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Published: 2007-03-05 09:34:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1319; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 19
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ok, so they're not really in a hall, they're most like sitting on a hull, but I like that show hehehe.I need to crack out some more artwork of my characters! Gah, draw draw draaaaw!
Here is Chiko (blue hair), Jien (black hair), Haika (red hair), and Reno (asleep with goggles) relaxing on the outside hull of the Isis. The Isis is the ship they use to travel in space and spend the majority of the story in.
They're now parked in a desert, where it's hot outside so mostly everyone is stripped down.
Any critiques on coloring and anatomy are most appreciated!
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Ha ha, I love that show. Especially that skit with the doctor, and the time her gave a scar shaped like a swastika. Ha ha.
Nice colours in this. I like the contrast between the orange and the blue.
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Spectacularly done 
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Very neat. Reno's feet seem a bit static, perhaps they could look a bit more natural?
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hmm well, the surface they're are sitting on is curving downwards, and i wanted his feet to be in a resting position :/ but that probably isn't clear enough with the shading/ thanks for the critique
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Composition is really smooth here. Liking the anatomy of the characters, as well as the coloring. You did a wonderful job on this.
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thanks man 
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You're welcome, and you'll get your dynamic poses.
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I saw the title for this and almost immediately thought of that Canadian comedy troupe from a few years ago. I see that you've developed a serious bit of interest in the full body jumpsuit. Not bad, not bad at all. I really wish I could offer up something less vague a bit of feedback than, the image for whatever reason strikes me as being somewhat flat, but that's the luck of the draw. I suppose it's more an issue I have with the shading then the line art, it just doesn't feel like there's a consistent presence of depth to the image.
Anyway, I hope that was somewhat helpful. Keep the work coming.
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hehe yeah I love jumpsuits ^^ I have a real...thing for them! Plus everyone gets one who needs to breathe in space wooo!
Thanks for the critique, i guess the bg is a bit flat at times :/
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I don't know enough about anatomy to offer any critique, it looks great to me..took me about 30 seconds to figure out why Jien's leg was so weird looking until I realized it was his suit and not his leg :0 the poses are nice and casual lookin.
the simple coloring scheme works well and the purple shadows are awesome(I can see the influence from Bengal
another suggestion for depth would be to add a strip of shadow at the point where the panels are screwed together.
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awesome! thanks! I shall definitly try that with the shadows!
Yes I love Bengal alot, I really wasn't trying to be like her in this piece, but I guess the influence shows! (Which I don't mind that much! heh)
Sorry that it isn't clear enought hat that is his suit, not his leg heheh, he's doing the same thing Chiko is , wearing half the suit down. Full bodysuits can get really hot @_@
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