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JohnFlaherty — The Harder You Fall

Published: 2014-05-23 00:20:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 643; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 6
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Description Something simple, inspired by the Positive Ponies idea by Ambris
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Sketch-Shepherd [2014-05-23 00:37:15 +0000 UTC]

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The first thing that got my attention here is the text. The saying feels like some maxime that I would hear from a book or a wise old man. In an easier way, the motto is what I like the most about this piece. It's very motivational and gives me a really positive feeling, and it's probably something I could also relate to in life.

Scootaloo was definitely the best choice of character to use for something like this. The 3D Scootaloo doesn't look too bad, but I think using an SFM/GMOD model feels kind of out of place with just a flat dark background. There are also areas where bits of the mane and tail pop out of the dark awkwardly.

A 2D vector of Scootaloo would probably have fit better with the solid black color, or if you preferred to stick with 3D models, I would recommend adding some light and shadows to the back to make it fit in more with the context of the 3D pony.

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JohnFlaherty In reply to Sketch-Shepherd [2014-05-23 00:41:18 +0000 UTC]

To be fair, it was a quick job. And looking at it now, I think I overdid with the brightness/contrast setting on Photoshop.

I tried my hand at vectoring a couple of times, and all I did was a huge mess. And yes, the black background wasn't the best idea, but I feared a white BG would hurt the eyes.

Thanks for the feedback. ^^

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Sketch-Shepherd In reply to JohnFlaherty [2014-05-23 00:44:53 +0000 UTC]

I think I would have gone for the black background too.

Well if you can't vector Scootaloo yourself, there's always a lot of DA users who make free-to-use vectors from the show.

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Redbull254 [2014-06-30 10:34:41 +0000 UTC]

No.

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ElwisFromPoland [2014-05-24 20:35:28 +0000 UTC]

That is, actually, some positive thinking.

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GarrettheGarret [2014-05-23 06:38:50 +0000 UTC]

Unlike RD and AJ in your other comic, the harder your fall, the more painful it looks! xD

Great work!

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JohnFlaherty In reply to GarrettheGarret [2014-05-24 04:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thanks. ^^

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Ambris [2014-05-23 05:30:58 +0000 UTC]

Awesome~

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JohnFlaherty In reply to Ambris [2014-05-24 04:46:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^^

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WallyReloaded [2014-05-23 03:58:45 +0000 UTC]

The harder I fall, the higher I risk death.

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JohnFlaherty In reply to WallyReloaded [2014-05-24 04:46:04 +0000 UTC]

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CaptnBlitz In reply to WallyReloaded [2014-05-23 10:28:15 +0000 UTC]

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The-Pyromanecer [2014-05-23 00:26:01 +0000 UTC]

The feels meme can't make this any sadder.

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JohnFlaherty In reply to The-Pyromanecer [2014-05-24 04:45:48 +0000 UTC]

Well, I was going for something positive and motivational.

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The-Pyromanecer In reply to JohnFlaherty [2014-05-24 05:54:19 +0000 UTC]

Meh this road has two lanes.

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JohnFlaherty In reply to The-Pyromanecer [2014-05-24 11:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Heh, true that.

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