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Published: 2006-12-15 10:32:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 2107; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 22
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Chiko in the hallway of the ship. Still don't have a name for it... bad at naming things.Wouldn't know it's supposed to be a sci-fi series from everything I draw, but it is!
I'll design things more so from now on, I swearrzzz.
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Great work! This toon combines humour and tension nicely. Her hands are reveal her nervousness beautifully and the shadow in the hall behind her hints at danger. But the extreme foreshortening of the pose and the almost beseaching look in her eyes (kind of like a baby seal) struck me as calculatedly funny. Good luck with this character!
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cool concept. i like the colors and the perspective. nice job
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thanks man! I need tow ork on my pieces a bit more.
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After looking at it i would have to agree with everyone else that the feet are too small, but i also think that the left eye is a little off. i'm not sure what it is but it just looks a little awry.
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I think so too, I think it came out looking better in the sketch, but the face is off in the colored version. I need to work on my perspective.
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thanks mate 
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great perspective and use of colors..
I like it!
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thank you for the comment!
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perspectives cool, i like how the light effects her hair coloring like it should. nice style youve got.
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thanks for the comment man!
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I think the angle, corridor perspective, colour choices, and lighting are excellent. I like the line style also, and the canvas texture gets my vote. I see only one other person has mentioned anything similar, but to me the feet are too small - I know the whole thing has a weird perspective (which is great), but the perspective on the person is a bit too extreme to fit into the rest comfortably. Overall it's very well done though, very original
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thanks! Yeah I want to get alot more practice in doing extremly dynamic poses.
Thanks for the comment and critique!
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thanks! i debated for a while whether to add them or not.
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wow i like the angle and use of colours..great job
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the hair is great, but i think the legs need a bit of work. the look too....small, even from that view, but the overall picture is really good
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i think i made them overly small to exaggerate the angle. But they might need work, thanks!
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i like this angle. a lot. i think the composition is kind of, blah. it is heavy on the top, if the character was moved towards the bottom a few centimeters so the blue hair and blue doorway were further apart, it would make it balanced. the colors are great. other than that. i dont know anything else.
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yeah I think in the next dynamic piece I do, I'm going to work on composition alot more.
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Wow. Beautiful colors, lovely shading, and the view is definitely worth noting...... I especially adore the watercolor-ish feel this picture reflects... Really nicely done!
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thanks! I really like colors, drab things make me depressed.
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Wow, really nice angle and awesome shading. Great work!
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thanks!
hahahah lol @your sig
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xD You'r welcome and thanks!
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thanks man!
i appreciate it
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wow! thats an awsome perpective!!! the eyes look a little strange though....
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thanks! yeah the sketch looked better now that i think about it..
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wow amazing espically the orange background and the pose
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yes! i love lots of warm colors!
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Wow, awesome job. I love your style and great perspective too.
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