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Juin-Soleil — something real ...

Published: 2009-05-04 13:09:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1433; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 50
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Description I haven’t decided yet
If I really want to go on
Haven’t raised the hand
When you told me to be strong

Well ...
I’m looking for something real
Something in this hell I’ll be able to feel

I found you staring blankly
Straight through me, you look empty
I don't know what you hoped to find
But now it might become right

Your body defrosted, your look becomes warm
you seem to smile when falling into my arms
Time stops, the universe folded into a quiet place
Where two wayfarers lay, dreaming face to face

Well ...
I’ve found something that's real
Something in this hell I’m able to feel

I woke, searching for your hand to hold
And grabbed the void, only the sun shines gold
Where did you go? How can I find?
Things vanished; a desert is all that was left behind

A shadow, my heart seems to burst
Made many mistakes, every one of them hurts
I don't want you to sorrow, but there's only your shadow
Or am I this blurry shadow? I really don't know

Well ...
I’ve lost something that's real
Something in this hell I was able to feel

I haven’t decided yet
If I really want to go on
Drifting through grey fog
Could I ever have been strong?

...

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Special thanks to dazzle-stock ([link] ) and decay-stock ([link] ) for uploading these both beautiful pictures i mixed into one for my visual poetry! thanks a lot

and a little greeting to the lost piece of my heart ...
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Comments: 9

yassmeen-mohmoud22 [2017-07-21 22:47:26 +0000 UTC]

I love it , both the picture and the poem .They reflect reality

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Juin-Soleil In reply to yassmeen-mohmoud22 [2017-09-06 10:54:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot

i wrote this a long time ago o.o ... thank you for remembering me ... always wanted to do a song with this lyrics

have a nice day!

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yassmeen-mohmoud22 In reply to Juin-Soleil [2017-09-08 07:50:52 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome 🤗

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Lewellyn-Weence [2009-07-18 21:00:59 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful...
so real

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Juin-Soleil In reply to Lewellyn-Weence [2009-07-19 01:49:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Quaniel [2009-05-07 07:33:25 +0000 UTC]

lovely shadows

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Juin-Soleil In reply to Quaniel [2009-05-07 07:37:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you! : )

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asukaevaunit02 [2009-05-04 13:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, both the poem and visuals. They compliment each other very well. The poem is very strong and meaningful, and the visuals further empathisize it. Great Work!

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Juin-Soleil In reply to asukaevaunit02 [2009-05-04 15:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! great that you like it

if i write .. i just write down my feelings .. put them into their own costume ... but i never tought that my english is good enough to do something like this, so your comment makes me really happy

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