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Published: 2016-05-08 00:57:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 9435; Favourites: 332; Downloads: 109
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The first human colonists who reached the planet Arathea found a world poor in metals but rich in life. Its creatures so closely resembled some that lived – or had lived – on Earth they were most likely introduced, though the agents responsible, together with their motivations, have disappeared without a trace.

The colonists fared poorly at first. Generations in deep space had weakened them physically and they also lacked resistance to the diseases of their new world. Their numbers declined and their culture regressed to an almost Neolithic state. Their situation only improved when they rediscovered the lost art of domesticating animals to help with hunting, transport and agriculture. Their numbers gradually increased and in time they spread across the globe.

The second great revolution came when ceramic technology provided close equivalents, if not perfect substitutes, for rare metals such as iron. Larger population centres rapidly industrialised and this process reinforced itself through mass-produced machines and tools.

The third great revolution came through computing and genetics. Arathea had never witnessed the mass extinctions of old Earth due to its smaller human populations with more pragmatic attitudes. Its natural ecosystems provided a wealth of raw material while its domestic animals were further altered and enhanced. Cybernetic constructs combined the best attributes of livestock and machinery which they gradually replaced.

Diamaru were a natural choice for cybernetic alteration. These flightless predatory birds had long been used for transportation; they were easily tamed when hatched from eggs which had been removed from their nests as they identified with other bipeds, including human handlers. Third revolution scientists also found their embryos much easier to extract and modify than those of placental mammals. Cybernetic diamaru are larger, stronger, and much more controllable than their ancient ancestors. Their heads are usually fitted with systems that augment – or replace – their riders’ senses and light rapid-firing armament for defence against outlaws and predators. Diamaru scout ahead of larger, slower-moving constructs that support Arathean trade, screening them from ambushes and supplying their handlers with game. 

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Comments: 38

cryptoscuffle [2019-04-11 14:19:34 +0000 UTC]

Each illustration I click on has a rich backstory. As a comicbook fan, this gallery is an amazing find!

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MasterofGaburincho [2018-09-04 20:48:11 +0000 UTC]

The image alone looks like a more extreme (Burtonesque?) version of Dino Riders. Makes me imagine one of the alien races puts the armor on a Mononykus (Or a Diatryma) while exploring a grey wasteland of what used to be a lush green environment, now gone because of the war between the Valorians and the Rulons.
At least that's what I thought anyway   

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Celestinavigator [2016-12-16 18:13:37 +0000 UTC]

Gives odd vibe of how Arzak's (one of Moebius fame) world or perhaps even universe could  began. Origins were humble and often violent. But future eventually became better and brighter.

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NotUsedAnymore [2016-09-16 18:33:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm really digging the world building in your description. And creature has a pretty cool design.

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MethusulaComics [2016-08-18 14:19:06 +0000 UTC]

awesome work.

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KINGOOB [2016-05-29 04:40:04 +0000 UTC]

Very cool!

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Zooguy123 [2016-05-17 23:11:16 +0000 UTC]

inspired by terror birds?

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jflaxman In reply to Zooguy123 [2016-05-17 23:24:46 +0000 UTC]

It is!

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Zooguy123 In reply to jflaxman [2016-05-18 00:06:44 +0000 UTC]

awesome!

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Soyom [2016-05-15 23:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Would love to see an ancient Diamaru for comparison.

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Rexlare [2016-05-15 21:29:07 +0000 UTC]

It's like the Taun Taun from hell.

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simonpark81 [2016-05-15 17:01:54 +0000 UTC]

great work, the description is very well thought out!

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Grendel21778 [2016-05-12 20:50:51 +0000 UTC]

A very nice piece of work. Thumbs up!

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bear48 [2016-05-12 18:05:36 +0000 UTC]

far freaking out 

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warhammer2546 [2016-05-09 19:04:15 +0000 UTC]

The Great Diamaru War of 30XX, otherwise called "Bird War Two."

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jflaxman In reply to warhammer2546 [2016-05-11 02:44:23 +0000 UTC]

Haha!

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TickleMeHoHo [2016-05-09 03:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Makes me wonder how long it took for these technological revolutions to take place... decades? Centuries?

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jflaxman In reply to TickleMeHoHo [2016-05-09 04:32:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm thinking millenia!

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FollowinTheBlackBird [2016-05-09 03:00:09 +0000 UTC]

I wish I had your imagination. I fear I'm losing mine.

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jflaxman In reply to FollowinTheBlackBird [2016-05-12 01:40:17 +0000 UTC]

If it's any comfort, I don't feel as imaginative as I did many years ago, but I've picked up more general knowledge and experience and these are good foundations to build on. I'll be much more worried when I start losing my memory!

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FollowinTheBlackBird In reply to jflaxman [2016-05-12 17:12:31 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean. My Mom began to lose her short term memory about six years before she died. She acted like a child by the time she was ready to go and remembered things from when she was a child. Too many nights she would cry herself to sleep begging God to take her.

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StalinGrad6 [2016-05-08 20:58:52 +0000 UTC]

a fantastic pic yet again

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jflaxman In reply to StalinGrad6 [2016-05-09 04:32:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Dick-Plant [2016-05-08 20:06:39 +0000 UTC]

What a dark, gritty and scary universe you've got there!

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Viergacht [2016-05-08 17:20:22 +0000 UTC]

fascinating! Although I feel  a bit sorry for the bird.

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jflaxman In reply to Viergacht [2016-05-09 04:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. After reading a lot of New Weird fiction I thought I'd try something a bit different, though more scientific musing crept into the backstory and the end result's less fantastic than what I'd originally planned. I gave a lot more thought to diamaru biology and the effects it could have on a humanoid culture, which might develop very differently to one that used horses for similar roles, even before the Third Revolution. Two major differences include differently proportioned buildings, roads and infrastructure, and a more stratified society as meat-eating "steeds" would cost more to keep, though cheaper plant-eating alternatives might also be available. I could have added much more exposition but thought I'd keep the story brief. Every paragraph I've written could still provide a starting point for an entire sci fi novel!

More ethically minded readers will be either comforted or appalled by the fact I've envisioned Third Revolution cyborgs as largely organic but mindless creations that act as larger, stronger bodies while their human riders act as brains. This was partly inspired by the impressions Spanish horsemen made on horseless Native American cultures that initially mistook the horses and riders as composite beings.

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Viergacht In reply to jflaxman [2016-05-10 08:49:22 +0000 UTC]

That's what I like about your fiction that seperates it from most of the Bizarro stuff I read - it actual makes logical, functional sense while still being incredibly imaginative and strange. I would TOTALLY read that novel. Between you and Dan Bensen and his planet of robot dragons, I need to get a time machine and somehow get to the future in which these things are written! 

And yes, that soothes my worry a bit.  

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jflaxman In reply to Viergacht [2016-05-11 00:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again! I can't help with a time machine, but I can send you a longer story if you've got the time to read it. Like the last it reads more like magic realism, without any magic, if that makes sense.

Dan Bensen's robot dragons sound fun so I'll do my best to track them down!

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Viergacht In reply to jflaxman [2016-05-11 10:30:34 +0000 UTC]

ALWAYS HAVE TIME!!!!! 

Dan's blog is here, you'd probably get a kick out of a lot of his stuff: www.thekingdomsofevil.com/

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jflaxman In reply to Viergacht [2016-05-11 22:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the lead! I've just sent you another story. 

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dlambeaut [2016-05-08 07:58:45 +0000 UTC]

Cool design and concept background.

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ElSqiubbonator [2016-05-08 05:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Its a cy-bird! Sorry, couldn't resist.

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hunterN05 [2016-05-08 05:47:38 +0000 UTC]

What a curious beast you've created.

Nice work man, it seems to be lacking in defenses and offenses, unless that bit on the end is some sort of weapon that shoots.
Nicely done man.

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GottaGoFeast [2016-05-08 02:46:05 +0000 UTC]

I wonder if a Diamaru could be equipped with melee and long range weapons to defend themselves. Their riders can surely use their own guns if they are transporting very important goods or messages, but I assume Diamaru are not cheap to make, so leaving them defenseless is not a good idea. What do you imagine such weapons would look like?

Also, how did you come up with their name?

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jflaxman In reply to GottaGoFeast [2016-05-09 04:30:53 +0000 UTC]

You've made some good points, and the riders would definitely benefit from secondary defensive weapons. I'm tempted to add some now, and designing them could be interesting if they're based on ceramic and plastic tech. My first rough drawings had a much more primitive look but didn't quite come together as the diamaru's long neck seemed an obvious hindrance to a rider armed with a lance or bow. Head-mounted sensors and guns struck a better balance between bizarre and practical and I've gone for the same with the guns themselves: they're meant to be twin smoothbores that fire saboted flechettes using the Gast Gun principle, which might provide a good balance of low recoil/high rate of fire.

I got the name "diamaru" from combining Diatryma, an extinct species, with emu, another giant flightless bird that still lives in Australia. 

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GottaGoFeast In reply to jflaxman [2016-05-10 01:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the long neck would impede the rider's vision somewhat. And I didn't know about this Gast Gun Principle. It seems like the most practical solution.

Two more questions:

1) Are there a lot of chasms, pits and such on this planet? If so, the Diamaru might need some implants on their legs that improve their jumping. Alternatively, if someone has to go through a territory like that, they use a flying steed built with the same sort of technology as the Diamaru.

2) Can the steed be equipped with force field generators if there is a chance that the rider might be attacked with directed energy weapons?

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jflaxman In reply to GottaGoFeast [2016-05-11 03:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your interest, I owe you some answers! I figured the diamaru would be pretty mobile due to their long stride and high ground clearance, but there's room for flying cyborgs as well. This project was all about getting away from purely mechanical transport.

I haven't given any thought to force fields or energy weapons, but they'd tie in well with the softer sci fi look and feel of this piece.

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GottaGoFeast In reply to jflaxman [2016-05-11 21:32:29 +0000 UTC]

No need to hurry. I don't mind you taking your time to answer my other comments on your drawings.

Do you think there could more semi-mechanical animals built for more civilian purposes? Pets and teaching tools in schools, maybe?

As for the force fields and energy weapons, I think they shouldn't be too colorful. It would probably clash with the grey that makes up most of the drawing.

Have I ever mentioned you're one of my favorite Deviant-artists? You're in my top 15. Not only do you have a very distinct style, you have a sense humor I appreciate and same fondness for world-building as me.

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