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JereduLevenin — Happily Never After

Published: 2007-03-20 13:07:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 10148; Favourites: 219; Downloads: 0
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Description "You weren't supposed to lose, Sora..."

What if Sora had refused to fight and defeat Riku in Hollow Bastion? I bet "Ansem" would have let him have control again just for the psychological torture.

Yes, I'm an evil fan.


Here's a one-shot to go with it:

“There’s no way you’re taking Kairi’s heart!!”

Sora shoved Riku’s keyblade away from him with the strength born of desperation. How could this all be happening? Ansem was supposed to be a good guy! And now Riku was…

“Ha!” Riku was suddenly THERE. Sora gasped and brought his keyblade up to block at the last second. He grunted as the force of the blow vibrated painfully up his arms. He had to protect Kairi from Ansem… but he couldn’t bring himself to hurt Riku, either. He schooled his expression into stubborn defiance. He would bring the REAL Riku out if it was the last thing he did. Though, the way things were looking now, it was pretty likely that it WOULD be the last thing he did… He dodged another blow. Riku was fast.

“Riku! I know you’re in there! You have to fight him! You wouldn’t hurt me… right?” You love me, right? That’s what you said. And I told you the same. You wouldn’t hurt me. You couldn’t hurt me. Sora desperately blocked as Riku unleashed a solid wall of offensive attacks.

Riku just laughed. He suddenly vanished. Sora looked around frantically, trying to spot the other boy.

“Behind you!” Sora spun around, bringing up his keyblade to block… a fraction of a second too late. He screamed as Riku’s blade bit into his arm, sending a fine crimson spray into the air. He dodged left and knocked Riku’s blade away from himself. Riku had been prepared for that, and spun his body with the blade, coming back around to draw another fine crimson line down Sora’s arm. The cut was shallow, but the force of the blow knocked Sora onto his back.

“Don’t move, and I’ll make this as painless as possible.”

Sora grunted and kicked out at Riku, aiming for the dripping blade in his hand. Riku smirked and sidestepped the move. He smirked and suddenly stomped down hard on Sora’s leg. Sora yelped in pain.

“I told you to hold still.”

Sora struggled, bringing up the other foot to try to get Riku off of him, but Riku jabbed his blade into the leg beneath his foot.

“Don’t make me hurt you more than I have to, Sora. It really isn’t doing you any good. I’m not enjoying it. You’re not enjoying it. Might as well cooperate, yes?”

Sora whimpered in confusion. Riku should have been able to shove this guy out of him. Riku was the strongest person he knew. Why had he let this guy take over?

Sora concentrated and summoned the keyblade to his hand. Riku blinked in surprise as Sora swung, knocking Riku’s legs out from under him. Sora got up and ran, as well as he could, to the other side of the little arena Riku had created. Riku smirked and picked up his blade. Sora used the brief respite to dig around in his pocket for a potion. Riku raised his blade.

“I learned a new trick, Sora.”

He threw his blade.
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Riku felt as if he were trapped behind glass walls as he watched his body being controlled like a puppet.

Sora! He tried to scream. Run, look out! Don’t worry about me!

He fought against the walls of his prison. They refused to give. He crumpled as he saw the look in Sora’s eyes… Fear. Betrayal. Confusion. And tears. Why, oh WHY wouldn’t Sora fight back?! Why wouldn’t he do anything but block?

Riku screamed as Ansem hurled the dark keyblade at Sora. Time slowed down. He felt a sudden surge of strength, and he gave the glass walls an almighty shove. They shattered. For a single instant, his eyes met with Sora’s as he reached out to try to do the impossible. He tried to stop the blade hurtling towards Sora. His hand closed around the hilt just as it buried itself in Sora’s chest. For a full ten seconds, he locked eyes with his lover, mute with horror. Sora’s troubled expression softened as he realized that he had succeeded. Riku was back to himself again. Riku finally let out a strangled sob. “Sora!! I-I didn-”

“R… Ri-ku…” Sora gurgled softly. “You’re… b-…b-…back. …Good…” He sighed as his eyes slid shut. He fell forward into Riku’s arms, keyblade falling to the ground and vanishing. Riku pulled the dark blade out of Sora’s ruined chest and tossed it to the ground.

“NO! Don’t leave me! SORA!!!” Riku screamed, falling to the ground and cradling Sora protectively. Sora shifted slightly, lungs rattling brokenly. Red bubbled up at the corner of his mouth. His hand clutched weakly at Riku’s shoulder.

“N-not… goin’… ‘nywhere.” Sora’s heart began to flutter weakly. It glowed, releasing the captive hearts. Sora’s own heart was too far injured to leave. “L-love… y…you.” Riku cradled Sora’s head to his chest, shaking uncontrollably. His tears began to fall unnoticed. “I know, Sora… I know. I love you too…” He moaned and choked back a sob. Sora tightened his grip on Riku. Sora gasped, or tried to as a wave of agony swept over him. He gurgled softly for a second, broken lungs rattling, then fell silent as he finally gave up on trying to breathe. It just hurt too much. Riku stroked his hair. Sora felt a numbness finally seep through him, and the pain stopped. His eyes slid half shut as his heartbeat slowed, then stopped. Sora smiled warmly for one instant, then his face slacked as the light in his eyes died. Riku let out a sob.

“S-Sora… You weren’t supposed to lose.”

He planted a chaste kiss on Sora’s cold, unresponsive lips, then slid those brilliant eyes shut. He crumpled around the body and let out a steady, despairing keen. His light… His light was gone. How could he escape the darkness without his Light? What hope did the worlds have now?

Riku wept.








Owari.
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Comments: 37

themsgothgirl [2014-02-02 10:54:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh goodness, my heart... This is so good it actually hurts :')

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Solar891star [2012-09-08 14:07:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh my God I'm Crying from the Inside out right now [link]

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ObsessedWithShiny [2012-08-21 11:20:03 +0000 UTC]

The picture goes with the one-shot perfectly.
It's beautifully written and very emotional. My inner fangirl is crying right now. Only reason I'm not physically crying is because my mum is in the room and would get worried
Very well done! I loved it, even though it was really sad (I'm not normally a tragedy fan ;w;)

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jonesey01 [2012-05-15 00:28:44 +0000 UTC]

The image you drew describes perfectly what i saw in my mind when i read the story. Great work!

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black-maple-tree [2012-05-03 03:12:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh my GOD. Not a Soriku fan... not even a yaoi fan... But I am CRYING right now. That one-shot was heart breaking and UGH I'm a sucker for tragedy. The drawing is amazing too. *sniffles* Great work.

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unleashedclub [2011-12-11 23:48:46 +0000 UTC]

i died on the inside

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FullMetalZeldacat [2011-08-26 18:53:42 +0000 UTC]

That's sad! I'm not into the yaoi stuff *Prepares shield* but the picture is beautifully done and the story's nicely written!

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SollinFaolan [2011-03-11 00:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Kairi: Oh My God. You Killed Sora!

Fangirls: You BASTARD!

*snicker snicker* now who's Riku gonna have wild sleepless nights with? the fangirls will never forgive him i tell ya!! (very touching picture. almost makes me wish i could see that as an animation. T^T i would cry my poor fangirly eyes out)

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Ginny112233 [2011-02-11 20:33:39 +0000 UTC]

You are Good

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spaz2damax16 [2010-09-15 02:20:13 +0000 UTC]

usually I don't like yaoi but this was just so horribly sad that I didn't even mind...poor Riku! Poor Sora! Even so, very well written story and a great picture as well!

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vampslyr [2010-04-16 07:20:43 +0000 UTC]

*Wibbles*

Shit dude, that's what Phoenix Down is for. I...I couldn't look away it was so compelling. So tragic. Thank you, sometimes the tragic 'what ifs' need a voice.

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Foye454 [2009-11-08 08:22:20 +0000 UTC]

This is such a wonderful piece of art, and the writing is good too.

Very sad though. Orz. ;D;

<333

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darkdra [2009-09-22 15:32:09 +0000 UTC]

I told myself I would never cry for these things, but...
lovely story and art...

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ainz-girl [2009-08-02 10:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful <3
And the story is absolutely lovely.

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interocativo [2009-06-08 19:59:00 +0000 UTC]

thos was AWESOM!!!!! can you make a colored version too?

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HinataNaruto4eva92 [2009-04-06 04:03:59 +0000 UTC]



I can't stop!



Well done-sniffle- I love the art and the story-sniffle-

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Minikimii [2009-01-19 00:47:27 +0000 UTC]

The art was expressive in itself, but the story that went along with it was beautiful. I love it.

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mishcafairytales [2008-10-12 10:15:15 +0000 UTC]

awww. Both the picture and the fan-fiction are so sad. This is just amazing!
I'm crying.

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Akayaoi [2008-10-06 23:25:06 +0000 UTC]

great jobe!!!!
no me importa si no entienedes ni una palabra de lo que escribo pero tu dibujo es una obra maestra
;__; i'm crying!!

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Midnights-Fate [2008-08-29 04:01:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow. That was really good. I loved the one-shot. It went really well with the picture. I think I almost cried. ._.

Great job on both! ^^

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otaku-love-08 [2008-07-03 21:21:32 +0000 UTC]

T-T how sad

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OathkeeperKeyblade [2008-03-31 18:03:23 +0000 UTC]

Aww, what a sad story!!! It fit well with the picture
I don't really care for yaoi but the story was reall good, I liked the detail you put into it

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unfadingxoblivion [2008-03-22 05:34:46 +0000 UTC]

I cried.

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Silver-Songbird [2007-07-01 01:44:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's actually a really great picture! You got the posing just right-very powerful. I almost want to cry.

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kuroseishin88 [2007-04-01 22:06:53 +0000 UTC]

.-. Wow. Great story and great picture. Amazing.

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Phoenix80 [2007-03-29 02:45:32 +0000 UTC]

I got one word for this story: ANGST!!!!

Loved it! You should post it up on Fanfiction.net!!

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JereduLevenin In reply to Phoenix80 [2007-03-29 05:16:38 +0000 UTC]

Actually, it IS posted, just under a different name. I changed it now, so further confusion may be avoided. For some reason, though, the fic has temporarily disappeared from ff.net. Not sure why. It should be back soon, though... I can always repost it.

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Phoenix80 In reply to JereduLevenin [2007-03-29 22:44:26 +0000 UTC]

yeah that website can be a pain in the butt sometimes...it does weird things and it only works when it actually wants too.

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JereduLevenin In reply to Phoenix80 [2007-03-29 05:11:24 +0000 UTC]

Huh... I thought I had....

I'll do that now!

Glad you like! Angst is my specialty!

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Phoenix80 In reply to JereduLevenin [2007-03-29 22:45:42 +0000 UTC]

Haha, drama and angst is my specialty! I just adore those two together!

But yes this was pretty angsty and very good!

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randombabe In reply to Phoenix80 [2007-07-11 19:17:48 +0000 UTC]

i write things lyk this, 2!!!! except no matter how hard i try, i just cant seem to write yaoi stories except insteed'a angst, i write drama and romance *romantic music plays while my eyes twinkle* ahhhhhhhhhhh
inuyasha: ehem can we plz get on with this????
me: o plz ur just obset cuz u kno u could never b gay so XP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
inuyasha: -.-'''''''''''''''''''''' i dont want to b gay..............
me: BUMMER 4 U!!!!!!!!!!!!

but neway, AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor sora........................*grants sora back his life* yay! now go make out with riku!!! DO IT!!! DOOOOOOO IIIIIIIIITTTTT!!!! *put riku and sora on strings and make them make out* ^^
kairi: how do u have the power to do this?
me: cuz i do. JUST LYK I CAN DO THIS!!!! *makes kairi and namine make out*
kairi: HAS IT EVER ACCURED 2 U THAT WE'RE THE SAME PERSON?!?!?!!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!
me: really? o...................WELL NOW UR NOT!!!!!!!!!!!! MAKE OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!11

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random-moogle [2007-03-28 04:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Awww, sad story...SORA!!!!...then again that never did happen, if it woudve Square enix would not be doing so well after this were to happen

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Conflicted-X [2007-03-21 18:03:45 +0000 UTC]

OoooooooOOOOOohhhh.... THE ANGST.

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Oni-Gil [2007-03-21 01:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Ohh! T.T How sad, poor Riku!!! (Ye gods, what am I saying? Poor Sora for being dead!)

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MimiruSeptimus [2007-03-20 22:48:46 +0000 UTC]

oooh..lovely. ^_^ great picture

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One-Sky-One-Destiny [2007-03-20 15:06:27 +0000 UTC]

that is such a lovely picture, well done

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Miscomunication In reply to One-Sky-One-Destiny [2009-09-23 09:46:15 +0000 UTC]

i agree
and the story that goes with it is great too

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