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Description When I was thinking of an ending for Cora I knew she was going to die because of five's story. I couldn't change that. So I thought of two non-canon endings
or what if endings. I worked on the bad ending first then the good ending.

Bad ending: This is the most messed up ending I could think of, since again it's near Halloween. I looked up some Refs for this, I got the idea of Cora losing it from
a question from the Q and A thing. I'll leave a link to that at the bottom of the thing. Here's why Cora goes crazy:
After losing Tup Cora is again devastated and starts noticing something about her life, It seems every time she gets close to anyone they die. So she gets extremely
depressed over they fact. Eventually she distants herself from everyone and if they try to console her she tells them to leave her alone. Over the next few months
they stop trying with her and just ignore her unless she is ordered to go on a mission. She goes weeks without talking with anyone or leaving her room. She later overhears stuff about Her brother surviving the citadel and being rescued by a special commando unit and Captain Rex. She's thrilled about the news and asks the people who were talking about it where he is. They ignore her completely because most of the people around her have given up on her. But she doesn't care. she finds out that
Echo went with The Bad Batch and tracks them down to Corusant and spots them walking in the 79s. She walks in front of them and sees Echo. She hugs Echo and says
stuff like "I'm so glad your alive big brother!" But Echo doesn't know her at all due to brain damage in this ending. He pushes her off of him and he says "Get off I don't have a sister!" Cora stands there shocked at his words. tears fall down her face turns from shocked to Rage. She pulls out her lightsabers and tries to kill Echo.
But Hunter jumps in front and grabs her wrist and pins her down she tries to pull out her other lightsaber. but Hunter grabs it before she can and hands it to Wrecker.
She screams at Hunter calling him a "monster" and a "freak". Hunter replies saying "I'm not the one who tried to kill her supposed Brother." They call the police and she
gets arrested for attempted murder. She is thrown in a cell and kept there for months. during that time she slowly loses her mind. Then when Order 66 rolls around,
she escaped prison and heads to the Jedi Temple to get Revenge. She is attacked by clones but she kills them with no regret. By now she has fully Snapped and turned to the dark Side.
She doesn't just kill clone she kills Jedi too. She finally is struck down by Darth Vader. And that Ends the Bad ending.
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I really didn't enjoy having a ending like this. But I did feel it needed to be done. I don't like the idea of Cora turning to the Dark side of all. But that's why we have a good ending so it
evens out. But at least I feel at peace now that I don't have to think about now.        This is truly a sad ending. I hope I don't have to write something like this again....   Yes I almost cried.

Here's the good ending: daiseymae.deviantart.com/art/C…
The true ending will be coming soon....   


daiseymae.deviantart.com/journ…

the one thing I want to know from you guys did I go too far? If I did I will be happy 
to scrap the end or dial it down a lot. So please let me know. 
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Comments: 15

RC-5968Frank [2016-12-18 19:59:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow...that'd be horrible. TBH, I'm more concerned for the clones, no offense. They are the only ones I care about the most in Star Wars. Like I care about a lot of characters, but when they go up against clones, I take the clones side every time. But still, what a meaningless, pitiful, and nightmarish end to a good character...

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JuliaTheSpaceLady In reply to RC-5968Frank [2016-12-18 20:29:47 +0000 UTC]

I like the clones a lot too. :3

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RC-5968Frank In reply to JuliaTheSpaceLady [2016-12-19 03:06:58 +0000 UTC]

yay

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sharkimi [2016-10-10 09:32:52 +0000 UTC]

Scary and sad ending.. Makes me feel almost cry qnq 
Very good work with the blood! ❤

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JuliaTheSpaceLady In reply to sharkimi [2016-10-10 09:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry it's not Canon so it doesn't happen. :3

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sharkimi In reply to JuliaTheSpaceLady [2016-10-10 10:59:55 +0000 UTC]

Im glad ouo

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AlieaArt [2016-10-07 03:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, what a scary ending...O.O

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JuliaTheSpaceLady In reply to AlieaArt [2016-10-07 03:39:43 +0000 UTC]

I know right? I thought of the worse thing that could ever happen to Cora.
Heck, my main Reference was Yandere Simulator. I listened to the insane track while I was drawing it.
It was a hard thing to do..... 

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AlieaArt In reply to JuliaTheSpaceLady [2016-10-07 03:45:24 +0000 UTC]

To have your back from the dead brother disown you like that is hard, even if it wasn't intentional.
(That is one crazy sound track...)  

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JuliaTheSpaceLady In reply to AlieaArt [2016-10-07 04:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh...now that I'm reading it, It does sound awful.....It's a good thing that I didn't make this the canon ending.
The Canon ending would not play out like this at all, In fact I think it would be a little happier then this one at least everyone around her would
still be on her side. And this would also take place before they found Echo. Speaking of that soundtrack I'll be deleting that from my playlist very soon...
So the very very worst doesn't happen to Cora thank goodness!  

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lordhadrian [2016-10-06 17:01:43 +0000 UTC]

I know how it goes.  My OC, Conradin, also dies in Order 66.  Wrote the story brfore TCW came to TV......

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JuliaTheSpaceLady In reply to lordhadrian [2016-10-07 03:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Really? do you still have the story on DA?
Also yeah it's hard to kill off your own character but one thing is for sure, I'm not done with Cora nor Revan anytime soon!   

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lordhadrian In reply to JuliaTheSpaceLady [2016-10-07 08:05:33 +0000 UTC]

It's in my gallery under "Saga Stories 1-8"

Here is story #8, which is my version of "Revenge of the Sith"

lordhadrian.deviantart.com/gal…

enjoy

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JuliaTheSpaceLady In reply to lordhadrian [2016-10-08 02:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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lordhadrian In reply to JuliaTheSpaceLady [2016-10-08 19:12:44 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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