise of the Young Ninjas. I'm giving a chance for the kids to shine.
How would you want everything to go?
Your asking too much of me!
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jebens1 In reply to calmoose415 [2020-02-12 02:46:57 +0000 UTC]
It's still a ways to go. But there will be some chapters focusing on the ninjas. Only one's I know of will be when they meet the Justice Force and the old Justice Force.
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jebens1 In reply to calmoose415 [2020-02-14 17:43:44 +0000 UTC]
Good point, I think I will have them all make a few mistakes. But like I said, it's still a long way off.
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Jisow777 In reply to jebens1 [2020-02-09 10:53:13 +0000 UTC]
I asking you to stop been an idiot and ruin characters left right and centre for the sake of a plot, you don't have to make everyone else useless for the "Young ninjas" to shine, you can make it so they can stand along side them, not rise above them too soon, if you can't do that then don't do anything, if you can't write a story well then don't write at all.
DarkMagicianmon ,Β TMNTony , BozzerKazooers and you have worked together to created one of the best crossover fics in both fandoms and I having to pull myself away from working on my fic to keep you on track, no one asked me to do it and trust me I'd rather not constantly criticise you every other time, but I will not sit idly by and have you write these unfaithful representation of some of these most beloved characters and have others blindly praising them without actually taking into consideration how in many cases this is not how some of them act, maybe they did once but it came back to bite them and they learnt their lesson only for you to throw it out the window and regress until they're out of character.
Like I said before way back when, I've been watching every episode of both the 2003 and 2012 so I can do both of them justice, so much so I almost can't stand watching them anymore, but it's all worth it to get them as right as I can, and I don't have anywhere near the art skills you have, you're one of the best artists I've seen but these stories you make just don't work in the context of the overall story, but I know you can do it, I know because the Bright Eyes tales is actually really good,Β Equestria Ninja Girls Minis: Blast to the Past was good too, Equestria BatGirls is a bit hit and miss sometimes but it's not terrible (the whole April been overly angry at Batgirl thing I hated witch is why I glad it was resolved quickly and why I hope the same can be done for Raph and Applejack been overly angry at Batman) in the end, I can only apologise for how I said this but I can't say it didn't need saying.
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 13:48:33 +0000 UTC]
Hey jebens1 can create any fanfic of both Equestrian Girls and TMNT 2012 because I loved his fanfics and you want him to stop it I love Rise of the Young Ninjas and I always have.
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 16:00:27 +0000 UTC]
Far as I know this is the first mention of it so that's a lie from you
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 16:08:57 +0000 UTC]
Hey everyone can make TMNT 2012MLP equestrian girls fanfics
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 16:30:23 +0000 UTC]
but not everyone can do it well
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 16:38:57 +0000 UTC]
I did created a fanfic about MLP/TMNT fanfic along with Mysticons
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Hasele In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 17:39:02 +0000 UTC]
Equestrian Ninja MysticonsHey guys now I figured out why TMNT 2012 Mysticons and MLP FIM have already ended and I figured that TMNTony Jebens1 and BozzerKazooers made a fantastic job on the Equestrian Ninjas but I think it's time to take matters into my own hands by adding Mysticons on this one.Β
Story
An unknown woman came to New York City after she took the bus to Manhattan where she saw four mutants and six girls were fighting Sala-Raptor Sharktooth Razor Beak and Killer Bee(who stole mutagen canisters for their new boss) and disappeared into the night and the next day she saw Twilight Sparkle hanging out with Leo and introduced herself as Zarya(who came into the Dimension X Portal to look for her sister) and they took her to the Turtles' Lair where she met Raph Donnie Mikey April Casey Keno Angel Carter Zach Caitlyn Collin Applejack Rainbow Dash Rarity Fluttershy and Sunset Shimmer and they got hit it off well until trouble starts brewing and this time Sala-Raptor Sharktooth Razor Beak and Kille
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 16:42:14 +0000 UTC]
but did you do it well
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 16:55:13 +0000 UTC]
Yes
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 17:03:30 +0000 UTC]
link it to me
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 17:39:39 +0000 UTC]
I already did
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 18:02:50 +0000 UTC]
this seems more like a opening scraped then a fanfic, it describes what's going to happen, not a story that's happening, maybe if it was an actual story it might be interesting but this is just hard for me to read
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 18:07:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh for the love of it is an actual story
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 18:18:31 +0000 UTC]
in that case it not very good
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 18:24:25 +0000 UTC]
Come on I put a lot of work in it the least you can do is to like it nicely
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 18:43:00 +0000 UTC]
I'm not a man of lies, this looked like it took you three hours, usually if I don't like a fic, I'll leave it ang get on with my life, but if someone askes for my opinion on it, I will say I don't like it, I see no reason to lie to you about it so I won't
here, read these two, their my TMNT 2003/2012 crossover chapter one, this took me four months and I've been fixing grammar mistakes here and there, if you like it, good, if you don't, also good, I don't mind
TMNT Turtles together and forever episode 1 part 1Turtles together and forever
Leonardo 2012
There's an old saying, βthe more things change, the more they stay the sameβ, they weren't wrong, me and my brothers have improved vastly since our fifteenth mutation day, we've became stronger, wiser and we've gained new friends and allies, yet still, we always find ourselves in the same place, fighting enemies we thought we finely got rid of, flying by the seat of our shells, and we always got each-others backs, and though I have a gut feeling we're going to in for a lot more then we're in now, I know we'll make it through.
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Turtle crossing
6 months after the 2012 finale
Leo sat in the dojo as he often did, meditating was one of his common pass times these days, normally he'd just empty his mind and let the world go by, but in the past two weeks he found his concentration difficult, there was a constant sense of dread hanging about and he could not determine why, after Bebop and Rocksteady left New York things seemed
TMNT Turtles together and forever episode 1 part 2The lair
Michelangelo just finished cleaning the whole of the lair as ordered, Splinter gave him a chair to rest on until the others come home, but when April announced that the others were coming it was as though he forgot he was tired and ran for the garage, April followed slower behind him wile Splinter prepared tea, in the garage, the Sewer-Slider returned first, entering through a tunnel opening into the main sewer and both Raph's jumped out βOkay, 'that' was sweet.β Raph said in excitement to his counterpart.
Raphael grinned βOnly the best way to travel for some actual butt kicking ninjas.β he held his fist out and the two bumped them to show respect.
Leonardo admired the sight βThis must be the quickest he's gotten along with anyone.β
Leo nodded βOurs too.β there was a truck sound coming in, the garaged door opened and the Hauler reverenced in, Donatello stepped out, the back doors open and young April and elder Casey help Mikey ou
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 18:44:31 +0000 UTC]
Meh it looks good to me
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 18:48:23 +0000 UTC]
did you read the whole thing?
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 18:49:47 +0000 UTC]
Well yh
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 18:51:57 +0000 UTC]
in two minutesΒ
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 19:03:08 +0000 UTC]
Yh can you just leave jebens1 and his fanfics alone then
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 19:15:11 +0000 UTC]
you can't have red them it two minutes so you're lying to me, and this isn't just jebens1 fic, it'sΒ DarkMagicianmon first and for most, when he made a mistake and people called him out on it, he apologised and went about fixing it, that's whatΒ jebens1 should do, that is what you should do, I just red the new Bright Eyes fic and it was good, you apparently had a hand in it but because you are lying to me I can's say what is youse
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 19:16:13 +0000 UTC]
Ok i red everything just leave me alone already
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Jisow777 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-09 20:05:40 +0000 UTC]
Excuse me, you butted in on me and jebens1, you take to me and now "I" should leave "YOU" alone, I don't think so bub, you started this, now suffer the consequencesΒ
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jebens1 In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-16 03:29:47 +0000 UTC]
BACK OFF!
He only butted in cause you were acting like a jerk about it!
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Hasele In reply to jebens1 [2020-02-16 09:19:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
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Hasele In reply to Jisow777 [2020-02-09 20:22:23 +0000 UTC]
Fine
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jebens1 In reply to Hasele [2020-02-16 03:23:45 +0000 UTC]
I don't like this guy either.
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Hasele In reply to jebens1 [2020-02-16 09:18:17 +0000 UTC]
I agree that Iβm on your side btw loving your MLP/TMNT pics
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AmethystMajesty25 [2020-02-09 02:51:52 +0000 UTC]
Another elite ninja of the Foot. Not surprised.
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TMNTony [2020-02-09 02:13:35 +0000 UTC]
Yeesh! Talk
About trolling
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DarthWrex-49 In reply to TMNTony [2020-02-09 02:36:23 +0000 UTC]
At this rate, all of Shredder's lieutenants will be with him.
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DarthWrex-49 In reply to TMNTony [2020-02-09 03:13:59 +0000 UTC]
I wonder if any of them were loyal to Karai.
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DarthWrex-49 In reply to TMNTony [2020-02-09 15:31:26 +0000 UTC]
Be nice not to kill one.
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DarthWrex-49 In reply to TMNTony [2020-02-09 16:10:55 +0000 UTC]
It'd be horrifying if Shredder has taken over the Underworld.
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DarthWrex-49 In reply to TMNTony [2020-02-09 17:25:34 +0000 UTC]
Let's hope that doesn't happen. On the other hand, that'd be a pretty cool story.
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