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B2DaRice [2016-02-14 04:59:32 +0000 UTC]

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This is a great piece! I really like the hair flowing into the bottom of the picture from both characters. I also like the color choices made for this. They give a romantic, sensual vibe. I think the detail you've put into the hair is the co-star of the show along with the really nice details in the faces. Some really nice highlights in their eyes and on the noses (I especially like the character's face on the right).

One thing that immediately stands out to me is the collarbone of the the right character. It seems overly pronounced to my eye and is all one piece. The collarbone is actually two separate bones on each side of the chest plate. So it almost looks like a prosthetic of some kind. The left character's is also pronounced but in a way that makes it look like it could be a slight pronouncement due to her being a vampire or something. This may be the case for the right character too, but I feel like the bones still need to be separated.

Also, the left character's ear seems to be a bit too far back in the hair. At this angle, I believe that ear would be closer to the back of her head than where the jawbone meets the skull.

These being said, this is still a very successful piece I think! Nice smooth blending throughout with some really nice hair effects and highlights. I hope I am not being offensive! I just know I hate when someone says, "That nose doesn't look right." but then offers no reasons or specifics as to why or what could be changed. Great work overall!

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lDestiny [2016-02-13 13:00:07 +0000 UTC]

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This is very pretty looking piece! The hair is done especially well. I like your smooth painterly style. The choice of colors for the background and the way they merge in and out of the hair is a nice touch too.
Improve: follow through with Princess Bubblegums's skin tone. Her face is blended well and the slight purple adds depth to her features. But her neck and chest are lighter and the nice pinkish hue is missing. Based where the way light falls on Marceline, some of this light can be reflected on Princess Bubblegum, but not as bright. Just where Bubblegum's face is the lightest shade of pink (her cheek), this is how the rest of of the bright areas on her torso should look.
The heart shaped pose is very nice and the way the hair flows around them compliment the form and frames the composition flawlessly.
You have a very beautiful painting style. Keep up the great work!

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CaldoRosa [2017-04-10 07:06:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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zeetrip [2016-12-24 00:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, and thank you for the lama

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brytestar [2016-04-22 16:14:34 +0000 UTC]

omg i love this colors togheter 

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deadaccount-mount [2016-03-17 07:28:53 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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StickStickly1559 [2016-03-07 21:40:42 +0000 UTC]

I just have to ask one thing, can you feel the love tonight? 

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EmoCupcake713 [2016-03-03 11:37:55 +0000 UTC]

I loved it! I also ship them ^.^ 

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StarMuun [2016-02-26 23:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Its so awesome!!!

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eggsomniac [2016-02-15 03:05:37 +0000 UTC]

omg this came out so cute<3 love it!

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Comments4You [2016-02-14 12:26:18 +0000 UTC]

They look very seductive and beautiful at the same time. Your drawing skills are pretty awesome! ^^

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LeafPsychoSpirit [2016-02-13 13:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Adorable!!<3

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XallydrawsthingsX [2016-02-13 12:26:27 +0000 UTC]

this turned out so gooooood!

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lemagnificent [2016-02-13 00:18:56 +0000 UTC]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... could I say original, 
but looks amazing ^^

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Driku12 [2016-02-13 00:17:29 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh my! This is great! Amazing, I say! I love the colors.

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ppgrainbow [2016-02-12 23:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful! I really love how you did the character's hair!

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Sespar [2016-02-12 23:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Fucking sick mate

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