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Published: 2011-09-08 19:27:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 853; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Wordsmith, Issue OneThis is one of the painted pages from the upcoming Iron Age Productions' mini-series Wordsmith. Pencils, inks and colours, me.
In which we discover our hero is a slobby git.
Alan Po discovers speaking his poetry has dark and powerful effects on the world around him. By Santana and Wyke. Coming late fall from Iron Age Productions.
Wordsmith is Ā©2011 Iron Age Productions. Writer Jon Santana. Artist Jonathan Wyke
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hi, the lineart is pretty nice and well done, but i must say the coloring is still too flat for me, not enough depth, the shadow area needs darker colors.
On the drawing itself, i would put many more line strokes here and there to punch more detail and help the image depth too.
Object drawing is okay, proportion is very nice.
I must say this is a very good style and can be well accepted in the market.
After all my saying, maybe this is just your style, if so then carry on with confidence! This is marketable already IMHO.
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Thanks for taking the time to Critique. I thought you concentrated on perhaps style elements that you liked in particular, rather than any constructive criticism - the addition of superfluous extra lines for instance.
I do appreciate that you took the time, as I said, but I feel that your critique was perhaps unfair.
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i don't think i was concentrating on style elements that i like... it's a matter of balance... but you're the judge
goodluck then
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Nice cool bird eye view and style.
Add more "garbage details" though. Everything is too clean....it's a mess, but clean. If you eat a pizza there should be more crumbs everwhere. just my opinion.
Good work!
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Thanks.
You may well have a point about the mess - I'll go back in I think...
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It's obvious deliberately, and commented on often in the story...
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Cheers, and not Eddie, but could almost be
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