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jeremy3 — Quest for Apple Bloom part 9a

Published: 2014-08-13 15:45:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 19876; Favourites: 148; Downloads: 88
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part13: Quest for Apple Bloom part 13
part14: Quest for Apple Bloom part 14
part15: Quest for Apple Bloom part 15
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Comments: 53

therougerogue [2015-03-17 06:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Wait... Did Derpy just give the mail to Scoots?

- "Cutie Mark Crusaders Mail Deliverers!"

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Sturmlion1 [2015-03-16 17:30:45 +0000 UTC]

They live in town there whole lives and not know where the hospital is? And there the CMC's?

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ishidan01 [2015-03-01 21:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Derpy on dust off.  Needs some appropriate theme music.  Try this:  www.youtube.com/watch?v=PlkxcC…

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Twylite-Sparkle [2015-02-27 13:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Hurry!

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ahmadsyar [2015-02-27 08:13:29 +0000 UTC]

Quick! to the poke center!

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fotland42 [2015-02-27 06:26:08 +0000 UTC]

Come on, guys. It's that big building where you go after every third crusade. Surely you remember it?

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Knewred In reply to fotland42 [2015-03-01 04:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Not after "Cutie Mark Crusaders Freefallers".

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Tyrant-Swain In reply to Knewred [2015-03-17 12:09:33 +0000 UTC]

That wasn't their "third" crusade, probably only second.

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FralLeman [2015-02-27 05:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Scoot looks so cute with that hat!  I miss Telegram Delivery Scoots...

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iamthejam [2015-02-26 22:43:00 +0000 UTC]

They've lived in Ponyville all their lives and they've never seen the hospital?

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FralLeman In reply to iamthejam [2015-02-27 05:02:06 +0000 UTC]

You'd think they'd be familiar with it, considering all the dangerous things they do.

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Starsword [2014-12-11 20:46:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh no! I hope Applebloom makes it. She's far too adorable to die.  

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YesImDeadpool [2014-09-10 15:26:02 +0000 UTC]

At least it's looking better for Apple Bloom.

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jeremy3 In reply to YesImDeadpool [2014-09-10 17:06:46 +0000 UTC]

She was so un lucky With her friend, Somepony absolutely had to save her. 

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Kovu96 In reply to jeremy3 [2014-09-12 21:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Apparently Derpy is far safer to be around than Scoot and Sweetie Belle. *glances up into the sky, expecting a literally heavy shower of certain musical items*

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jeremy3 In reply to Kovu96 [2014-09-12 22:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Or it's better to be With Derpy in the sky, than With Sweety who want to burry everery pony.
I don't Know if i prefer be burry alive, or a piano shower. 

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Kovu96 In reply to jeremy3 [2014-09-12 22:20:55 +0000 UTC]

hmmm......maybe a Piano shower cause then we don't have to hunt elephants if we want some ivory keys for a new piano. Well that and one might be lucky if not all the pianos are Grand pianos.

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YesImDeadpool In reply to jeremy3 [2014-09-10 20:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Sorry Apple Bloom, your friends are idiots. XD

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MidnightFire1222 [2014-08-17 17:36:07 +0000 UTC]

I think you drew Derpy's wings a bit too far back in the first panel, but overall the page is really good. O can't wait to see what happens next.

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jeremy3 In reply to MidnightFire1222 [2014-08-17 17:49:41 +0000 UTC]

It's because i forget it in the sketch, and i don't like to draw directly on GIMP whithout a sketch scanned.  
The part 10 is planed for tomorow , The next one, after September 15th, because of my holidays. 

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MidnightFire1222 In reply to jeremy3 [2014-08-17 17:53:24 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay. That makes sense. Can't wait to see what's coming.

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Mister-Saugrenu [2014-08-14 18:05:12 +0000 UTC]

Pourquoi n'ai-je pas repéré cela plus tôt ? C'est rudement bien.

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jeremy3 In reply to Mister-Saugrenu [2014-08-14 19:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Bas, mieux vaut tard que jamais, au moins ça vous a permis de lire plusieurs parties a la suite.  merci pour les faves et le watch. 

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Mister-Saugrenu In reply to jeremy3 [2014-08-14 20:24:54 +0000 UTC]

Bon déjà, tu peux me tutoyer, tu sais. On est sur Internet ici, et sur DeviantArt qui plus est, pas à l'ambassade du Royaume-Uni.

A la limite, la seule réserve que j'aurais pour l'instant, c'est qu'introduire un élément perturbateur dans une histoire qui repose sur "un des personnages est malade", ça fait vraiment TRES cliché dans le domaine des fanfictions (que ce soit pour MLP ou d'autres séries). Mais bon, je n'en ferais pas vraiment un critère pour l'instant, car l'histoire vient seulement de débuter et on ne sait pas encore vraiment ce que tu vas en faire. Après tout, de très bonnes histoires peuvent être faites en démarrant avec un personnage malade. Je pense par exemple à une fanfic de MLP que j'aime beaucoup : www.fimfiction.net/story/18285…

Et sinon, ton dessin est VRAIMENT très agréable à regarder et à lire, donc continue comme ça. Ce n'est pas souvent qu'on a des comics sympas dans le monde du fan labor.

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jeremy3 In reply to Mister-Saugrenu [2014-08-15 05:31:04 +0000 UTC]

Par contre j'ai bien peur que cela reste cliché du début jusqu'à la fin. J'ai conscience de cette limite mais comme je la fais aussi pour me faire plaisir... j'assume.

En parlant de dessin agréable, et dans ton cas ça va même au delà, je suis vraiment impatient de découvrir ton fan comic. 

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Mister-Saugrenu In reply to jeremy3 [2014-08-15 23:35:49 +0000 UTC]

Ah ben ça tombe bien, je viens justement de poster les premières pages de mon comic!

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ArcCahlon [2014-08-14 11:17:47 +0000 UTC]

proof that derpy isn't dumb but prefers to act silly for the laughs. 

also for sweetie, don't ask just follow the flying pony ya dolt. 

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jeremy3 In reply to ArcCahlon [2014-08-14 14:38:46 +0000 UTC]

i think that too, For her, one time ago for the funny things and an other one to be serious.

If she follows the flying pony she risks to cross the houses which blocks her the path.  

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ArcCahlon In reply to jeremy3 [2014-08-14 22:46:44 +0000 UTC]

hmm maybe sweetie can just use her cooking skills and burn down the houses on her way to the hospita? hehe

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jeremy3 In reply to ArcCahlon [2014-08-15 05:50:36 +0000 UTC]

I hope she can stop before burning down the hospital. 

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TheDrSmiley [2014-08-14 11:16:08 +0000 UTC]

xD sweetie is way to dumb xDD

love it!

Derpy for the Rescue!

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jeremy3 In reply to TheDrSmiley [2014-08-14 14:33:54 +0000 UTC]

Yes for my next comic, i think, i can make her a little less dumb. 

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TheDrSmiley In reply to jeremy3 [2014-08-15 17:28:38 +0000 UTC]

;D but it wouldn't be as funny more ( but i think you will make it funny anyway ^^ )

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gamex2112 [2014-08-14 09:09:12 +0000 UTC]

super le comic 

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jeremy3 In reply to gamex2112 [2014-08-14 14:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Merci, c'est un peu plus sérieux que ce que j'immaginais au départ, mais les gens on l'air d'apprécier. 

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karkovice1 [2014-08-14 02:48:45 +0000 UTC]

I just have one question: Where IS the hospital?

....... I can't even...

At least Derpy gave her her hat.

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jeremy3 In reply to karkovice1 [2014-08-14 14:27:41 +0000 UTC]

It's a good epilogue for this part. You make me laught, thank you.

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karkovice1 In reply to jeremy3 [2014-08-15 00:38:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. *smiles and bows*

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DarthWill3 [2014-08-13 23:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Way to go, Derpy! For once, you're doing something useful!

Why is Scoot wearing Derpy's hat?

Oh, Sweetie Belle! How could you forget?

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jeremy3 In reply to DarthWill3 [2014-08-14 14:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Because i believe it was cute.

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DarthWill3 In reply to jeremy3 [2014-08-14 14:36:41 +0000 UTC]

Of course.

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betoran [2014-08-13 23:03:54 +0000 UTC]

DERPY TO THE RESCUE  !!! 

P.S. Omg great question xD "where is the hospital" ahahhahahahahahahahah

P.S.S. Derpy is ma hero  and appleboom is gonna make it

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jeremy3 In reply to betoran [2014-08-14 14:25:15 +0000 UTC]

My hero too, and favorite background pony. 

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Kiddan [2014-08-13 20:57:50 +0000 UTC]

OMP.. come Derpy you must hurry

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jeremy3 In reply to Kiddan [2014-08-14 14:23:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem she run... oups no, she fly to the rescue. 

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Kiddan In reply to jeremy3 [2014-08-14 14:49:18 +0000 UTC]

YAY

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MidnightFire1222 [2014-08-13 20:09:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm interested to see where this goes, and you have a very neat art style. You've gotten a watcher out of me.

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jeremy3 In reply to MidnightFire1222 [2014-08-13 20:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, i have eleven parts for finish this story, and seven are already sketched, see you later for next part. 

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MidnightFire1222 In reply to jeremy3 [2014-08-13 20:34:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! And ooo, i can't wait! I mean, I can of course; not gonna rush you. But you know what I mean! ^_^

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KennyMcCormix [2014-08-13 17:06:52 +0000 UTC]

Mailmare to the rescue!

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