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Hello there, member from :iconprojectcomment: here!
Good Points:
- I like the poses you used for the canon pearls. It really suits well with the way they are. Yellow Pearl is like a snooty butler who is unwaveringly loyal to those of a higher position while Blue Pearl is shy and quiet.
- Oh gosh, I just like their expressions! Especially Yellow Pearl's smirk! She seems to be very grateful that she's serving under the great Yellow Diamond!
Improvements/Suggestions:
- Personally, I think it's an odd choice of surrounding the characters in black with a white outline. The black doesn't fit well the brighter colors on the rest of the piece. A simple white outline would be better.
- I think there should be more variety in the way the legs are positioned. All of them are crossed. After all, legs are obviously a huge part of drawing good poses. 
Hope this helps!
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well, the crossed legs are like one of the caracteristics of the pearls (pearl pose's) on the show and the official arts of S.U, i din't wanted to change that, i agree with the outline, at first looks fine but when i look again it looks weird
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Ah, I see. I watched a few episodes of Steven Universe so I admit I don't really know that much of the show. XP
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Hey, I'm here from ProjectComment and I wanna critique your drawing.
I don't watch that much stephen universe but from what I've seen, your style fits the show pretty closely. I love the use of color and the differing poses and personalities of the characters but there are a few things that you can improve on. One would be shading. Shading and lighting can really make a piece come to life and a good way to improve on it is to imagine a light source from any directions and draw the shadows accordingly. Another thing is the pose. They seem a bit stiff and awkward in places for most of the characters, especially the one on the left. Using references is a good way to nail natural poses. Their expressions could convey more emotion and a good amount of expression can be shown in the eyes and eyebrows as well as the mouth and stand. One last bit is their design. They look a bit too similar and that's probably from the similar heights, builds, and face. Don't be afraid to branch out more. Hope this helps.
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thanks, actually i don't like very much how this work end, when i was making it, i was kinda out of my zone
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Very Good job on keeping the characteristics from the show! (sense pink pearl isn't in the show yet cri)
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